Tokyo: Who Told You to Use This to Pay Your Debt?

The protagonist is like a helpless Hakimi, who can bully ordinary Japanese, but can do nothing against the female goblin. You can only try to commit suicide

Why the inexplicable addition of weirdness?

The style of painting is also very magical. I thought it was the version where the system recruits girls. It turned out to be a supernatural unfolding. I thought it was a supernatural unfolding, but it turned out to be a twisted daily novel. I haven't seen the main plot yet, but there is one story that is quite interesting. However, the protagonist is indeed written a bit too ruthlessly.

Later it becomes a group portrait, which is boring and the author cannot focus on the main character. If you can't write a good story, it won't look good.

At first I thought it was a light novel, but then it turned into an urban horror. Will the protagonist fall in love and kill an extraterrestrial demon for a whole novel?

Now I feel a little confused, as if the main plot has disappeared. There are many female protagonists written on the label, but now there is no more, and the purpose is not clear. It is very abrupt that I want to become a god, and I am pushed by the monster. I don't understand why the protagonist does this. Normally speaking, whether they are cultivating immortals or some novels, they all have a purpose when they become gods and seek immortality. Some are for great freedom, some are for seeking Tao, and some are for changing the world. But now I can't see it. I can't see what core is driving the protagonist.

The inexplicable protagonist, the inexplicable plot, and the feeling of powerlessness are well written, but this is an online novel, so the evaluation can only be based on literary youth.

I think the author's main plot should be to discover weirdness, use weirdness, and become weird, rather than fighting wits and courage with Tianyi. Otherwise, what's the point of writing a weird thing, using mortal power to fight against gods? Demonstrate the greatness of mortals?

It's a bit off the mark. Now that extraordinary elements have been added, I look forward to the protagonist's reciprocal counterattack. If it's just calculation, even if you win, it will feel a bit like a sewer rat, and it will feel like a petty family. If it were reality, of course the winner takes all, no matter what the means, but if the novel is still aggrieved, if the emotions are not released, they will run away. It looks good now, although it is slow to gain momentum, but it is worth looking forward to.

Why does this wind look so familiar? You are not the only one reincarnated 🙂