Player Invasion? Am I Really an NPC?

Come on

After reading Chapter 47, I worked as a nanny for a group of players and walked away. I have endured some of the minor flaws in the previous chapters. I am really disappointed. I am not up to par at all.

The summary is: The players are too passerby The setting is loose The protagonist is ordinary (not doing anything but just wanting to become stronger) There is a sense of fragmentation In the first 1 to 100 chapters, I always feel that as a fourth natural disaster player, there is no role, and the content focuses on the struggle of local forces, although I know this is introducing It introduces the world view, but for those who want to read about players, more than 80% of them are protagonists fighting and managing tribes. It is better not to write about players. Most of the more than 30 stories about players in the Fourth Natural Disaster that I have read are group dramas, which means multiple perspectives. But in this film, the players are like passers-by. The only ones who have an impression are participating in wars and trading with the protagonist. The perspective is rarely focused on the players. , The player setting has not been explained clearly once, it is scattered. It says that the player creates a hot weapon, and a few chapters later it says that it comes from the future. It has been 3 months, and it has been many chapters before it says that the player is resurrected without deducting experience. I hope there will be more player roles in the chapters. To be honest, this movie feels a bit separated to me, like two works, one side is the reincarnation of the protagonist in another world. , On the one hand is the fourth natural disaster, which together makes players redundant. It is better to let the protagonist get a monster-killing upgrade system, and the protagonist is just a player. The main reason is that the positioning is not clear. It is said to be a behind-the-scenes stream, but there is a god behind the scenes. The protagonist only has an NPC system, and it is not a rebirth or top player reincarnation stream. The protagonist is usually reincarnated into the magical world, which is more like leading the mainstream. But the protagonist has no ambition to rule and only wants to become stronger, but he is like a puppet of the system. He previously disliked the players. After the system gave him experience, the protagonist began to do things for the players. However, he still felt that the relationship between the protagonist and the players was alienated. I have seen players being the protagonist's summons, soldiers (war flow), townspeople (leading the mainstream), subordinates, and players (planning and player relations) ), enemies (reincarnated local NPCs. VS players), adventurers (similar to herding), and guests (squeezing players' money), most of them are under the protagonist's sphere of influence, or using relationships, but this one is considered exploitative but a bit freeing. The main reason is that the protagonist does not communicate and cooperate with the players in depth, and no one shows up in front of them. As the leader of the force, he just convinces the players. Under the guidance of the system, we help players build a village, find people to train them, and send them some tasks. The protagonists are almost always fighting in wars, so it is said that the fourth natural disaster is separated and the relationship between the two parties is estranged. I have never seen it. No wonder it is exempted. It is better not to leave players. It would be better to just write about the protagonist fighting for hegemony in a different world. I have read a similar book, in which the protagonist makes various preparations in more than 100 chapters. When the players arrived, it turned out that after the players arrived, the previous chapter preparation seemed redundant. I suggested that the author directly make a chapter outline and omit the first 100 or so chapters to reduce the difficulty of getting into the game. However, the author said that it was a worldview foreshadowing and he was very satisfied with the writing. How could he skip it? Then his work was exempted three times, and it was completed at LV1 level of 2.33 Million words. , I felt that he misunderstood me at the time and thought he wanted to delete those 100-odd chapters. In short, there are many problems with this free chapter. Of course, this is my personal opinion and does not mean that the audience thinks so. Please forgive me.

The Cryptoelectronic Warriors are all booked, and your eunuch didn't even tell you? Why don't you continue writing such a good idea? Am I really c-secret?

The book is good, but it's a pity that the main character is a bit unlike a time traveler. A black slave like the player is born to be a bull and a horse. Isn't that trying to squeeze him to death? Moreover, he can quickly accumulate experience. According to the pig's trotter talent written by the author, it is mysterious to become a quasi-legend without cheats. Or is it just a matter of simple pig's trotter strength? You're over 80 years old, are you still stressed?

It doesn't feel as attractive as the previous love system. After all, isn't going to a beer hall with a love system more interesting than some super NPC system?

I don't know if the author has played the game, but the protagonist must have played the game. There is no need to say more about the nature of the players. As long as the NPC can show the blood bar, it will definitely be killed. The protagonist is an NPC and has no means to control the players, but he spares no effort to help those players. If it is a game, forget it. After all, there are system constraints. As long as the blood bar is not displayed, it is fine. In the real world, the protagonist is dead, and becoming a god is also dead.

What did you do in 1980? Why can't you get promoted? You have nothing to do but look for a woman:

I don't know what the setting is about. Whether it's already describing the game company, or whether it's possible to reproduce the previous gunpowder to create a gun. How does the author balance the relationship between fantasy power and modern physical laws? Can both be run? Also, it's not impossible for the male protagonist to have a pure human appearance. How does he deal with the relationship with other orcs? What is the relationship between orcs and humans in this world? In Western Fantasy, player flow cannot be written casually. There are many details to be dealt with. It is interesting that the author chose orcs as the starting point for the player flow theme. The introduction shows that he has put a lot of thought into it. If the author really wants to write a good novel, write about Sanjiang, write about Sanjiang, write about fame, and write about his own style, it seems that there is still a long way to go. It has been a bit broken since I was hired and needs major repairs. I really can't bear to see such a good subject unfinished. At this stage when players are far less popular than other genres of novels, I sincerely wish the author a good writing. One last reminder, I don't know whether the author was influenced by the previous book or the author himself wanted to write it. In the past, the protagonists in the novels published by players all had no emotional lines. Not only because it was difficult to write, but also because there was a description of life. So how to deal with male and female players being raped by strong men? This is a red line, and it is recommended to delete any red lines in *life. The above are just my personal feelings and are for reference only.

No wonder he is still a scumbag at the age of 80, and he started with all the beauty

Is this the great eunuch Gouzhili?

Players have almost no role in the book other than upgrading the protagonist. Especially in the later subscription chapters, players hardly appear. It would be better not to write about players, and just write about the protagonist riding and slashing for hegemony, and evaluating beauties of various races in his spare time. It is also quite interesting. I have also read the author's first book, and I feel it is much better than the first book in terms of the creation of supporting characters and the description of war scenes. I hope it won't be a eunuch.

I just want to know how this Adventurers Association came about? It's everywhere. Without strong force, it is simply impossible for endorsements to spread across countries.

Liked it in front. But the further you get to the back, the more you feel like your mother-in-law. The status of the orcs, Li Si not wanting to be the king, etc., It is enough to mention it three or four times. There is no need to mention it once every once in a while. There are also narrations prefixed with "um", which feels a bit too much. Occasionally appearing a few times does not affect the reading, but it is uncomfortable to read too much.

Not eighty years, just sixty years. What about your achievements? ? ? What is it? What did you do? ? ? Eating and waiting to die? Or do nothing, just waiting for players you don't know if there are any to be their nanny? ? ? What nonsense! ! !

The writing is good but the content is not interesting enough. It becomes a native NPC. You don't equip the equipment in front of the players. You don't show off to others. You just develop the basic infrastructure. It feels very boring. I always highlight the protagonist's charm and then create some wonderful plots.

After reading Chapter 29, maybe it's not suitable for me to read. I didn't feel that the protagonist was a time traveler or maybe it wasn't reflected too much. There aren't many people who write about games. Apart from writing about weapons made by players and transactions with the protagonist, there is nothing interesting about it, and there is not much interaction with the protagonist.

I've seen Chapter 75. When will I become superhuman? And if you add the eunuch basket, it will become twice as big!

Don't do it, don't be a eunuch in this book. Every time you have a monthly pass, at least 1/3 will be given to you. There is also a eunuch, I just want to read a book.

The author thinks that firearms are too simple. Do you think the machine gun shoots out metal spheres? You have to know that you don't need black powder to make a machine gun, you have to use smokeless powder. Although magic can explain it, is it the job of an alchemist to create three acids, two bases and smokeless gunpowder?

Despite the name, there are really few descriptions of the players 🙂

By the way, I'm not asking for too much.

Dear Shennong, are you interested in the limited exemption?

There is no character, no charm of the protagonist, no sense of satisfaction. The protagonist gives me the feeling of dei

Next time there are votes, I will vote for Duoduo update

This author has never finished writing a book😓 Before The Invincible Young Master didn't become popular, he wrote about Vitrumans and then why didn't he write it again?

I really want to see Chen Bei, Wu Yun😭😭😭Don't exploit your shortcomings and avoid your strengths.

I hope I won't be a eunuch this time. The two books by Di Keshi and Chen Bei are my favorites, but it's a pity that there are no follow-ups.

Aren't common NPC system texts all giving players tasks to be slaves? Common operations require kickbacks and experience. There are also some operations in Super Mechanic that you can learn from. Moreover, you can quickly become stronger by using players and the system, but you can't avoid it. Although the author wants to write something different, he is putting the cart before the horse. The fourth natural disaster is not more topical than yours. What conspiracy theories, what happened to the Fourth Natural Disaster, they all have a system and you are still afraid of this and that.

Don't be a eunuch, I joined the trap in July and voted for 4 monthly votes. I feel pretty good. I may need some ways to promote it. Good luck to the author.