The Old Demon Crossing the Tribulation Through American Comics

The main problem is that the protagonist is a native of the world of cultivating immortals. I don't like this very much, so I stopped watching it.

I don't know the plot of the same human novel. The biggest problem is that there is no way to reasonably arrange the plot and opportunities of the original work. The more you write, the more inconsistent it becomes. Since it is not the original work, readers don't know the plot, so you can write whatever you want!

I saw corpse training, clones, and soul training. I am picking up yin and replenishing yang! ! !

There is an animated self-stopping team member who travels to the world of swords and magic

The sauce is here, bubbling + tasting!

Kryptonians are just a setting that is the source of Superman's superpowers. In fact, there are many villains that exceed the upper limit of Kryptonians, but as long as it is Superman in the main universe, Superman's idealistic power can defeat any DC villain. The true son of the universe, the center of the universe, exists because of Superman. But on the other hand, in the Barbatos incident, hundreds of thousands of supermen were just like soldiers in the dark multiverse, and they were killed by blackened heroes at will. And once Superman turns black, it feels like Superman has lost his strength and destiny. Speedmaster can match the level of Superman in the main universe, but he is crushed to death by the villain as a mere bystander. The unjust Superman has lost his strength, and may be able to show his power for a while, but after all, it is impossible for Superman to have the fate and strength to be invincible. Except for a few golden supermen and the main universe supermen, the genuine supermen are relatively powerless against universe-level villains, let alone Kryptonians. In order for the Kryptonians in the DC universe to have an upper limit, they must either be powerful mutant supermen or corresponding characters like Speedmaster who still have room to operate. Otherwise, facing universe-level villains and major multiverse events will be just a side road. Hundreds of thousands of genuine Superman can only serve as a footman here, let alone a Kryptonian.

I didn't look carefully at first, thinking it was 130,000 book friends, but it turned out to be 13, and book reviews and book friends are both the same number.

The plot is interesting, but the writing is not fluent. Typos and broken sentences are too painful to read. I suggest you read it through and revise it. I hope that the character of the protagonist will not collapse later. You are an old devil. You can be bad, you can be evil, you can be both good and evil, and you can be full of swear words, but remember not to lose your character.

It's so funny that I haven't watched it for 3 days and I'm just a eunuch.

Are demon cultivators essentially lunatics? The crazier you are, the more suitable you are for cultivating demons.

Maybe there are few comments because some people didn't see the behind? The previous plot didn't give me a good impression, because as an old demon who has overcome tribulations, he is a bit out of character, and I can't see any big calculations. Ye doesn't have much power. But the writing got better and better later on, and the plot began to develop interestingly.

It's so pretty, it's like fairy grass to me, but it's a pity there's so little of it

At the beginning, the plot was quite satisfactory, with a bit of a drag on the pacing. I kept skipping to read it. The plot only improved when I was about to give up the book. What left me with was the chapter where the protagonist started to cause trouble with a vest, which was a small climax. The plot then connected tightly and immediately entered the plot of Injustice. It can be said that it was well-written. It gradually gets better, and immediately introduces a new plot, and digs a hole where a second female time traveler is suspected of intruding. This kind of conflict and opposition is very good to keep the readers. I think that apart from the drag on the previous plot, there are basically no big problems. If I write at this pace, the author has platinum qualifications.

Squat down and wait and see what happens next

Not bad, not bad. I felt relieved after seeing the author's previous works of a million words.

Why don't you update it anymore and give up?

The resume of accepting a female plant as an apprentice gives the species a sense of responsibility as a full-time nanny😁

If you don't update for three days, you're going to be a eunuch.

I also wanted to wait and see what happens next... And this is the result?

It's been so long since I've published a new book. What's wrong with this, author?

What's wrong? The bottom is gone?

There is no update for four days, and the update is broken. You are really smart. Hurry up and beat the DC universe. If you can't beat it, use three boxes to make a teleportation array and directly transfer to Marvel or other universes. You can also play house on Earth. Who will die if you don't?