
Lovers in the Folds of Time
时间褶皱里的恋人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 446k Words
- Subgenre
- Eerie Mystery
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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99Chapters
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Man, I think the story can still be told clearly, so I won't comment on the writing style. But it always feels like something just jumped out of nowhere, and it should have appeared logically, which is fine, but it still feels a bit stiff. There is no trend in the first two pages and then all of a sudden a story point/character is reached on the next page. I am also a senior suspense/sci-fi reader and was attracted by the introduction. But as I was swiping through it, I felt like I didn't know where it was coming from. The summary is that the separation between the segments is a bit heavy, and the overall logic is great, but the small logic of the connection is a bit jumpy, and the processing is not very good.