The Ascension of the Favorite Spirit

Novel settings, detailed descriptions, and a touch of ancient flavor are the overall impression; the extremely attractive suspense and the plot with a sense of dislocation will make you want to stop one second, but frown the next second. This is a further feeling; if you watch it patiently, your mood will be slightly relieved. The patched settings and new plot development will give you the motivation to continue watching, and then there will be a new round of emotional ups and downs. In short, it's like eating a dish that tastes good but has conflicting tastes. One bite is sweet, the other is salty. You finish the meal with a frown on your face, and you find that it's actually delicious.

Alas, I can't help but follow it. The review recommends raising a book 😢. The biggest problem is that the early stage is basically focused on setting, and there is no eye-catching plot. I don't deny that many great masters write this way, but there must be a balance. Generally, this type of writing is slow-burning, and the content tends to be relaxed and daily, with a gradual spread. The key point is that the setting follows the plot and serves the plot. This book gives people a very contradictory feeling. The author wants to show the world to readers quickly, but also wants to make the setting mysterious and unwilling to reveal it all at once. It feels like rushing to push the setting and squeezing the plot. The plot follows the setting and serves the setting. The service seems to have put the cart before the horse, the specific cash withdrawal is too weak, and I can't understand it. To be honest, if I hadn't caught up with the last book, I might have deleted the book directly. But give it some time, I can't tell much about this one yet, but the previous one is indeed getting better with more writing, especially after 600 chapters, the setting is very complete. It is imaginative and rich, and the most important thing is that the world view is huge. The first book only came out of the novice village after almost 500 chapters. It is very good at slow-burning long stories. To be honest, the beginning of the first book is more poisonous than this one. By the way, if the author can see it, here is a suggestion. I saw that you said in the end of the last book that there is no opponent of the same age in the later period as a poisonous point, no! ! ! I was really worried about the new book when I saw it. If the supporting characters have no brains to keep up with the protagonist no matter how powerful they are, it would be a poisonous point. It is not an exaggeration to persuade half of the readers to turn off half of the readers. The biggest problem with the previous book is that there is no one but peers. Wow, I wrote 500 words without knowing it, and I don't know what I wrote. I am really a chatterbox.

How can I put it, the early stage was too procrastinating. I read ten chapters and didn't understand anything at all. It was all unexplained settings. The first three chapters are called the golden three chapters for no reason. The beginning is too complicated and not many people can read it. If you can't retain people, no one will care about how you write later. Perhaps the author is very confident that the worldview he constructed is excellent enough, but this unconventional opening, except for your old readers, is something that few people can handle. It makes me feel that this is an old book from ten years ago, and it smells of imitation. Maybe the rest of you is really exciting, but I'm sorry, I can't read after reading the first ten chapters.

In fact, I haven't watched it recently. I don't know many of the plot. I only know that I want to go to a new map, so I want to make a suggestion that I have been holding back for a long time. I have finished reading the author's last book, The Master of Pet Beasts. In his remarks at the end of the book, the author said that he wanted to write a logical and exciting article. I have read this book and it is indeed possible. I will not go into some small details. After all, they are all early issues and it is too far to go into it now. One of the biggest opinions I want to say is that after the protagonist became the king, people from the Ye family came to check. During the period, an outer elder said that the protagonist would definitely not achieve this in the future. What is written here is very illogical, and it is also a typical slap-in-the-face plot. How can someone in a high position not have the power and scheming? What's important is that a person who doesn't show emotions or anger, mocks the protagonist in front of others just because he takes sides? Can an outer sect elder still ridicule a direct descendant? Even if this direct descendant has no future, I think this paragraph is not well written. What emotions should you keep in mind? If you want to write that the protagonist does not believe in fate, it is okay to change his destiny against nature, but don't use this method. You said in your last book that you read a lot of comments, which were helpful to you. I hope you can also read my comments. After all, we are entering a new plot. I hope this kind of plot can be avoided. The sooner you improve your writing skills, the better. It will only make your next book and even the next book more and more perfect.

Recommended words: In a world dominated by beloved spirits, the power on one's body is like the rules of time, and power is used as a gear. In this world, giant societies are outlined. The beloved spirits and powers combine to create a system, and eventually ascend to godhood. The setting is very novel and interesting. On the basis of beast control, power is added, which is very similar to a part of the Lord of Mysteries. He will upgrade faster if he plays a role related to power. The setting is reasonable and non-toxic. Eat with confidence. Trial reading of the new book "Ascension of the Spirits" Author: Black Pepper Immortal Keywords: Development/Beast Control/Evolution/Power Number of Words: 50,000 (before release) Update Status: Serialized Plot Summary: Protagonist Ye Hanjun , turned into a different world, and was in the Ye Family, a wealthy family of more than ten epochs. He awakened to have dual powers, known as the Golden Heel Bone, because one of his powers was a mentor. He went to the Blue Frog Kingdom and appointed Canlan Pavilion at the age of 20, the youngest mentor in history. Due to a misplaced summons, he possessed a blood contracted spirit, and was weak and forced to sleep for four years. The seal of the family elders could not suppress her. Lord Ye Han began to upgrade while looking for ways to suppress her. Main mission: Integrate into the role of teacher to accelerate the upgrade of authority, guard against attacks by other brothers and sisters in the family, and control the blood-contracted spirits in the body. Highlights of this book: ① On the basis of the original beast-control style, the author has added powers, added chaotic spiritual patterns to the body of the loved ones, used the spiritual patterns as the way, and added core characters. The characters are changeable, but there is always one main character that belongs to him, so that the sense of substitution will be stronger. However, some core characters that are easier to change, once they are tainted, are likely to destroy the potential of the loved ones. ②The protagonist teaches others, and the events that occur interact with others. ③The protagonist is a child of a big family and a hedonist. This is also my suggestion. If you add food descriptions later, you can also adjust the singleness of the article. SP: If you don't like it, don't comment. If you have any opinions, you can express them. The above is purely my personal understanding.

Um, this book is a bit offline, I can't understand it, the main plot is slow, and it's not exciting 🙂🙂🙂, that's what I thought 😆

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I just started reading it today, and now I'm reading the first chapter after it was released. Send a comment and cheers for the author. The setting is very good. The whole world background seems to be quite huge at present. It is a bit slow to warm up. Just write slowly and follow the author's own pace. I am more optimistic about the follow-up. Come on, author, and give priority to quality.

The door is really tough, just use poison if you have nothing to do!

Aside from the strange power setting and the relatively unfamiliar realm, the author generally controls the rhythm very well. It feels a bit like, "My king, please forgive me, I am really not a sword god, I am pretending to be a boss." . . When you have financial needs, make a choice that is consistent with the setting of the work and the audience's preferences. (It will be difficult, but it's up to the decider)

From the perspective of big data, more than 1 million words are still at the first level. Indeed, But you can't deny that his writing style is that kind. People who like it like it very much, and I am one of them. Newcomers may be confused by the convoluted terms of authority, realm clay sculptures, and jade. (It is not suitable for pure beginners.) Putting aside the realm and rigid system, the story of this book is very well written. The character descriptions, pet descriptions, and plot descriptions did not make me feel too obvious, and it was a typical wit-dropping. The protagonist was the mastermind behind the master. On the contrary, his characterizations were all very good. Su Mei, Gua Gua, and Ren Wo Kuang all had distinct personalities. They would cooperate with the protagonist instead of being overshadowed by the protagonist, or in other words, the protagonist would lie directly behind him. The author writes very well, keep up the good work. The previous book has 3 million words of level two, which shows that the author really loves it. . . Monthly tickets are provided. 🙂

My opinion is, don't focus on the protagonist's pet beasts. The pet beasts of other supporting characters are also very interesting. For example, the role of the protagonist is to be a trainer. Think of it as a beast master, and then recruit apprentices to become pet beasts. For example, pet beast number one is Ostrich Knight Su Mei, pet beast number two is Grimace Moth Catcher Li Jingming, pet beast number three is armor bird horse racing knight Wang Xinfei, pet beast number four is muscle zombie strongman Ren Wo Kuang, pet beast number five is blazing tiger and fire thief Dongfang Xu, think about it, the protagonist has many pet beasts😒. It is recommended that everyone DIY various pet beasts together. After all, these pet beasts will contract with other pet beasts, and there will be new disciples later. This article will be very grand when it is unfolded in the mid-term.

This is one of the few beast-controlling novels I have read that attracted me. In my opinion, the system of other beast-controlling articles is greater than that of beast-controlling. The protagonist is born with system plug-ins and data panels. After reading too many times, they all use the same routine. However, this book introduces the concept of authority, so that although the protagonist has a data pad, it is not as obtrusive as other beast-control novels, and other characters also have various abilities, so the hook is not too big. Although there are some poisonous points, the flaws do not hide the good points. I hope the author writes well and doesn't want eunuchs. It's been a long time since I've seen a good beast-control novel.

Authority: Knight Level: F Contracted Spirit: Pink Ostrich (Pictures are for reference only)

It's a very interesting novel, with a refreshing beast-control system that makes you want to read it. I hope the story can be longer. I haven't had the desire to read this kind of novel for a long time. I want to read it longer. The system is larger and the story is longer.

After reading the first volume, I felt that it was a bit nondescript. This novel is about using one's authority to cultivate the spirits so that they can become stronger and evolve. After reading the first volume, it basically focused on the younger brother. The pet novel should be about the pet beast instead of the younger brother. To be honest, the big family is not just the protagonist's family. They will also train underlings. It feels meaningless to write this. It just feels like the number of words. This is just a small map and they have taken in so many underlings. If you enter the big map and the talents are not much better, you will have to take in many more underlings. So I feel that you wrote in the wrong direction at the beginning, and now it is a bit behind the scenes.

The first dozen or so chapters are written incomprehensibly. I pretend not to understand. A consumptive ghost came to the corner of the corner to try it out. The settings are so messed up that they were created by mixing settings from many books together.

Niu Bei! After thirty or forty chapters, the pet beast has not been contracted, and its injuries have not been treated. It is just walking around 😂. Once you are convinced, this book will either enter the palace, or it will be a full-length novel.

It's a little too flashy. The Beast Master already has a pretty complicated system, so this setting is a bit messy. (Personal feeling)

You probably won't be able to get out of Novice Village without 500 chapters. It's open for breeding. If you die, please call me.

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I read it in one sitting, it was a hearty and interesting novel, but I still have some unfinished thoughts. I have to go to work again tomorrow. I heard that the author is more slow, so I just need to recuperate.

Forgive me for coming from daoban 😥. I have caught up with the latest chapter. I haven't logged in for a long time and I found a recommendation ticket and gave it to me without hesitation. Isn't it the power of the protector to call disciples out to fight? I'm looking forward to it (the author You'd better not forget 😃) This book really made me feel that the pacing was well controlled, and the chapters and content were quite compact. Except for the beginning, which was a bit lengthy and did not give readers what they expected, the subsequent questions were much better and smooth to read. At first, I thought it was too few to contract a spirit at level three, but after seeing the main plot, including the protagonist's dual powers and authority, I realized that the number was actually quite appropriate. The author also wrote very well about the authority and the spirit, but the core personality felt weird. It felt a bit hasty to go to Enma at the beginning because he was honest and felt it was inappropriate. I should have found another reason. Also, when you get along with Liu Ying, you can write down specific past events and reminisce, otherwise it feels a bit empty (maybe I read it too fast?) I am still a high school student and haven't read a novel for a long time. I finally read my favorite Yuju-ryu novel in one go and I was a little excited and had a withdrawal reaction. I wish this book will get better and better, and the story of Yehan-kun and the veil of this world will be unveiled little by little! (It seems a bit out of place, don't spray it if you don't like it 🙂)

Both the power system and the character settings have been well-worked, and the world background is passable. But a problem that runs through the beginning and end is the half-written and half-white dialogue. As soon as you communicate with the protagonist at any time, in any scene, or with any character, you will start to talk about "such", "is", "has you ever returned", "already returned" and "even if". It can be used occasionally to create a strong style. In the question book, it is directly used in large areas, in batches, and continuously used regardless of character characteristics. This is no less a major mistake than incorrect use of personal pronouns, and it affects the perception too much. It's such a pity that a book that is more than enough and relatively complete in all aspects has this rather fatal problem.

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