Lord of Pet Beasts

[Feedback/Comments/Post-Reading Evaluation] Comprehensive Building. With an open-minded attitude of asking for advice, we solicit reading feedback from book friends. Including but not limited to world view, characters, lines and dialogues, plot development, pet settings, etc. You can evaluate whether it is good or bad, but I hope it will be objective (emphasis added). Then, based on this feedback, I will try my best to adjust some parts that can be adjusted. If it involves the basic skeleton (that is, the part that cannot be changed), I will summarize it and use it as a reference for future writing. Of course, in order to avoid having too many scattered questions that cause me to have distracting thoughts and affect my original creative ideas, I will still write with myself as the core at critical moments. (After all, I am the creator of this story universe. If the work is changed beyond recognition due to different people's different ideas, the original flavor will be lost. I hope everyone can understand this.)

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Personally, I think it is one of the top five pet novels. It has scenes, emotions, and rich imagination. The protagonist is not a loser, and it is very comfortable to read. As a female reader, I really like the Milky Way. The description is very good, but the update is too slow. Please give the author a big boost 😡

The world view is quite attractive But the plot looks very awkward and feels very watery and weird I have been reading online articles for more than ten years The requirements for the protagonist are not that kind of plot. I hope that the protagonist can still do well without a golden finger At the beginning of the book, the author wanted to describe a rational and calm character Unfortunately, the description is not adequate I read Chapter 50 very seriously, but I felt a bit disappointed I started to skip reading, it was too watery I know what the author wants to express, but the writing is very verbose Then I jumped to read the first volume Disappointed I feel that the author has not grasped the key point The world view of the different world is not The characteristics are poorly described Goldfinger is a good point The plot is written through the pen From 8 points at the beginning to 5 points So disappointing I hope the author will read the author's own book again before writing a new book I hope the next step will be better

How can I put it, the names of these angels are getting more and more outrageous. Even if there are eight-winged fruit angels in the future, I won't find it strange.

What made me make this decision was reading the author's closing remarks. It's not because of how good the story the author writes is, or how many chapter reviews there are, but because of the author yourself. You are different from most authors. 1. Know the fundamental purpose of doing something, and clearly distinguish the maximum weight. For example, when writing a book, you know that writing a book requires a long time. In order to last long, you need reasonable time arrangements, certain profits, and blocking trolls to maintain your mood. And many authors either work for love, or stay up late and die suddenly regardless of their health, or they are so disturbed by the trolls that they can't write anymore Know what the purpose of writing a closing speech is: closing + foreshadowing for a new book. In order to achieve this goal, it is necessary to fill in the pits (to satisfy readers), let readers point out their own shortcomings (to make readers realize that the next book will be better), and let readers participate in the design of the next book (to make readers have more expectations for the next book) And many authors vomit their bitterness and play the emotional card in order to write the closing remarks. 2. The article has a frame and typesetting Or your closing remarks, from the creative experience, book experience, reader interaction (corrections, likes, ratings, extras, etc.), Plus some small details (explain the article frame at the beginning, readers who don't like it can skip it). This type of article with a frame and layout is much better than other closing remarks. 3. Authors will grow I have seen a lot of authors who have jumped on the street and bought 7.8 Books, but they have never made any progress. They don't know where they went wrong, and the next book will not be better. They just keep writing new books and cut off the books if the results are not good. But you, the author, are different. You know how to let readers make comments and learn lessons. This is already better than many authors. (I have to mention survivorship bias here. If the author fully meets the readers' requirements, it is impossible to write well, because those readers who complain and then leave are not your target users. In other words, the suggestions at the beginning of the book may not be advisable, but the suggestions at the end must be advisable)

Except for the Pokemon IP-type pet stories, I personally think this book is quite good, but it's just not enough to read. I hope the author is great and will keep up the good work! ! ! Chapter 5 monthly tickets are presented

The more I watch it, the better it gets. I watched it in pirated version before. I liked it so much. Please support me. I like the animal pet novel so much. Come on, keep an eye on you.

The monetary system is so chaotic and outrageous.

Let me tell you, the back part is really good

I thought Black Pepper didn't post it, but it turned out that there were more good guys than me just now, but basically they were all posted before. Did I come too late? 😭😭

It's not enough. It gets more and more exciting later on. It's not enjoyable enough 🤫

Personally, the pace is too slow, college life is a bit tiring, and the updates are not fast.

It's so lonely. I can't see enough.

Cannot vote

I seriously suspect that Black Pepper wrote about the Glazed Sword Angel after seeing a photo in the group that said Xing was very beautiful. In that picture, the angel was surrounded by many swords.

After reading 200 chapters, I feel that the biggest problem is that there are too many psychological descriptions. You should not show your strength through your own imagination, but through the interaction of the plot. In addition, the climax of the plot is a bit bland and the plot is a bit white.

You still need to grow up a bit and fight head-on before you can get out.

I just finished watching Secret Realm, and I read many posts saying that it is about the growth of the 16-year-old protagonist as an ordinary person, but I want to ask the protagonist about the background of his adoptive mother, because I remember that the protagonist came to this academy because her mother wrote a letter, otherwise the protagonist went directly to the Royal Academy, there should be some background, so as not to be overwhelmed by the royal family (the above analysis is from Chapter 12) 😃

The third chapter of Golden Chapter is too poisonous. Moon Rabbit can only be used as a support, but it is very annoying because he cannot stack buffs for his teammates. Everything else is very good. It is a rare masterpiece of pet stories. Do you have any recommendations for pet stories that you think are good? I can't find any good ones recently.

This book is really magical. The first 50 chapters are full of holes for beginners. After 50 chapters, it starts to get better. After 100 chapters, it starts to slowly take off. After 140 or 50 chapters, it can be compared with others. The speed of progress of professional-level veteran authors is also too fast. It feels like writing it by another person. You must persevere. It is really difficult to find a good pet book now. After more than 100 chapters, the characteristics of his entire book burst out.

For us readers, it doesn't matter how much you praise a book, as long as you can provide some reasonable suggestions to the author, it is the greatest support! There may be a few poisonous points in the first few dozen chapters of this book, but other than that, the writing is really good. If you have any suggestions in the future, please go to the comprehensive building to give feedback. The comment area will mislead newcomers to read this book. After all, there is a real shortage of high-quality books on the beast-controlling style. The current performance of this book is definitely at the forefront of this field. I really hope that every reader who likes the beast-controlling beast-petting style can support and care for this seedling!

As an old bookworm, I have read too many novels, and it is common for me to be short of books now (I am picky). The reason why I like this book very much and become the operating officer is that one is because I have been very fond of Yushu-style novels in recent years (this book is also a seedling), and the other is because the male protagonist of this book is real. He is an ordinary 16-year-old boy who has experienced misfortune since childhood. Although he seems mature and independent (related to his childhood life experience), in fact he lacks experience and growth, and has the immaturity and deficiencies of his current age. In this book, we can see the male protagonist's reflection and growth after experiencing things. This is a living 16-year-old boy! (Many books now portray the male protagonist as too perfect and unreal)

1. This book is a slow-burning book, not a mindless read! ! There are a few chapters in the previous Secret Realm Trial that are a little bit toxic. Some people may find them depressing and uncomfortable. If you don't like them, you can skip these chapters. The chapters will get better and better! (If you like cool articles, please leave silently, and don't comment on this book with the idea of ​​reading mindless cool articles) 2. The main characters of the various protagonists in this book have distinct characters, each with its own characteristics. Do not force the characters to change too much later, such as the male protagonist Bai Wushang. , Calmness and stability will always run through this article. He is by no means a Long Aotian-style protagonist who likes to show off. He likes to think, so he will gradually grow with experience. Because of his special experience since childhood, he likes to weigh and choose what is most beneficial to him, all in order to improve his strength! Only the truly strong don't care too much! : 3. This book focuses on describing the bond and growth between the master and the pet beasts, so it will not accept too many pet beasts. If you like to be crushed by multiple pet beasts and do not fetter feelings, please leave silently! (Just a quick reminder, there should be no female protagonists in the early and middle stages of this book) 4. A lot of the logic and inspiration in this book comes from various animations, which can give you a strong sense of familiarity with animations. For example, the Ten Heroes of Mountain and Sea are similar to the Ten Heroes in Shoji. The other party has the strength and qualifications to play with the weak. Weakness is the original sin! Xia Wanlong's logic and arrangement are very normal. If you can't accept it, please leave silently. 5. If you have any reasonable suggestions and opinions, please go to the feedback building to give feedback! 6. There are many people who read this book silently. The 520,000 words and over 900 words mean a lot. You will know whether it is good or not after you read it!

Galaxy

How to say it? It can be seen that the author is a novice in this book, and the text also has many flaws, but it still gave me a desire to read on. I think the main reason is that the number of pets is not too large, but the quality of it. What is more enjoyable is that each pet grows steadily. The world view is very big and has an oriental fantasy flavor. Do more publicity and save some chapters. It will be embarrassing if the popularity gradually fails to explode.

The more you write, the better it is. There are indeed some poisonous points at the beginning, but basically there will be no big problems later. There will be poisonous points in the early stage, but I believe that the subsequent plot will not disappoint you, especially after a hundred chapters. As an author, it is quite good to be able to write this level of debut. I personally think, as for the author, you must work hard. If I were a eunuch in such a good book, I could rush to your house with a saw. For this book, I have done everything for the first time. You have to be worthy of me

Purple Lightning Dragon Eagle (accidentally found, slightly similar, please don't comment, other fanarts of pet beasts will be related to Bai Wushang, the tool man)

The operating officer said that this book is slow to gain popularity and is not a brainless novel. Don't read this novel based on the standards of a brainless novel. When I read Chapter 72, I felt it was really bland, so bland that I almost cried! This is not a brainless and exciting article, but it doesn't work if you don't have any of it. Always when you feel like you are about to get horny, the author Lima will pour cold water on you. For example, when someone cuts off your beard, the author's intention to suppress the protagonist is too obvious. The protagonist doesn't have any bright spots. I saw him thinking a lot, he was not in a hurry, and he looked confident. I thought the protagonist should have a "smart" personality, but in the end he was still a Luther. When someone cut him off, I can say that he just started. I was inexperienced at first, but whether it was Tuoba brothers' trap or Luo's trap, I jumped into them all without looking at them, and showed a confident look. After being sneak-attacked and cut off, I was unexpectedly attacked by the Nether Bone duo. Did you come to this secret realm to play? On the contrary, several supporting characters are interesting, but the supporting characters do not bring out the protagonist, and the protagonist is overshadowed by the supporting characters. Let's look at the battle scenes again. I suspect that I am watching the 🇯🇵Hot-Blooded Manga. They always fall behind at the beginning, and then the pet beasts break out to fight back. This is incompatible with the protagonist's usual tepid appearance. Especially the confident look of the protagonist before snatching the bloodline fruit, and the incompetent and furious look of the pet after being severely injured, made me feel so embarrassed. The protagonist has no arrangements throughout the whole process. Even the information is given to him by the opponent. There is no highlight except for the golden finger. I particularly like the themes of cards, summons, and pet beasts, so I will continue to read it. I hope that the more I write in the future, the better it will be.

There seems to be a lot of complaints and suggestions recently. All the complaints are about a few specific chapters in the first few dozen chapters. The dummy author and I do not refute this. After all, the plots in those chapters have some minor problems. I accept everyone's suggestions with an open mind. As long as there are no problems in the subsequent plots, it turns out that the subsequent plots are well written. After all, no one complains (I really like this book more and more).