My Painting Style Was Wrong at the Beginning of Fairy Sword World

Giant Poison, I couldn't stand it in the first world. Regarding me, I am the ceiling of this world's combat power. Not only did I not transform into my ancestors, but I was submissive to everyone. The explanation given by the author is that he was a small person in his previous life. He suddenly gained strong combat power, so he was not used to it and could not transform it for a while.

The male protagonist is a power bank. Absolute ecstasy if encountered by an advanced civilization.

This conversation sounds retarded. . . . Totally out of character. Brother, please study more on how to write it. Everything else is fine.

Generally speaking, the subject matter is quite good, but the writing style makes the protagonist too low-key. Although he is an ordinary person who has gained power like the Sentinel setting, the protagonist behaves like a primary school student who has gained power.

Sentinel's power of millions of stars is just an appearance, its real ability is to modify reality.

The salted fish in my perception: I clearly know that my abilities are not enough, and I also feel that I don't have the perseverance to study hard to improve my abilities, so I muddle along in life. The reason is that I don't have enough ability and I don't want to work hard. But based on the protagonist's ability at the beginning, is it still a waste? Disgusting?

It doesn't feel that good to be a descendant of Li Xiaoyao. Maybe it's because I grew up watching the Fairy Sword TV series and unconsciously regarded myself as a person of Li Xiaoyao's generation.

🙂 Isn't Xianyi's TV series trash? It's nothing like the game. Just like the evil sword fairy can destroy the world

Good guy, just lie down, why don't you just go and be reincarnated? If you have the ability to wander, you have to be flat.

Why is this book on the new book list? It all depends on peers

The author made a mistake that many authors make, that is, the protagonist is very naive, and his behavior, dialogue, and the like give people a low-key feeling! Not calm enough, very out of touch. In a word, Xiaobaiwen!

... How long have you been talking to yourself involuntarily? Do you need to recommend a hospital?

The subject matter is good, but the author wants to make pig's feet funny, but the writing style is not enough. . . How embarrassing.

I have the idea, but the writing is not good

The author's layout is too small. It makes no difference whether you have the Sentinel ability or not. He has not written about the pleasure of having the Sentinel ability at all. He is still forging for two years. You don't claim to be the king and hegemony, but the rich people who live well and drink well do not live a good life. What are the powerful families? The rich and ruthless rich gentry, the bandits who burned and looted several villages, and the wealthy and comfortable life of wandering the streets in a rich city, listening to books, walking birds, hooking up with fences, and drinking, are all much better than this blacksmithing, and is there no control over blacksmithing in this world? To sum up: the plot is bland and not as interesting as the title.

The character of the protagonist is so mediocre that even if he is invincible, he cannot hide the mediocrity deep inside. The righteous Superman has been drawing his righteousness, and the evil and unjust Superman has been drawing his evil side. Iron Man and Batman will not be separated from their money abilities. And the protagonist here, the author, you have been surrounding his mediocrity! The protagonist's abilities are not mediocre, but his handling methods are particularly mediocre.

After such a strong start, are you still short of money? It will take a long time to kill just one bandit!

Goldfinger is good, but the time-traveling world is a bit lacking. Sword I and Sword III are okay, but the other versions are not very famous. This is the first time I know that there are other versions of the game. The protagonist's personality is also a bit too crotch-heavy. He is invincible but not strong enough. He calls people "big brother" and "senpai" when meeting people. Old people can accept it, and young people also call him "big brother". . . No points. I'm writing a novel, and the focus is on the protagonist. Even if the supporting characters can't all revolve around the protagonist, it can't be the other way around. Isn't it good to be selfish? You have to know that the readers are all from the perspective of the protagonist.

If you don't understand, just ask, why are the protagonists in so many recent books over two meters tall...? It's not Warhammer or Pirates. Why do you need such a tall height in the world of Sword and Sword?

Sentinel of the Dark Dynasty＞Cosmic Cube Molecule Man＞Secret Wars 2 Transcendent + Molecule Man＞Complete Cosmic Cube The complete Cosmic Cube restarts om (the omnipotent universe), and the incomplete Cosmic Cube destroys om. The following is a suggestion to open Superman Sentinel 91, and there are several origins of Sentinel. In Dark Reign, it is said that Sentinel existed in BC and was the God of BC

One millionth of the sun can burn the earth like a glass ball, but what are millions of stars?

I can't stand it anymore after the system goes online.

It doesn't look good. It started well. Recall that moment and clear the place instantly.

The author's timeline of Fairy Sword is wrong, isn't it? The distance is too close. There is at least a 200-year difference between Fairy Sword 3 and Fairy Sword 1. There is a gap of 60 years between them.

There are a lot of typos in the recent chapters.

Will you go to Xuanyuan Sword😏

This subject matter is really good, it would be great if there are experts who can give it a try

The plot is average. My evaluation is that it's like an assembly line. Anything written by AI is better than this.