Douluo Dalu: My System Is Actually Old Huo
斗罗：我的系统居然是老霍
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- Eastern Fantasy
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- Otherworld Continent
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Don't let yourself go, change the evil fire demon dragon and put it back for me 😡
Regarding plot rhythm
I am new to the online literature world and have read a lot of fanfics, so I plan to create an ideal character in my mind. There may be many areas for improvement in terms of content. Readers are also welcome to leave messages. I will learn from the experience and strive to bring more happiness to readers in the next book.
Why did the simulated soul skills hide from Dugu Bo but not Sword Douluo? And if Tang Hao can leave later, why should Sword Douluo agree to his conditions? There must be a substitute before Sword Douluo. The sword that Sword Douluo gives to the protagonist is a gift from Tian Dou Empire. Anyone who can come up with such a plot is talented. Later, when I saw Qian Renxue, I became anxious. It was really unbelievable. The protagonist was probably 7-8 years old, so I started writing this kind of story. Secondly, Qian Renxue is the inheritor of the Angel God, not a succubus, so she would not do such a thing to anyone. All I can say is that the previous and later chapters are contradictory, the setting is unclear, and I don't know much about some of the characters. When I was about to run away when I saw being threatened by Sword Douluo, I was still thinking about Thirty Years in Hedong and Thirty Years in Hexi. You backhand and sing conquest to the opponent. I don't know if the protagonist is convinced or not, but I am really convinced. If you have a system, plan it carefully. Don't always write the protagonist as if his cerebellum has atrophied. Secondly, if the protagonist has Xiaoqing, just make pure love. Why write a harem and force every character in the original novel to have contact with the protagonist and forcibly create a connection.
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