Cultivation of Immortality in Two Realms Begins with the Wordless Heavenly Book

Although there are flaws, please give it a try.

Sitting on two worlds, Dique Yunshu, with the method and ability, I can make a 💩-like start.

The eldest princess? Is it a dog-licking article?

The three altars are not taken randomly. The three altars of Haihui have three altars, the three altars of heaven, earth and water, and they are also related to military power. You have so many soldiers. It is impossible to fight and just rush up with weapons. That is too low.

For people who are several decades old, when they go to a strange place, they will accept whatever they say. It feels like a college student. Anyone who has lived alone in society for ten or twenty years will not trust anyone.

Let me tell you my thoughts. The protagonist was cheated twice in the past and was a bit vicious, but the author came back to his senses later on. As soon as the protagonist landed on the ground, he was discovered by the powerful and plotted. He was filled with tribulation eyes and his eyes were blinded by the tribulation energy. I believe that you have also seen the first cause of all worlds, which means that there is no benefit in just experiencing the tribulation, and the great luck that should have been intercepted. One more thing, I feel that the author is too good at spelling. The setting of the immortal industry, the history of the Tang Dynasty, the Sixteen States of Yanyun, and the Nine-Rank Zongzheng System are simply a good book. To summarize, I can read it. I hope the author can grasp it and not collapse. Final personal remarks: Write down all the powerful emperors of the past dynasties and make a big fight 😆

You haven't even left the novice village yet, and you're already fighting the ultimate BOSS. . . What do you think? . . .

It feels like the writing is a bit facialistic. The villains are all greedy and hedonistic, while the decent characters are just like immortals, without any evil thoughts.

Start with a little girl 🙂

After major changes, I made some places look better. As for the intellectual behavior in the early stage, I wrote it deliberately. There was originally an explanation later, but now it is not easy to make it smooth, so I can only try my best to make it smoother. Thank you all book friends for your support. Now the author is asking for follow-up reading, and please brothers not to keep books. It is really easy to die if you keep books now.

The writing is good, but the character of the protagonist and the pace of the story are too fast, which makes it feel a bit weird.

If there are any more advanced Taoist fruits, I would also like to invite book friends to provide suggestions. Of course, it is best to write them in detail.

Give the author a heads up! Being arrested during the Qi training period to fill up the tribulation eyes is a bit forced, especially the plot that requires the male protagonist to go through the tribulation. The plot of the system is arranged in front of the readers. The plot of the male protagonist being calculated is too sloppy. It is better to have the male protagonist experience the catastrophe of life and death after the calculation, and then reverse the calculation of the results, instead of making a bunch of calculations. The plot is abrupt and the readers cannot understand what is written. The road is laid out too much, and the plot of two hundred chapters is probably uncontrollable. I could have written it slowly, maybe it was an external writer, but the pace is too fast, and a few characters have not yet appeared, and the whole world has unfolded. It's enough to overwhelm the protagonist. Lian Qi Qi is faced with the calculations of some big men with a golden elixir or above. It would be strange if your writing method doesn't collapse. When the big boss starts, you have to rationalize the protagonist's experience without making the big boss look mentally retarded. Therefore, after being plotted, the plot becomes fragmented.

There are too many explanations and descriptions about the exercises, even two whole chapters. The skills are not the story, nor is the practice and upgrading. The struggle with people is the story, and the pen and ink should be used to describe the interaction between the characters. Kung Fu is just a tool for the background of the story and the fight between the characters. It should be explained as little as possible and it should be explained as little as possible.

It was okay after reading the introduction, but after reading the comments in the book circle, I lost the desire to try it out! Not see!

Internal investment has passed, and the 50,000-word contract has been agreed upon with the editor. Brothers can invest and earn some coins.

The description of spiritual practice is very good, with a classical flavor, but it has already been involved in an eternal catastrophe just at the beginning. The protagonist is like a plaything in the palm of his hand. Everything about the protagonist has a sense of destiny. He has a treasure and a golden finger at the beginning, and there is a way out at any time. Now the feeling of excitement has diminished a little bit.

It's about to be tested. New book reading is very important for the distribution of traffic packages. I promise to update 4,000 per day. This is the author's first book and I will definitely keep writing it. Brothers, if you have recommendation votes or monthly votes, you can vote. Thank you brothers.

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Because the data is not good, I can't even get full attendance. The author is planning a new book. This book will not be discontinued, but there will be fewer updates. Please treat it as a free and fun book. Thank you very much to the big guys who cast monthly votes and recommendation votes. The book will be updated all the time, so big guys just treat it as a free book. I'm sorry to the book friends who have always supported me. If you want to scold me, just scold me from behind. Sorry.

It feels weird. Can't it be written according to the foundation building, purple mansion, and golden elixir?

Collect nine surnames. Except for those that have already appeared in the article, the others can be changed according to suggestions. There are also Dao Fruits controlled by the nine surnames. In my setting, every Yiguantian family has at least one Dao Fruit.