I Am the Six-Eared Saint

Is the author behind the water? It gives me a feeling of being released into the sea.

Hurry up and let human beings cultivate into cosmic creatures! So that humans can ascend to dimension

No, your emperor was looking for someone to discuss it, and he said he wanted to find more people, but in the end he just found a few spies and eunuchs? You didn't even find the Ninth Minister of the Cabinet?

What a strange book, and it makes me feel a little bit emotional. The kind of side-door thoughts in the article are really the kind that you can understand but don't want to do.

It's so messy at the back. It's a group portrait, and the main character can't be seen. To put it nicely, it's better to be the mastermind behind the scene, but not to say it's just a minor supporting role among the roadside supporting characters.

It makes my brain hurt to watch! The idea is quite good and there is a lot of useful information, but there are too many and the protagonist becomes a passerby! No main line! A pot of random stew! It's edible, but not cooked!

The whole process was filled with thoughts and self-pleasure, just like watching a man who went crazy reading philosophy books lying on the hospital bed and thinking randomly, without any ups and downs. Boring and boring.

The author seems to have fallen into a misunderstanding, which is to tell a good story and tell a good story. The author wanted to expand the world view for him, but he forgot the main protagonist.

A good fantasy martial arts turned political court, this book is ruined

A very interesting book, but there is a little too much pure setting in the early stage, which may attract old bookworms.

It's awesome. The setting alone is enough to attract people. The difficulty lies in whether you can grasp the rhythm and world view in the later stage. You are either a eunuch or a great god.

Let's take a group portrait behind the scenes. If it's well-written, it's full of wonder and beauty, but if it's not well-written, flies are flying around. The author's writing is mediocre, and the free chapter is barely worth reading, but the paid version feels like it's not worth it. The general direction is to build a world where everyone is like a dragon, and then fly to the stars and the sea. The article is not concise enough, and the readers are discouraged. The character's perspective is not clear enough, and it's easy to feel sleepy after watching it. In the previous chapters, it was said that the protagonist's death was due to observing the great road and becoming a transcendent existence. Later, I started chattering about the chain reaction that occurred because the protagonist wanted to build a satellite.

I feel like the biggest problem is that it's too wordy. Things that can be clearly explained in one sentence, the author clearly has to use five sentences to explain.

The ideas are strange, just full of nonsense and confusing. What a idea wasted.

The water is real water. There is no trace of the protagonist in more than ten chapters. A battle has more than ten chapters.

I'm babbling and don't know what I'm talking about.

The writing is actually good, but I really can't find the point. I know you want to write about major events of the times, but what you write is too detailed. There is no focus. The main character is also invisible, and there are too many other characters. I can't remember it clearly, and it doesn't have any distinctive features. There are also many characters who, to put it bluntly, are all set from other stories. Some of them haven't even changed their names, so you can be a bit more subtle. It's okay, but we don't have a sense of participation or immersion in what we watch. This was very helpless. I couldn't stand it any longer, so I withdrew.

Writing the plot into paragraphs, plus explanations, allows readers to piece together a big world view and story. It is a bit interesting, but not much, and it is too brain-consuming and too dry. It is like passing a flower by beating a drum. Each person makes an action and then passes the flower to the next person. When people perform actions, it becomes a plot with explanations and annotations added. Let the reader finally figure out what this game is? But this kind of writing has no climax and is a bit wordy. This book seems interesting and full of expectations, but there is no climax. It is touching and unpleasant to read.

Water, stream of consciousness writing, unclear purpose and unclear environment

What kind of bullshit novel are you writing? Selling dog meat on sheep's heads. I read the theme of Fantasy Cultivation. When I read the introduction, I thought it was some kind of six-eared macaque spirit. When I read the first two chapters, I thought it was mixed martial arts. However, after reading more than 20 chapters, it turned out to be a fight without a fight. I was the protagonist and his master having sex, and we were just some inexplicable people having sex. Waste of time.

I can't understand it, it's confusing 😴

The setting is good, but the story is not good. I can't tell a story.

. . . Are you sure this is a behind-the-scenes flow and not a background flow? The protagonist is like a setting poem, and a bit like the immortal who passed the heavenly book to Zhang Jiao, but one part is missing.

The front is okay, the post-80s generation basically has nothing to watch, the main character is hidden, so what are you watching?

The early stage was okay, but in the middle it felt like all kinds of fantasy and nonsense, with no focus or sense of substitution, which is a pity.

The mountain dog has disappeared since the protagonist came out.

Author, when is the new book expected to be released, or are you planning to continue writing fantasy martial arts?

Queen Huang, have you forgotten your old love (Fantasy, Black Light) now that you have a new love (Rebirth, Liu Er)?😢😢😢

Is it finished? Can someone summarize what the protagonist's Twelve Yuanchen Demons have been changed into, and what personnel they summarized it from. I can't see it all in this video. I want to know 🥺🥺🥺

It's pure bullshit. It's a mess. I didn't want anyone to read it in the first chapter. I took a hard look and found that the rest is still bullshit.