
Imprisoned Immortal, I Am the Master
囚仙,在上师尊
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- 268k Words
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- Cultivation
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- Male
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- Fantasy Cultivation
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- 9mo ago
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Shennong is here. Chapters 40 and 41 of the novel let me see the shadows of various masters in the past.
I am Shennong, and this is the unimaginable top-quality fairy grass. The foreshadowing on the front line, the foreshadowing chapter by chapter, a huge emotional explosion amidst countless mixed plots. The author's long-term narrative ability, ability to control the direction of the plot, ability to shape characters, ability to recycle foreshadowing, and ability to control logic are all performing an ultimate show of skill in all aspects. There is no use of suppression at all, and the emotional arousal is completely displayed through brushwork. And it is promoted in a progressive manner. Only reading chapters 40 and 41, I can only vaguely feel that this is a powerful and exciting chapter. But the more readers read the previous chapters, the more they will realize how enjoyable Chapters 40 and 41 are, and how the previous chapters make the logic of this chapter reasonable. The previous article profoundly depicts Wen Daishen, a powerful and mysterious villain, in various details, and in chapters 40 and 41, Wen Daishen was deflated in a timely manner without suppressing Wen Daishen's character image, which still does not damage Wen Daishen's character as a villain. There is no intelligence reduction of the villain, no character deliberately bragging about the protagonist, and even all the plots are reasonable. There are so many wonderful places, let's give some examples one by one: 1. In Chapter 6 In the narration that appears in the chapter, Yun Muyi, Jing Wangyou, and Xuanjizi's foreshadowing is recycled, which shows that the author has a complete outline and carefully wrote the text as a foreshadowing. Moreover, Jing Wangyou's "unknown elixir" and Xuanjizi's talk about his "old bones" are all in line with the logic of the later chapters, making people look forward to his appearance in the future. Behind the seemingly cool text, it implies the advancement and foreshadowing of the subsequent plots. 2. Use Shuangwen's current emotions to quickly shape the characters' personalities. When the plot is pushed to the climax step by step, it is most suitable to quickly incorporate some complicated character plot settings into the plot, so that readers will not feel tired at all while reading. 3. Reasonable plot preparation. Jian Wuya is very powerful, but the reason why he is so powerful comes from the behavior of the male protagonist in Chapter 12. Even the actions of the male protagonist in Chapter 12 are part of the plot of Xiaoshuang, which is very impressive. The male protagonist always unintentionally pretends to be a shocking contest. This sense of unintentionality always hints at how terrifying and powerful Su Qinglian will be when she appears next. The female protagonist is a disciple who has been carefully educated by the male protagonist. To be honest, I can accept it when the female protagonist reaches the twenty-first level in one go. 4. Writing style, writing style, there is nothing more to say, writing style can sublimate all plots. 5. Ease of expression. The author has actually been trying to control his emotions and not to over-explode. He allowed the heroine to defy the odds and reach the 19th level under all reasonable circumstances. Chapter 14 of the previous article very closely depicts the legend of the 16th level. To be honest, the story of the 16th level and the character of Yun Muyi are so big and shocking that they can be highlighted. 19 How strong are the levels? If Jianshan has a hundred levels in total, and others can reach level nine, and the protagonist reaches level 100 in one go, it will actually make him feel uncomfortable because of the huge sense of fragmentation. 6. To add to the excitement of the previous article, Shen reached the 21st level in Chapter 14. Readers who have read the previous article will have a deeper impression of the previous plot when reading this chapter. 7. The logic is thorough. Before the male protagonist reaches the 21st level, the author quotes classics and uses mathematical theories hidden in ancient literature to explain the rationality of the male protagonist. In fact, the male protagonist is a kind of trick, but the male protagonist's ability to use tricks is based on direct deductions of 1,200 years. The reader will not strongly feel the unfairness of the male protagonist's behavior, but will feel that it is deserved. Jian Wuya's state of mind was also explained in the previous plot of the male protagonist's "meeting" with Jian Wuya. All aspects of the plot are always very reasonable. 8 Character creation, Wen Daishen, Su Qinglian, Shen Qingxuan, Jian Wuya and even Yun Canglan who just appeared have created different characters and played their respective roles very well in these two chapters. No, the advantages cannot be overstated. For those who have followed him from the beginning to Chapter 41, it is hard to imagine how happy he is. In short, it is a top-grade fairy grass.
Comment objectively. The pace is fast but not chaotic, the plots are many but not complicated, and the ability to control the story is very strong. All in all, worth watching.
Come on, work hard to update, leave a comment, it means that we are supporting you, don't look at the data problem, there will be no traffic if you don't sign a contract with Qidian's new account, come on!
It's a great book. To be honest, there are so many great people at the beginning, but it's not easy to find a work that suits my taste! !
I'm so nervous reading the chapters updated tonight. Help, what are you doing? Shen Qingxuan, why do you still keep your body in there? Tonic, ah, ah, ah, ah, if you die in there to save them, they will be hopeless. Can you learn from the monkeys and move the rescuers? I'm sorry. The author's description of the crisis is really strong.
I clicked on a few chapters and read them, and they seemed pretty good. What do you think of the article overall? Is it worth it?
At first I thought Shen Qingxuan was a supermodel, but then I saw that Su Qinglian was also a numerical monster. Now I realize that both of them are supermodel monsters, which is too shady, but I like to watch this kind of thing.
The male protagonist, breakthrough, cool! The heroine, breakthrough, cool! The hero and heroine are together, invincible and cool! I'll put it on the collection shelf first. I'll come back in a few days and take a look at the situation.
People say that the heroes of this world are like the crucian carp crossing the river. There are many powerful Internet writers, so we should not be afraid. Pawn your life to your ideals, use coffee to forge today's sword, burn it to ashes, and create a miracle
I am a person who refuses to admit defeat and has terrifying willpower. It is exactly 6:14 in the morning on November 6th. I have ordered some coffee and am already sitting in front of the computer. The novel has just been updated to Chapter 20 so far, and the frequency of updating 10,000 words per day has lasted for 5 days. However, due to the limitations of the idea before, even if I coded for 19 hours a day, I could only update a little over 10,000 words at most. Most of the time was spent revising the text and revising the outline. The outline of what I am going to write today is as complete as it gets, and I want to challenge myself. Starting from 6:016 in the morning now, I have been thinking intensively about code words until the evening. See where my limits are and how long I can last in prime condition. And absolutely no hydrology. Open! QQ group 730131733 (This post has become the author's personal record post, please do not reply too much) (On average, 14 hours a day are related to the novel I am writing, revising the manuscript and revising the outline. Although the outline has been written in advance, it does not prevent me from continuing to add plots and inspirations) (So don't call me a daily author, call me a 14-hour author)
Don't call me the author of 10,000 a day, call me the author of 14 hours a day
On average, I spend 14 hours a day on the novel I am writing, revising the manuscript, revising the outline, and quickly accumulating inspiration to fill in the storyline.
How is this kind of thing written? Author: It's just talent
No, where did this come from? Is there such a hidden fairy grass in such a remote place?
This is the first novel I have read this year and I can't tell whether it is a male or female novel. Shen Qingxuan likes Su Qinglian, and Su Qinglian likes Shen Qingxuan. Is this the unity of the three religions? Collected books.
New readers may not understand. Let me explain to you, what is the equivalent of this plot of about 70 chapters? It is equivalent to the author using dozens of chapters of foreshadowing and foreshadowing to let Han Li in the foundation-building period of the Mortal Cultivation of Immortals solo kill the ancestors of time, ancient or present.
Strong foreshadowing, strong writing power, strong logic, strong perseverance, strong protagonist, strong villain, strong supporting characters, strong author
I wish my cat's new book a hit~
Give me a piece of foam~
Let me give you an analogy: around chapter 70, you are a junior high school student who failed to hand in your math homework. The punishment you faced at school was that the United Nations sent heavy firepower troops to attack you, and went all out with the attitude that they would rather kill by mistake than let go. But you, you have been prepared to face everything in the future since kindergarten, and through unimaginable careful planning and forbearance, you counter-killed the United Nations and overturned the world structure.
Author, you know, "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Standing at thirty: It means that you have to update thirty chapters every week to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. No confusion at forty: Only by updating forty chapters every week can we continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every week, you are your destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and fluent: That is, when you can update 60 chapters every week, everyone including readers will hear what you say will be fluent. At the age of seventy, do what you want without going beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters every week, you can do whatever you want! Update quickly!!!
Why is there no traffic for this book? Shouldn't it? The current readers seem to be attracted by word of mouth.
Ahhhh, jelly grass, ahhhhh! I had a hard time looking for you! (Crawling in darkness, twisting and twitching, crying with joy) I can't continue reading, I have to bookmark it first and save it.
This is actually an article written on the day when the daily update was 20,000.
The glimmer of ice crystal flowers circulated around them, and their soft luster spread across the blades of the two swords, making the rune patterns more clear. The tremors of Xiao Suojian gradually subsided, but suddenly there was an inexplicable feeling of powerlessness, and his voice was so soft that it seemed to blend into the ice mist: "It turns out that someone as strong as the ancient demon is just a chess piece on someone else's chessboard, and anyone can move on it." Shen Qing Xuan heard the words, his fingertips lightly brushed the hilt of Xiao Suo's sword, and his eyes swept across the ice mark where Liu Lao died not far away. His tone was calm but with warmth: "Don't be so pessimistic. With his cultivation, even if he is a chess piece, he has chosen his own path - maybe the so-called 'manipulated' back In the end, there is also something he is willing to rush for. " "It's just that the positions are contradictory and the momentum is the same, so there is no room for change." Su Qinglian held the Lingshuang sword, the tip of the sword touched the frozen soil, and her voice was filled with the determination unique to a cultivator. "The greatest kindness in the world of cultivation is never indecisiveness. The blade of the sword must not be stagnant, and the soul must be cut off with one strike, and the sword must not be delayed and left bound to the suffering of the mortal world, so as to avoid the suffering of his spiritual power backlash and his soul being destroyed." Shen Qingxuan heard this and nodded slowly. He raised his hand to straighten Su Qinglian's hair that was messed up by the ice crystal fragments. His movements were gentle as between master and disciple, but his tone was full of approval: "You can see through this layer, much more transparently than many monks who are addicted to 'women's benevolence'. The road to cultivation is inherently dangerous every step of the way. If you are facing an enemy, If a person hesitates, he will not only put himself in danger, but also make the other party suffer more." "Such simplicity is a sign of respect for the 'Tao'." Su Qinglian looked at the ice edges condensed on the cliff in the distance - the ice edges seemed to still have traces of the spiritual power of the people in black before they fell. Those people had their own secrets, some wanted to seize the treasure, or some wanted to silence them. Until their death, they did not know that they were just discarded by the people behind the scenes. They were not even qualified to be remembered. Their various predecessors finally turned into a few faint traces in the ice cave for thousands of years. Shen Qingxuan seemed to see through her thoughts and softly chanted: The road is never gentle, and the benevolent heart has a hidden edge to cut through the root of the mystery. One blow ends the worldly affairs, and does not teach the spiritual veins to receive thousands of marks. The road to this world is long and full of obstacles, but forgiveness never hesitates. Jian Luofeng put an end to the old grudge, and the soul of Bujiao fell into Weiyang. The sound of poetry rippled softly in the ice cave, and the cold wind brought in the snowflakes, intertwining with the glimmer of ice crystal flowers. Xiao Suojian and Lingshuang Sword buzzed quietly, seeming to respond to this sigh about choice and fate. If those monks who were buried in the secret realm had known that they were just pawns, what choices would they have made? The answer is ultimately buried in the eternal cold. The above is the original text, there may be typos. There are also 34 chapters updated late last night, which are incredible.
In a hidden corner, an unknown evil cult article is working secretly and quietly rising.
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What does it mean for Qing Leng Xianzun to transform into an urban tauren with yellow-haired muscular bodybuilder and use a hypnosis app to perform... On the Taoist couple who loves him deeply? (It's not the plot you imagine, but it's actually more outrageous)
Really awesome
Whenever I think Yue Mao Mao is going to hold back a big one, Yue Mao Mao will hold back a bunch of big things. This foreshadowing and this writing style make you sure to make money by investing in it 🤓
Have a cow? Wrong! Damn it's pure love! ! ! ! ! ! Wow, it's still top-notch pure love! ! !
The top evil cultivator in pure love literature, and a "clean stream" in new generation literature. But the core plot of this book is still cultivating immortality?
Why did you just throw the healing potion at me? This is not the case in my world. You should give me the weakness potion first, and then feed me the golden apples. Then when I transform back, I will show you my ultra-low fracture price products. Why did you just throw the healing potion at me?
You beat the author. I was like a big wild dog on the roadside. When I saw a brown thing, I ran over excitedly, thinking it was chocolate. When I took a bite, I found it was chocolate. I foamed at the mouth and twitched, and died in the sweetness that was not mine.
Children, run away, this author is poisonous. Why didn't you run? That's good, as long as you can see through it, we will be of the same mind from now on.