Xiuxian: I Am a Human Being, Not a Human Race!

The material is excellent, the rhythm and writing are good, but the biological knowledge in the book is somewhat wrong. I suggest the author check the relevant information.

Do you like using parentheses so much? You can't write without parentheses. I'm studying speech writing in Chinese, like (here, there's applause).

Now don't write about female protagonists in fairy tales, otherwise the novel will die miserably.

It's very interesting. The author has great imagination. Come on!

There are so many typos, please correct them, otherwise it will affect the reading experience too much.

Have you ever practiced immortality? Take some things for granted

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It suddenly occurred to me that in order to continue, genes will do all kinds of incredible things, such as transforming males into females. Then the question arises. As the only human being in this world, for the continuation of the race, what will his genes do? Should he assimilate other human races or reproduce by himself?

The protagonist feels that human beings and the human race are two different things, and that he belongs to the human race, not the human race, then: 1. To this world, the protagonist is actually a new race that is similar to humans but not actually human; 2. Since the races are different, first of all, human luck will definitely not be blessed. Secondly, all kinds of magic weapons and secret techniques that must be used by human blood should also have no connection with the protagonist; 3. If the Human Emperor saw the protagonist, a "human" who is similar to the human race in the world, wouldn't he really think that the protagonist was something specially created by some great power to mess with the human race? This is a perfect example of Bo Xun's pseudo-Buddha messing up the Dharma!

Do you really know the meaning of evolution? All evolution is to make ends meet, to survive, to reproduce, and to survive. Evolution itself is a matter of making do. Useful things, as long as they can be used, will never be more. Useless things, as long as they are harmless, will make do even if they are not used. They degrade very slowly. Therefore, if you really know about evolution, don't use the word evolution. Of course, you can also write about active evolution, but what you wrote at the beginning was passive adaptive evolution?

After reading the introduction, I guess the protagonist is an innate divine larvae. How can the human body be so powerful? Most people who travel to a completely unfamiliar environment will most likely not be able to adapt and die on the spot🙃

If human beings were really like this, with unlimited evolution and unlimited potential, they would have entered the age of super gods long ago! I can only say that the gap between us humans and you is just like the gap between us humans and the prehistoric human race...

After seeing the introduction, let me complain first: First of all, adrenaline is not a super energy. It is a signaling molecule that regulates metabolism and cannot provide energy. Secondly, do you think that human beings have evolved very well? With a useless organ like the appendix, nature's selection criteria is that it is sufficient. Second, do you know what evolution is? When the environment changes, individuals who can adapt to the environment survive, and those who cannot adapt die. The traits that can adapt to the environment are inherited with genes. In other words: there is no active evolution ability, just unadapted death. Emphasis: those who can adapt to survive and reproduce. Natural selection, survival of the fittest.

Will there be reproductive isolation between the protagonist and the people in this world?

No matter how good the first part is, the second part will be bad. The overall situation cannot be controlled, the combat power is broken, chatting with people is as unattractive as running a journal, and the protagonist has no sense of existence.

This introduction... I want to curse, but I feel there is a generation gap with the author.

Human: Is this thing us humans? Theory of Evolution: Don't be ridiculous, I would rather say it is evolution. The fittest survive, the unfit are eliminated, and future generations become more adaptable to the environment. High school biology teacher: I want to criticize a classmate by name! I clearly emphasized that the unit of biological evolution is the population! Not an individual!

After reading the first chapter, I have a good impression. It uses modern knowledge of the human body to fight against the fantasy setting of cultivating immortals. However, flesh and blood bodies have their limits. Either they will become immortals with low performance, or they will be genetically modified to ascend in the future.

This book has good ideas But there are too many women, and no matter how old these women are, they all have a beauty that is missing their brainstem.

... The supporting actress starts to poison her as soon as she comes out... The protagonist reveals her true colors, giving people the look of a woman she has never seen before, the kind that the protagonist will not get angry no matter what she does, emmm...

The more I look at it, the more I feel that this is a matter of falling from three dimensions to two dimensions, with the body decaying and adapting to two dimensions, rather than traveling to the world of immortal cultivation and evolving, because this world is too friendly to him and is not good for the world. Why is the world so good to you? There is no such thing as a free lunch

No matter how the book is cut, there is indeed a problem with the setting that human beings are not human beings. It is normal that I can't write it down. The setting of the Dao Master of the virus space is even more problematic. Viruses are living things and are composed of water and organic matter. They are actually among the five elements and are not considered a path. If I can't write it down, it doesn't make much sense to continue to use crappy dialogue.

The previous article is very good, although it is a bit girl-licking, but the quality is almost good enough to become a god. I originally planned to collect and support it, but after getting the viral space, the quality began to decline rapidly, and the data was a mess. A little shrimp in the world of immortality directly relied on the space to compete with the top bosses and compete with the real immortals. The plot also became very poor. Was it written by someone else?

Evolution is the selection of individuals by the population according to the environment. Individuals never evolve!

Is it all AI writing now? Can't stand it anymore

I haven't read it. In order to comment, I subscribed to a chapter. If I feel that I am not a human race, then the monster race evolved from monkeys. If you don't identify with any race, then you are a cell race. They are just extraterrestrial demons that look the same as humans. The human race is not a human race. The human race is the one who agrees with the concept of the human race. There are so many races in China, and there are a bunch of human races in foreign countries. Nuwa Fuxi has the head of a snake and the body of a dragon. How dare you say that they are not a human race? If the protagonist doesn't agree with the human race's ideals, can he still get a chance from the human race after reading other comments? With this name and this introduction, no wonder it has been criticized by so many people. If you haven't seen it, I have to come in and say a few words.

The beginning is very interesting, the early stage is really good, but the further it goes, the more it becomes a mess. The protagonist is very smart in the early stage, but the brain in the later stage is not as good as the protagonist of Shuangwen. The whole look is disgusting and unpleasant. So Emperor Honglei is also a dinner among dinners. Even the novices from decades ago couldn't write such a ridiculous thing. It's really disgusting. I spent all my money to read so many chapters.

There are too many typos, so I've discarded them. The author, please pay more attention to them in the future.

G is just G. I feel like it is really meaningless after seeing it. It takes a lot of effort just to update it, not to mention the bunch of typos. Looking at the other books in this author's account, the author's writing skills are basically below a million words. In theory, there is still room for saving this book. If he wants to reach a better level later, it is estimated to be at least two million words, but I feel that the author cannot control it, and he may not be willing to expend such effort.

The mistake was that the step was too big, and the balls were pulled all of a sudden. Originally, it was just a matter of having a good time in the human world, but setting up a virus space, and then having contact with the top people while still in the human world, directly lowering the IQ of the NPCs again and again. Later, cheating in order to open a harem is even more outrageous.