My Master Is Not a Magician!

The introduction and the content are completely irrelevant. The protagonist has no system, no golden fingers, and nothing outstanding. He is a weakling and has no ability to control the overall situation. He is still alive because he is the protagonist.

When I traveled through ancient times, I relied on the system and teamed up with people to download dungeons. In addition, it is 2025. If I write a female character, I will only use stunning beauty. I am stunned by this. I suggest you not write it in detail, so as not to give people the feeling that you have never used a mobile phone.

The idea of ​​this book is good, but it is a pity that it still needs to be sorted out. It is a bit messy, and the protagonist's character is not established. Either the protagonist's character is established, or you have to reorganize your realm background. There is a secret realm, a Taoist school, and a mortal dynasty. There is no main body and chaos.

After reading it, my current impression is that the setting is very rich. It seems that the author must have put in the effort to create it. The writing style is also very good. The descriptions of various characters can at least give people an impression. There are some flaws in the plot, and it always gives me the feeling that the protagonist is not very passionate or ruthless, and it feels like a bitch. To give a few examples: 1️⃣All elixirs are basically explained, but Gu Chong Dan does not explain it. I don't understand if I have forgotten it or am laying some foreshadowing 2️⃣It's okay to recruit subordinates, but you must have a way to control them. Generally, you have to control them before they have mastered them. The result is no. You know, the servants you buy can make you cattle and horses at most. You have to ask them to follow you and fight against the emperor. You have to fight hard. Who is willing? 3️⃣I still can't understand the role of Tang Ling 1. Tang Ling is the concubine of Mei Shilang, so is her surname Tang or Mei? 2. What is the so-called signing of a contract to bring Tang Ling back? Is it directly teleported? Or is Tang Ling traveling from her country to the protagonist? We can't come here without coordinates 3. The protagonist's inner thoughts at the time were that Tang Ling and himself were not of the same mind. Wasn't there any restriction in the contract that Tang Ling had to be obedient? 4️⃣The protagonist is not really from here. He has no sense of belonging to the country, and he also has no sense of belonging to his family, right? Can't you just find a few invisibility charms, go to the deep mountains and old forests, and then come out after they are fully developed? The protagonist is not the real original owner, so is he still greedy for the glory and wealth? In fact, if you really want to save these "family members", just get a few more invisibility charms and a few disguises, enough to escape from the capital and go to remote areas. The sky is high and the emperor is far away. When the emperor and his people are dead, then naturally no one will pay attention. Why do you do that thing of dancing on the tip of a knife?

The creativity is indeed top-notch, but I feel that the main world part is good-looking and the secret realm part is average. Let's see the author's balance. Overall it's worth seeing.

The plot jumps too suddenly, here and there, which can easily interrupt the smooth reading experience.

After reading the second chapter, I was a little speechless.

Unbelievable

The two books are both bad at the beginning. Who would dare to read your book?

Is there any Shen Nong in converting female channels into male channels?

Fellow Taoists are welcome to read and comment! Come on, author! Amazing grass!

It looks good, come on, give you a monthly vote

Please take a stroll and give me some advice. Thanks

As title🙂

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is mediocre. Many things are written in a vague and dreamlike manner.

Good guy, eunuch is a professional account, right? He opens a trumpet account unscrupulously.

How to say it? I've also finished reading it. I think you can just skip the passages in the dungeon. It doesn't matter whether you read it or not. Besides, I think the dungeon you wrote is super boring. I think the point of this book is to make trouble in that ancient time, rather than watching you enter the dungeon. You may not have grasped what the audience wants to see, or you may be too self-righteous.