The Elixir of Immortality for Mortals to Achieve Immortality

There are still people who are struggling with Nangong Wan for so long. The progress of the version is too low. Many turtles have replaced Han Li. Green Han Li is equivalent to making readers of this type feel green. Don't look at these guys who dare not say green in their lives. They will not be happy if you write green in your novel. Other things like reincarnation and Han Li are just various excuses. If it is not a harem type, the average author will not offend these big green-haired turtles. The author also said that he will not accept them. If you want to read them, you can read the previous books, which were basically the same one or two years ago. Now there are many turtles, so you don't need to embarrass the little author.

Who said that Han Ligou was inexplicable? He would risk his life every time he had the chance? Just run if you can't beat him. How many times did he run away after being beaten? If you can't fight but don't run, you're a fool

I haven't finished reading the Mortal Spirit World. I can't stand it anymore. The Immortal World chapter is even more bullshit. Don't be limited by the absurdity and incomprehensibility of the original work. Nangong Wan can not do it, but Han Li can't be taken advantage of.

Hey, while talking about seeking immortality, he is involved in prostitution. It is a woman who helps when there is something. There are too many variables. It gives me the feeling that as long as something happens to the protagonist, I know that the author will help me. I am not as decisive as Han Li, who is not high in cultivation and does not touch women.

Xiao family grandfather and grandson's breath-condensing technique✔+Blood Forbidden Land Ink Dragon's Place✔+When Nangong and Han merged+a fireball spell directly sent Nangong Wan and Han Li away = the palm sky bottle was obtained and the golden book page was obtained 🤫

The author even made the basic settings wrong, so he writes nonsense every day? What magical instruments and talismans are driven by spiritual energy? Where does the spiritual power come from in the monk's body? Isn't it all mana?

Also, every time I see the sect here, I don't understand it. The devil's attack is still about ten years away, and you can't stay long and learn too much. Why don't you go to the more familiar Yellow Maple Valley? At least the original novel also writes about the sect's atmosphere. Can't you just run away then? Isn't going to another sect a black box of information? I feel that it must be what I imagined. I don't know how to control some of Han Li's opportunities. I have to deal with variables that I don't know. It's a bit confusing.

But the author's writing skills are not good, and the protagonist is just in the stage of practicing Qi, talking to himself all the time, and the corners of his mouth have an inexplicable curvature. It made me so embarrassed. Let you make some plans and plans, and your calculations are all written on your face. What are you going to do?

If the main character's method of obtaining deduction points is not expanded, unless your later cultivation level increases exponentially, it will feel like the further you go, the less deduction points you will get.

This is the point where fan texts make people uncomfortable, and they have different opinions. I wonder if someone really traveled through the past, would he be so bold as to kill Han Li? The protagonist has his own golden finger, his own plan and path of growth. There is also curiosity and an inexplicable feeling about Han Li in the original work. So, why did you come up and kill him? Take his little green bottle? There is absolutely no need to be an enemy of him. Please explain in advance that friends who don't like this setting can make a detour in advance so as not to waste your precious time.

The pace is too slow, too slow. I only write about daily life. I hardly write about cultivation. You can't write two or three hundred pictures before you can form an elixir. How can you have the energy to wait? Author, your rhythm is purely daily writing.

Wow, there are so many women competing for the protagonists in various fantasy novels. Why don't you see Xiaozi criticizing them? Their achievements have exploded in Han Li's ten universes. Han Li's Time Daozu is just a funny thing. Only Han Xiaozi is so outrageous. He said that Nangong can't be taken away and small bottles can't be snatched. It's the same as 🐢

What did this mortal ask you to write? How many chapters have you written in ink and you still haven't established the foundation?

Since you respect the setting of the original work and want to gain some advantage without destroying the setting of the original work, why didn't you accept Han Li as his apprentice when he was weak? You can obviously kill Master Jinguang, go to Yellow Maple Valley to build the foundation, and then accept Han Li as a disciple. First, you can show him the preciousness and single effect of Towering Fortune Dew, so that it can be used easily in the future, just don't point out the bottle. Use Han Li's resources to form pills early to wait for the young master of Qingyang Gate to overturn, intercept and kill Yuan Yao to get the crying soul and Qinghuo Lei, and kill the remnant soul Xuan Gu to get the complete Xuanyin Sutra. Why I suggest you take this path is because the six extremes of the top magic skills in the human world only exist in the minds of Liu Dao and Wen Tianren. Han Li's original work didn't even lick out the licks. You need to search for the secret techniques of the Yuanying Soul after the Yuanying Stage of the Xuanyin Sutra, especially the Xuanyin Sutra's restraint on the extreme yin techniques. You can definitely take Jiyin Island to form a Nascent Soul yourself and then use the Ghost Mist Pit to kill Wen Tianren to get the skills, especially the Yinlong Jue and Peak Phoenix Peiluan Skill. This depends on which female character you like? Use them to go to the Xutian Palace dungeon in the middle stage of promotion.

Author, don't be a licker, don't be a holy mother, be sure to kill decisively, and recruit more women

Can you omit the emotional scenes? It looked pretty good in the early stage, but once it got to the emotional scenes it was a little disgusting. I'd better omit it later.

I still wrote too few novels, and I felt pretty good at the beginning. But when I wanted to continue to expand, my writing ability began to fail to keep up with my own ideas. There is nothing wrong with the author's idea. Now it is time to conceive the plot. I will start writing the book and see if I can write more. If you want to write a novel for a longer period of time, even if this book does not do well, you can still accumulate experience for the next novel. As for some inexplicably malicious comments or suggestions about the protagonist of the original work, they can be ignored. A novel that even the protagonist is disgusted with cannot be read. I really can't imagine that I can still read the original novel, become a fan of the derivative fanfic, and become the author's traffic. They are just trolls who came to disturb the author. My opinion is this. I don't bother with the little green bottle because the protagonist can have stronger plug-ins. The reason why I don't worry about Nangong Wan is because the combination of the original protagonists Han Li and Nangong Wan was originally a bloody and unexpected plot, and then the protagonist of the same novel does it again? Too repetitive. Unless the protagonist's strength is the same as Nangong Wan's from the beginning, then there will be a suitable reason. However, in this case, the protagonist of the fanfic is very powerful from the beginning, and the plot line cannot follow the original work. In addition to borrowing the background and characters, the author has to create a lot of original plots to fill in. The most important reason is that there are many famous female characters in the original novel. There is no need to worry about one original heroine. Even if it is a harem novel, there is no need to include every one of them. In this way, the novel will become a novel that only accepts women.

1. Judging from the Immortal World chapter, Nangong Wan cannot move. Han Li, the master of Samsara Palace, also restored the memory and cultivation of Nangong Wan's previous life, Gan Rushuang. The two of them also have their daughter Jiao San 2. Zi Ling is the reincarnation of Mo Caihuan, which was confirmed in the Immortal World chapter. Han Li told Nangong Wan that Zi Ling had a past life entanglement with him, and Zi Ling was also restored by the Master of Samsara Palace. Reminisced 3. Yuan Yao is an important beauty of Han Li. The last time she used it in Zhang Tian Ping was to save Yuan Yao and enlighten Li Feiyu, but she did not enlighten Han Xiaomei The female characters that appeared in the original work, I personally think the author can combine it with animation. It will be good if it is popular, and the results of the book will be very good

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Although the rhythm is not fast, it seems to be getting more and more energetic overall. Come on 😁

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Qidian. Com has too many authors now, and many veteran authors have turned away. New authors should calm down and just write first. Isn't it normal to have poor grades? How can there be so many talented newcomers who become gods in one book? Just work hard to finish the book smoothly and slowly find your own rhythm. Newcomers have nothing, no fame, and no experience. They are like barefoot. The most important thing is to keep working hard. Those old authors have already put on vests, and the great master Bai Jin has lived a decent life. You are a newcomer and have just started. You have your shortcomings and advantages. If a newcomer dares to write anything, his liver will be ruined. Come on author! Just calm down, believe in yourself, and just stick to it! It is recommended to increase the concentration and take a look at it if your mentality becomes bad in the future.

You are creating an original female character. .

Comparing level 4 blood jade spiders during the Qi refining period? ?

Qidian. Com has too many authors now, and many veteran authors have turned away. New authors should calm down and just write first. Isn't it normal to have poor grades? How can there be so many talented newcomers who become gods in one book? Just work hard to finish the book smoothly and slowly find your own rhythm. Newcomers have nothing, no fame, and no experience. They are like barefoot. The most important thing is to keep working hard. Those old authors have already put on vests, and the great master Bai Jin has lived a decent life. You are a newcomer and have just started. You have your shortcomings and advantages. If a newcomer dares to write anything, his liver will be ruined. Come on author! Just calm down, believe in yourself, and just stick to it! It is recommended that you increase your concentration and take a look at it if your mentality becomes bad in the future.

The progress of this plot is considered slow, right? Cultivation is quite fast.