The Liver Comes Out and All Heavens Run Rampant

The new writers at Qidian always make me dazzled. They always put a little ingenuity created by their own amazing wisdom into the very old routines, and successfully drive away the readers. They are really talents. You have neither writing skills nor a good enough innovative structure, so you choose to follow some old routines, but you also want to be rebellious in some weird places and show your personal color.

After slipping away, the dream girl came out and knew it was time to give up.

Firstly, fighting is not fun, secondly, it is not foreshadowing, and thirdly, there is no profit to be made. What is the point of writing about being beaten? Are you secretly showing off your unique hobby? Don't create a character design of a genius heroine. As long as you don't write a single heroine, any conquerable female character will only provide some interesting spices later. In front of the cheating fan protagonist, they are just a foil to be taken away.

I was so stupid by the latest plot that I took an ordinary person to the base camp of the force that caused the world's disaster. What was this? The protagonist can survive a round of artillery bombardment from the opposite side, but can she survive? What does it mean to carry a burden?

The Japanese in Academic Apocalypse are all right-wingers. They don't have any good people, so they might as well go to the country to save people.

As soon as it was put on the shelves, the monsters came to the real world, and they really deserved to be attacked.

When I saw that there was no plot advancement in Chapter 20, I was so anxious to write a confusing dream battle to release the heroine.

The writing is so complex. I traveled to the Stone Age and wrote about a dream about learning Chinese martial arts to improve myself. What exactly was I going to write about?

What is the core of your writing? It's just a mess. The main thing is whether the novel is good or not. The main thing is the plot. Do you understand?

The latest 6 chapters are unstoppable and can't be watched

Obviously, the writing was pretty good before it was put on the shelves, but it didn't feel right to arrange a fusion world of Academy Apocalypse and Resident Evil later on. As we all know, the easiest way to get into trouble with unlimited quantities is to brush the split world. Either the protagonist is too weak to gain points, Or he succeeds in gaining points, but his combat power is inflated, and the author's outline cannot hold him back. The most stupid thing is that he succeeds in gaining points but loses his combat power. The protagonist goes from being a house buster to a street buster after racking up hundreds of thousands of points? That's what I thought, until I saw the protagonist achieve self-breakthrough in the battle between Saba and the author's enhanced version of Yujiro Noma, and finally realized what kind of martial arts master he was: This is because the author wants to blur the combat power in the infinite flow. A set of self-created systems, which blurs the protagonist's strength improvement curve and uses high-level adjectives to describe the protagonist's high level. Usually, the protagonist is reduced from actually taking part in the plot, and the supporting role is restored to the original plot. After a long time, the protagonist who has been hidden for several chapters is allowed to show his face to keep readers interested in reading. If you can't suppress the expansion of combat power, then let the protagonist follow the combat power system that only the author knows. When Shenyin needs it, he can use whatever combat power he wants. This way, he can write about some low-level worlds. Cat, guess what my combat power is, guess whether I have made progress in these worlds, a lot of space is devoted to the original plot and supporting characters. The key is that you only go to these worlds once, and there are almost no secondary appearances for those supporting characters, so you can almost guess which worlds the protagonist will go to next. Low martial arts worlds that are popular and easy to write cannot go to high martial arts worlds, because the protagonist's combat power is vague, and if he does not express himself, he will be criticized by readers. Why don't you just switch to it or combine it. Abandoned

There is nothing to force the protagonist to become stronger quickly. He said that he would be stubborn at the beginning, but on the third day he took on the savior mission. There is a proficiency system and I didn't even start learning anything. I read some Tai Chi, prepared some information and then went to Stone Age. Is it necessary? It's okay even if the liver has lost its skills for a month or two

The few worlds you can wear at the beginning and the ripple opening are a bit unable to catch people like me. To be honest, the ideas are there and the strength is there, but maybe they are not for people like me? Moreover, the literary youth has already begun to show its signs, and there is no detailed strategy.

In the first world, I think the writing was okay, but not after returning. The protagonist's system, in addition to the time travel function and the mission function, added the battle function in the heavens, the system mall function, the space backpack and the points exchange function, and the function of erasing the mission world and bringing back the intelligence of the items (I don't know why, but it was put in the space Don't remind me at the time, remind me when I come back), and it seems that a chat group function has been added. After that, among them, the travel function can be used in all worlds, cloud battles, can be used in all worlds, exchange items, or can be used in all worlds, chat group, or all worlds. The design of this golden finger is not only complicated, but the functions are also a bit repetitive. The worlds involved now include the second dimension, martial arts novels, fantasy novels, movies and TV shows, all of them are available. The girl who is the killer seems to be original, so complicated. As for combat power and world level, in the first world, the protagonist obtained alien technology, met Tang Zichen, learned the breathing method and national martial arts, and was already considered a bit extraordinary. At this moment, if you touch the world of Shi Hao and Superman, cause and effect will occur... Then you, the protagonist, can reach the sky in one step. Isn't the system completely open? If you don't reach the sky in one step at this moment, it will be a bit like suppressing the combat power. Isn't there anything in the lower world that the protagonist can use? Yes, but the author didn't write it. In the high-level world, the protagonist comes into contact without exploding combat power, which creates a feeling of driving high and going low. And this kind of thing can be written step by step and in one direction. The author has written it in multiple ways. Maybe the main plot behind it should be a bit scattered. The author's writing is too divergent

The things Pig's Feet learns are all about learning one thing here and then another here and there. What's the use of it? It's better to learn the same thing and then dig into the follow-up. If you learn ripples, you really only learn ripples. If you learn Chinese martial arts, you only learn Chinese martial arts. The follow-up of these things is not developed at all.

I feel that the choice of the plot in the real world is unpleasant. All events and all destruction are caused by the Lord. How do you solve this negative emotion? For me, this is how I feel. Originally, nothing happened in the world peace, but after the readers or the foundation, various crises came. This is the state of your main world, and this is the state in the eyes of the master. If The world you set up at the beginning is full of danger, and no one in the world will resent it, because this world is inherently dangerous, and all crises are not caused by football. But now your situation is originally peaceful. After football obtained the golden seed, all kinds of dangers have come, which proves that this thing has been brought in since childhood, which is the difference between a protagonist being a savior and a protagonist being a disaster star.

What anime will you write about? Spell Attack, Kimetsu no Yaiba, Full-time Hunter, Dragon Maid, Jobless Reincarnation, Reincarnated Slime, Shield Yong, Shen Yong, Earth Mistake, JOJO, Violet, Zero, Noragami, God Killer, Seven Sin, game life, battle, Kamen Rider, Pokémon, Inuyasha, Naruto, One Piece, Bleach, OVERLORD, Sword Art Online, Buried Frilian, Doraemon, Sentai, Demon Card Girl Sakura, Problem Child, Black Clover, Seraph of the End, Magic Forbidden, Yu-Gi-Oh, Labyrinth Rice, Ultraman, Fate, Nano Core, Shadow Power, Spy Play House, Saiki Kusuo's Disaster, Welcome to the Classroom of Supremacy of Strength, Tutor, EVA, Charlotte, Tokyo Ghoul, Shokaku no Sakai, To the Immortal You, Witch's Journey, School Apocalypse! Academy City, Fantasy World Uncle, Fictional Mystery, Danganronpa, Bungou Stray Dogs, The Hero Story of the Fallen Knight, Everyday Life, Animal Rhapsody, Guilty Crown, Unknown Flower Name, The Invisible Girl, Cell at Work, The Prince of Tennis, Fantasy Front, Dragon Clan, Persona, Natsume's Book of Friends, the American TV series "Heroes" , Fake Love, Chinese Little Boss, Another World Diner, Kuroko's Basketball, Black Butler, Girls' Last Journey, The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya, Steins; Gate, Macross, Rurouni Kenshin, The Grandson of the Slicker, Scarlet Bullet's Aria, Demon King Brave, Shakugan Shana, Iron Armored Treasure, Chuunibyou Also Fall in Love, Light Sound Girl, Under One Person, Under Sakamoto, Kino's Journey, Spirit Cage, Douluo, Dou Po, Stealing Stars in September, Nezha Series, Fox Demon Matchmaker, Three-Body Problem, Luo Xiaohei's War Diary, Star Travels, Super Beast Arms, Chinese Boy, Wu Liuqi, Young Song Xing, Myth, Legend of Sword and Fairy, White Snake, Qin Shi Mingyue, Monster List, Legend of the Seven Heroes of Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit, Wu Gengji, Once Upon a Time there was a Spirit Sword Mountain, Super Seminary, The Supreme Being, Lord of Mysteries, Go Boy, Magic Sword Life and Death Chess, Nano Core, Calabash Baby, Kuiba, Armored Warrior, Magic Soldier, Dragon Nest, Lotus Lantern, Seven Fairies of Happy Land, Zhu Bajie Series, Romance of the Three Kingdoms

Doesn't the protagonist grow up? He has always had a diaosi mentality.

Shi Jiyuan, Kanpan Technology, saves people, and tells Qiankong that they are not the only ones.

I wrote about survival in the wild earlier, but I felt like I just left it there without reading any little knowledge. .

Is this author Japanese? Why do you always watch cartoons all day long?

What about the protagonist? None of the protagonists' names have appeared in your recent chapters, right?

Why not share Lu Guan's experience and let yourself feel comfortable first 😁😁😁

The new book has just started, and I know that readers will want to save it and have already signed the contract, so please, just stay on the latest chapter on the last page of the book for a few seconds every day and read more. Reading now is really important for newcomers. Kneel down and beg! ! ! Also, if you have any comments, you can leave them here. The author will read them frequently.

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20241006224559712","UserId":456065157}The author is also oral?

When you see "Dou Po" in the introduction, you will know what kind of novel it is. I won't read it for now and leave it to you☝️😋

Yes, I hope to continue. As long as I continue, I will keep watching.

The plot after being put on the shelves has a strong sense of AI