
I Will Live Forever with My Return Certificate
我以回档证长生
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 108k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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53Chapters
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The story was good until Chapter 21. Love is as deep as the sea. There is a trap in the protagonist's wife. I don't believe it even if she doesn't have a plan. Having known the protagonist for a long time, I know how deep the relationship can be. What's more, I naturally know all kinds of information. There are nine out of ten bosses. I suggest you change it. The protagonist knows, but still pretends not to know. Be defensive and don't talk about emotions.
After seeing Chapter 21, I suddenly didn't want to read any more. The first part was pretty good, but then there was a scene of deep love? We've just known each other for a long time, came here for a while, realized that I was being taken advantage of, and yet still willingly took the initiative to help? Forget it, the biggest problem is to naturally know what the protagonist needs most and tell the protagonist, You say this is no problem, but I don't believe it. Nine times out of ten, there is a big boss behind the scheme. The protagonist knows it, but there is absolutely no way, so he can only pretend that he doesn't know and fall into the trap.
Back and forth, back and forth, thousands of times, back and forth, back and forth, digging holes all the time, and finally a new level was opened at chapter 50, which made me tired.