Pirate: After Absorbing the Blue Dragon Fruit, I Kidnapped Xia Qi

The name of the protagonist is quite dramatic. I think it's okay if you call him Czech or Roma. Jack Rom, I thought I was watching Pokémon, and I wanted to write the protagonist's name in every sentence.

Are you also a member of Dahyun's repressive era?

Well written. My personal suggestion is, don't create a second world, don't create other power systems, and don't describe too much about the protagonist's previous world. The protagonist's character is colder, more crazy, and more violent. Be a real pirate

This is entirely the author's own enjoyable novel, with lyrics that don't match and make people feel embarrassed.

There is something wrong with the fruit section. Hormone fruit and sweet fruit should not be in the nine treasure chests in the Valley of Gods. Moreover, the appearance of the sweet fruit is also wrong. The sweet fruit should be two twin fruits that look like cherries.

He kills a Sand Dollar Celestial Dragon and calls himself a god slayer. He goes around shouting, 🌿, I'm embarrassed to hear you say it, it's so embarrassing. You feel so proud to kill such a piece of trash. It's embarrassing, you're a bastard.

The beginning of the movie is a bit confusing, and it seems that it is written according to a formula, and I can't imagine the plot behind it. A picture is repeated three times, from three different perspectives.

A lot of nonsense, but I didn't see anything of my own.

What a weak writing style, what kind of tomato writing?

You don't have to click in to see it! Just reading the introduction makes me feel sick to my stomach! This is simply a bloody plot! Brainless!

I was really impressed by the series of fights, and the most important thing was the ancient martial arts-style dialogues.

Spraying flames and then palming the wind with both hands to support the fire is not piratey at all.

The God Cavalry and the Celestial Dragon were attacked as speed bumps by the pirates led by Rocks. Garp still took action after knowing that the monster was the Five Old Stars.

Add an older brother to the protagonist named Kyurem to eat the Ice Dragon Fruit, add a younger brother named Leshiram to eat the Fire Dragon, and then change the protagonist to the Thunder Dragon Fruit. The elder brother and younger brother created a plot to sacrifice to the protagonist, allowing the protagonist to have the three powers of thunder, fire and ice at the same time, becoming the Dragon of Tao 🤓.

I'm a novice in internet writing. The main character is written like a 2b character. I died of poison in chapter 20.

Don't give the protagonist a second fruit ability, otherwise the book will be useless. The fruit is just one piece of ability. With so many abilities, it's just a waste of time for others to play with you.

Zekrom is here, where is Reshiram?

There seems to be no new life lately? They started copying the original plot. You cut in so well at this point in time, but you ended up copying the original plot. How about you do a good job? Are you still taking risks? We are here to see you take risks? The original work can be written according to Liu Guan and Zhang, but you are not allowed to play the wife Cao, the adoptive father and the killer Lu Fengxian, etc.? Use your imagination, okay?

It's been 18 days. If the author doesn't update, just let me know and I won't subscribe anymore.

Is it still updated? The author speaks out and gives an accurate message!

Very nice, updated a lot the day before. It's time to update or not. Or update one or two chapters. Well

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