I'm in Konoha, and the Opening Entry Is a Mess.

It's not impossible to have secondary settings, but if you haven't even finished portraying the character of the protagonist, there are a lot of secondary settings that are not the protagonist. Isn't it a bit problematic?

The preface does not match the subtitles, and the AI ​​​​writing is not so lazy, right?

I couldn't see anything after looking at it for a long time, the content was sparse.

There are too many gibberish explanations, so annoying! There is too little plot advancement.

This is a new book and not a hype book, right? Then why do old books have errors due to insufficient information? Sarutobi Hiruzen's eldest son is called Sarutobi Shinnosuke... Uchiha Kagami Sarutobi and Hiruzen have become Hokages, and their son has gone to a ninja school. He is still alive... Kagami is 25 years old! Some original works are good, such as Orochimaru's Kusanagi... But the one above is a bit...🙄

Noshi-ryu Naruto fanfic, it's so easy to get into trouble when watching it

Adding random settings and forces, there are several forces from the Land of Fire that pose a threat to the Hokage Village, but there is no mention of them in the Naruto anime. In chapters 18 and 19, several ninjutsu are very practical but Naruto does not exist. It might be interesting for the plot, but it doesn't make any sense. It's just for the sake of editing.

Can you write it in a more popular way? I'm a bit tired from reading it. I feel like the whole article is just stories hidden in the materials.

What is written here? There's a lot of stuff here and there, and there's not even an outline.

To be honest, the plot and background of the main character were described in the beginning and it was okay, but then suddenly I started to write about it. When I was a child, I recognized Orochimaru as a woman, and then I couldn't stand it anymore.

Too much nonsense, just water, trash

The preface does not match the postscript, and there is no coherence or logic at all. Stop it when it's useless

I worked very hard, and the second hypothesis was okay, and I could barely accept the logic, but it got harder and harder later on. . .