Change Your Job, Pet Beast!

In fact, it would be good to write it like the previous Pet Beast Master. There is no need to have so many professions. Pet beasts also have professions. The system is too complicated, it is very tiring to read, and the combat power is easily broken. Personally, I don't want to read anymore after seeing so many professions.

It looks so tiring, I can't stand it any longer.

I haven't read this one yet, I hope it has the style of the first one, because I still like your first one.

It's good to write the same thing as the previous pet beast master, without having to do anything fancy. I also hope that the choice of pet beasts won't be cats, dogs, foxes, etc. It's a bit innovative.

The author made the same old mistake as the Ascension of the Familiar Spirit. The setting is still too bloated. The key is that you don't have the writing power to control such a bloated setting. Moreover, it is better to focus on the pet beast side. On the human side, I feel like the master of pet beasts should have some kind of blood inheritance talent setting. Don't make some messy settings.

By the way, why did the number of the last book change? I thought the author gave up and stopped writing, haha.

I voted for the next month. I don't know how it will be written in the future. At least it's good so far and fits my feelings. I just hope it won't be about revenge or the like, a story about bitterness and hatred.

Black Pepper also felt that the current introduction seemed to be weak and did not fully reflect the selling point of the book, so he wrote a new one, as shown below. I hope readers will actively provide feedback. And, if the new version's introduction is better, is there any room for improvement? (For example, what kind of description would you rather see in the introduction? Or would the three wish gift boxes I used as an example be a bit boring?)

Too much pursuit of setting and neglect of plot. Setting is actually the way to upgrade. Changing the soup does not change the medicine. Therefore, you should think about the attraction of the plot and set it up. No matter how you change, you can't escape the upgrade framework. Simply cut off the complicated settings. Just be simple and focus on the characters of the plot characters and beasts.

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Because the article cannot be modified in large quantities in a short period of time, and there are still some parts that have not been modified, it is expected that all adjustments will be completed in 3-5 days. If you see a bather, please temporarily think of it as a "washer". (Only the name has changed, but the abilities have not changed) Finally, thank you everyone for your suggestions.

Come on, author, I really like your first book, The Master of Pet Beasts. I still have more to read after reading it. I feel like it would be better to just make it simpler and enlarge the main body of beast control. I look forward to the next one 😭

From the time when you were a beast master, you should have known that you can't write this kind of pet job model, and it's not good to read. You have to cut the book again and again to fight. To be honest, the people who can follow you to read new books are basically the old readers of the Ascension of Spirits. I can't stand the Skeleton Palace. I don't understand why I can't continue to write about pet beasts well, and I have to add a bunch of messy and poorly written books. I look forward to your book every time, but I am disappointed every time. You always say that your writing is not mature enough, and you did not write well in the early stage of the book. But now, the book is really your peak. You are good at writing about evolution, and every evolution is exciting. But now you have completely abandoned the evolution of pet beasts that you are good at, and you are obsessed with character growth... I wish you good luck, and see you in the next book.

On the 13th, 276 votes, 1,459 people, all of this has to be cut? How do you expect those who write fan fiction about Naruto and One Piece to be ranked outside of 3000?

It is true that the function of the Master is to serve the beasts, but the threshold for obtaining it should be higher, similar to the inheritance of skills. The main training content of the Master should be to improve the spiritual power, and you can learn some secrets of self-protection like the master of pet beasts. The beast-control literature should mainly focus on beast control, otherwise it will be other fantasy and fairy tales. I think adding professions to beast-controlling is a very good innovation. In the current beast-controlling novels, a direction has been proposed. It may be a new level of beast-controlling novels in the future. We still need to be bold and innovative. This may have the influence of Kung Fu Panda in previous beast-controlling novels. Individuals of the same race and at the same level are very different due to occupations, fighting methods and future evolutionary routes. I think the existence of occupations is an important influence point in the evolution of beast control. For example, the Savage Electromagnetic Mouse. Compared with ordinary electromagnetic mice, physical changes will interfere with the future evolutionary route and make them feel more violent. However, I only saw the accumulation of professions and did not see the growth of the spiritual power of the beast master. I felt that I was putting the cart before the horse. I only cultivated my nature but not my life. I only expanded my methods and did not see my own realm. I felt that just acting was not interesting. The master's spirit and the feedback from the master beast to the master were also another kind of both life and life. There are good and bad aspects to fixed power. I feel that the interpretation of the same profession by the beast is different. Use your own talent to expand the boundaries of the profession. The beast can complete the expansion of abilities with its own talent and the guidance of the master. This can also be regarded as inheritance. When writing this kind of article, the author must control his writing skills and highlight the main selling point of a certain beast. For example, the charming Mo Xie is the main beast in the book and the most impressive one. Adding professions to the beasts is like the Lord of Mystery. Different career sequences are constantly promoted, but it is just a branch, so it must be orderly. Bad grades are only temporary. I hope the author can keep at it, and maybe he will become popular one day. Make a good outline before writing, and don't cut into books at every turn. Come on, come on, come on!

Cut? Misery. Next time, study the outline more clearly before writing!

The setting is complicated, just make it simple

Is it because the world view is too big and there are too many details that need to be broken down?

Otherwise, no one would read this introduction.

What I like most is that each of the author's books has a similar system, but the partners rarely repeat it. You can always find those magical and interesting creatures in nature. They are unconventional. There are many people who write about pets, but not many can write their own things. Keep up the good work, Black Pepper!

I read the synopsis at the beginning and thought it was quite novel and interesting. I also liked the setting. I just finished reading the author's last book, so I put it on my bookshelf to read more. But I fell in love before I even read a chapter.

Hey, why can't the author listen? Write more main lines and focus on the protagonist's journey and pet beasts. It's good in itself There's really no need to worry about word choice and complicated settings. My guess is that the author is not very young, and the people who read your book are all old readers. Not to mention living up to everyone's expectations, at least make the financial source of writing more stable.

It really feels like a pity that the position of favor is such a good setting. . Really looking forward to related content. It's a pity that I cut the book, so I can only say that black pepper is more important. As a long-time fan, although I haven't commented much, I will definitely see you when the next book comes out. So please stick to it