Pirate: Start with One Slot of Equipment

The plot advances too slowly and there is too much nonsense. After so many chapters, there is only one Synchro 25% and one Specialty. There is basically no progress in the Devil Fruit. What are you going to do after writing this?

Write this again, what kind of disaster fruit can not only absorb diseases, but also pain and injuries? If it absorbs diseases and pain, it can absorb injuries, so what? People need to be proficient in medicine to use the fruits of surgery. It would be better for you to absorb all the concepts directly.

They were hugging each other, playing and pulling each other, and finally said that the world is so big, I want to become stronger, and I want to go out and see, so I won't take you with me. I patted my butt and left. When I met Luo, he was secretive. He played the Riddler and didn't tell others that his sister was still alive. He just stayed at his own place. It was really embarrassing.

The protagonist now carries three oil bottles and writes daily routine and training every day 🙂. There are very few fights. Is this the Pirate King? Why don't you ask me to play the Nuan Nuan Nook Game with Pirates?

It's better to change it in your heart. If someone sees you talking like this, you will be in trouble. After revising it and reading it again, there are fewer people writing like this recently. I didn't expect that there are still authors writing like this.

Can you just write about the world of One Piece? Traveling through too many worlds and encountering unfamiliar ones, I have no desire to continue reading! Can you also write it longer? Two to three million words is best. The previous book ended just after Invincible, and the dozens of heroines who paved the way for the entire book ended without making any progress at all! How is this different from a eunuch? I had no desire to open the previous book Traveling Through Many Worlds, and the last book ended before I even opened it!

Such an awesome Goldfinger writes such rubbish

It's hard to criticize, as I haven't learned any lessons from the previous book. . .

The idealistic world of One Piece itself is not lacking in fantasy, but many authors like to mix in content from other worlds or themes. However, there are not many fans nowadays, and there are really not many well-written ones. If the author really likes to write pirate fans, he hopes to publish a pure pirate series in the future.

Can you write less about the psychological growth process of Joel and the protagonist? One Piece is obviously a hot-blooded series, but now it is almost written by the author as the growth process of an underage. The outlook on life and values ​​must be written in a large space, regardless of priority.

It's an invincible plug-in. I don't think about how to become stronger. The procrastination in writing is disgusting.

I created my own Devil Fruit, which is either directly powerful or interesting and can open up my imagination. What kind of disaster fruit is this?

I suggest you change your name! If your name starts with One Piece: You will not be able to enjoy the benefits of searching for fans.

The writing style is still so ordinary and wordy, even if you don't read a few chapters, it won't affect your reading. This is a pirate novel, not an urban novel.

I wrote a half-day survival story, but I can't read One Piece at all.

Author, is there a popular heroine in the original novel? Who is there?

Put the knife in the equipment slot, at least the great swordsman will not run away. Teaching the best swordsman in the world is much more cost-effective than training at a pheasant dojo now. It's a complete waste of time. At this stage, Pig's Feet is working hard to develop the fruit, polish the body and find a way to get the six postures and domineering methods. The right way is to practice a hairy sword. Gather strength and men, attack Moria, and get Qiushui. It's 50 chapters and the plot is off track. Don't waste your energy writing about cultivation. The synchrony is 25%. You are so fucking funny.

Why now that I see a bunch of good news and bad news in the introduction, I don't want to read it. Don't authors nowadays even write a decent introduction?

Now there is blood, bones, disease, and shadow. Now it lacks flesh, fascia, lack of toxins, lack of bacteria, lack of three disasters and nine disasters, and lack of contract ability. With you, I am the new Im

Who is Joel? Is he an original character? Such a large amount of ink

Devil Fruit comes from the Devil Fruit Tree, which has upper and lower levels. The Devil Fruit Tree was brought here by aliens using the spaceship [King of Heaven]. The fruit is for the small robots with wings that appear in the comics. They transformed the entire planet, so there are such outrageous geological structures, and the transformation of the indigenous people led to such outrageous races [races such as giants]. This is all found in comics 🙂 It is really difficult to explain the combination of the power of will and the origin of the world.

The protagonist is inconsistent: being a pirate is too dangerous, and the Don Quixote family

The fighting power is so fast, is it almost over?

From the moment the golden lion was killed, the plot and combat power collapsed!

Harem, does anyone know?

The protagonist has taken the initiative to treat Ming Ge's cadres, but why not treat Luo completely at the beginning? Does it make sense to only treat part of it? And I can't understand why I want to cooperate with Brother Ming.

I was playing the game and listening to the book at the same time. I felt drowsy after listening to it. This equipment column is a good idea, but the author's writing skills are not good enough. This old bookworm can't stand it.

I remember Loki didn't go to sea. The protagonist's butterfly effect didn't affect the Kingdom of Giants, so why did it escape?

The plot is both water and ink, giving the protagonist various restrictions.