I Can Go Back in Time Through My Diary

A good subject matter, but there are some flaws that the author lacks subjective knowledge. First, placing coins on the frame of the exhaust fan cannot accurately control burning in a short time (it will not cause problems for months or even years, or even not at all, because even if the exhaust fan is tilted 90 degrees, the angle between its axis and the frame will not change). Second, exhaust fans are usually installed at high places, and flammable gases such as propane are denser than air and will sink to the lower level. Even if the exhaust fan is short-circuited, it may not detonate. Third, propane leaks. In such a large space, there are too many uncontrollable factors that will detonate it in advance, and it cannot be accurately controlled at 23:35. To sum up, it's better to leave it to the villain's supernatural abilities. After all, the body appeared in the desert thousands of kilometers away within an hour.

If you had written this book earlier, there would be no such thing as genius.

Sorry, I know this is a good book, but my brain is too useless and I can't understand it. Can someone please explain it to me? Thank you 😭 I'm not very good at reading this kind of novel that is extremely brain-consuming 😭

Your plot is really no worse than some books, but the biggest problem is that it is too depressing and too fast-paced and tight, unless you are writing a short story. Otherwise, this depressing rhythm will make people breathless. Naturally, no one will watch anymore. First think about how to reduce the amount of information and keep the pace smooth and relaxed, otherwise you won't be able to watch it. The plot is really awesome. It's a pity that it's so depressing.

I feel that the previous plot is very similar to the Genius Club. There is a heroine in the past, a mysterious organization, a diary and a Genius Playground, but you happened to be out before the Genius Playground.

A movie from quite some time ago

Personal review: Xiancao+ It is very comfortable. It is the third science fiction novel I have discovered this year. The writing power and rhythm are even better The only shortcomings of this book are that there are too few chapters and the current data has the risk of eunuchs. The book friends who came across this comment in front of the screen will be at a loss if they missed it. It's very smooth, only the front is a little unclear, but it's completely negligible

The beginning of Genius Playground is about traveling to the past through a diary, and it immediately reminded me of you.

Can! It's this kind of story about time and space again 😁 Please finish it 😍 They will do anything 😭

I have invested and I hope the author will write well.

It feels so brain-burning, dizzy, and complicated.

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This setting! ! ! ! ! It's the same as the micro-plot at the beginning of the book "Genius Playground" just released by the master. I gather

The plot is okay, but the rhythm is not quite right. I feel like the author may still be a newbie, so I need to practice more.

Why is the opening setting the same as the Genius Club? Never imitate that author

Is the author a newbie or a veteran?

Why, it's Chen Mo again. I've met several books where the protagonist is named Chen Mo.

Has your luck been taken away😡

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It feels pretty good, why is there no one there?

Give it a try, it's so beautiful, why is there no one?

A wave of prophets, the "blind man" is Chen Mo, see if you can guess right

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