I'm Already the Number One Fire Release User in the Ninja World, So How Can I Become Hokage?

The first time there was so much emphasis on strength, there was no specific way to show it. The first time I fought, the reason given was that I couldn't hurt other people. It's useless to explain more. This is a novel written in your own hands. Don't deceive yourself. Secondly, you have created a lot of bells and whistles and it seems that you are going to take the development route. This is not 2005. Countless fellow fans have blocked the way for you. You want to find a new way but you are too immature. What kind of football ktv is there to serve the people? Who wants to see you enjoying yourself? Thirdly, the protagonist has a self-indulgent personality, feeling that he is an adult who disdains the company of others, and often exposes things because he is bored. . . The protagonist with this kind of character is really stupid. . I feel like the protagonist of the first-generation online novel in 2005. He wants to be stubborn, but he wants to be courageous but unable to do so. He is purely a barking dog but does not bite. Fourth, as an Uchiha, your main job at this time is to quickly marry Mikoto as the team leader, and you are doing some irrelevant things here every day. I really can't see it.

It's only been a dozen chapters and Naruto fans haven't retained it yet, so why do you just do the urban thing? Writing this thing might as well be a conspiracy theory. I know the author wants to pave the way for the protagonist to not be short of money in the future, but try to do it in one go. Having more than ten chapters is completely meaningless in the world of Naruto.

The three golden chapters at the beginning are so difficult to read that one can only skip and read them. It turns out that the following chapters are also the same. What kind of writing method is this? It's hard to read anymore. The combination of narration and inner activities is extremely uncomfortable. After flipping through a few pages, it doesn't have any Naruto flavor at all.

During the Minato period, you said in your introduction that none of the eight Hokages could use fire escape. Who were you talking to? Are you running for the Fourth Hokage or the Ninth Hokage?

New author? It's fun to write for yourself. I write a lot for exams and I'm not the main character. Just write about business, there are so many, are you going to teach everyone how to open it? Hurry back to the main story, and those little toys of yours also involve too much, KTV and ninja cards, why don't these two third generations appear?

Entertainment to the Hokage, but also looks down on swordsmanship... An adult soul, the behavior of a child. As a coder, I haven't studied ninjutsu yet. Urban literature in the skin of Naruto

Seriously. I don't know what you think. People who watch Naruto, what factors don't you know? You always feature in those unnecessary commercials because you think your grades are too good. Need to poison readers? There is not a single bit of key that needs to be written. Come up with a business model from time to time. Who wants to see business empires in a world with unenlightened minds and frequent wars? Isn't this unhealthy?

I sorted out some questions and picked them up to see which one I could use. 1. ‌Goal deviation: fundamental lack of growth direction‌ ‌Surface settings:‌ Solve the problem of Uchiha integrating into Konoha Village. ‌Core Problem:‌The author failed to effectively implement this core goal. Slogans have been shouted, fields have been planted, and KTV restaurants have been built, but has the Uchiha problem been substantively solved? The answer is no‌. Even deliberately emphasizing details such as the "small treasury" highlights the lack of relationship with the family. ‌Consequences:‌ Writing content should always serve a core purpose. When the goal itself is unclear or even invalid, it will inevitably lead to readers' expectations and goals being disappointed, and they will lose interest in the so-called "growth line". 2. ‌Sluggish rhythm: repetitive narrative and loose structure‌ ‌Appearance controversy:‌ The "slow" pace may be the intuitive feeling of some readers. ‌Deep crux:‌ The problem is not the quality of a single story (the short story is actually pretty good), but the overall ‌chaos in timeline planning‌ and ‌inefficient repetition of character creation‌. ‌Specific performance: ‌ Repeatedly building up the same character traits of the protagonist through different events (such as the way "The Will of Fire" is displayed). This technique seems redundant in non-social reform themes. Just focus on the key characteristics. Over-strengthening leads to weak plot advancement and delayed viewing experience. 3. The background is weak: the foundation of "seeing the big from the small" is unstable‌ ‌Creative intention:‌ Trying to use the small stage of the class to show the overall pattern of Konoha Village, promote the plot and build bonds. ‌Execution flaws: ‌ As the cornerstone of "seeing the big from the small", the big background - the depiction of the contradictions in Konoha Village - ‌seriously lacks the necessary foreshadowing and texture‌. ‌Key missing points:‌ ‌The "big" background board (Konoha Village, Uchiha) fails to carry the "epic sense" or fascinating "story" it deserves. Without sufficient background support of thick or dramatic tension, the "small" narrative (class story) is difficult to effectively map and leverage the "big" theme (the relationship between the village and Uchiha), which greatly reduces the effectiveness of this creative strategy. ‌Editorial Responsibility:‌The editor failed to provide constructive suggestions on this key concept and failed to point out the decisive role of the grand background setting in the success of the "seeing the big from the small" approach. It was a dereliction of duty.

The author has never watched Naruto, there are all kinds of messy two-color designs, and the effects of talents are equivalent to nothing after being obtained. The most important thing is that they are all water.

A plot that would normally be too many for more than a dozen chapters can stretch to more than sixty chapters. It's really a piece of shit. Even if more than half of the chapters are deleted, it won't affect reading.