Supernatural Resurrection, Am I the Final BOSS?

The plot is okay. After a few chapters of the plot, it can be seen that the author is very powerful in writing, and the plot advancement and scene description are very good. The text description is also very gorgeous. The disadvantage is that this is a fast-paced novel. The author wants to describe the content through very gorgeous words, and wants to have his own literary youth dream, and to think out of the mud without being stained. Therefore, the content is written in a magnificent and rhetorical way, so that the description in many places is very empty. One more thing, the author is from Chaoshan. The article is full of dialects, and communication is all dialect communication. Then you explain in brackets what these dialects mean. These are very dramatic for the novel and greatly affect the perception. Finally: A novel should be popular and understandable by the public. This novel does not need gorgeous words, magnificent writing, or lofty content.

Da Nuo, Shi Ling, Black Law, Fengdu Xuanzhi, the cold fragrance of the remaining plum bones, the master gave me the Holy Grail and the wild rice cup all night long. Unbinding, flesh and soil, swallowing Shan Yu. What are these words? What can I do about the ghost gate? Ta Lei Feng? I can understand this, but I feel like I wrote it blindly just to show off my power!

Why are there so many settings in Chapter 1? Even Fengyue is not as outrageous as you.

I wrote a bunch of things and piled them together. It looks very stylish, but it ignores the most important part of the web article.

It's a good book, but it's not suitable for me. I wish the author great sales.

I read reviews that it is very complicated and has a lot of settings. . .

I quite like the self-made words and setting, but the problem is that the setting and world view are auxiliary to the story. The story unfolds too slowly and the language is cumbersome The heroine asks for help at the beginning of the story, and there are a lot of inexplicably irrelevant backgrounds Then I go shopping for breakfast and look for things. I feel that I introduce the world view first at every place, but the continuity of the story is lost at all The comment section is right, let's explain the story clearly first But I still think it is quite interesting, let's finish it first, brother, the author

Come on, come on 🙂 The only problem is that you wrote a lot, but I don't have any memory points (the only memory point is still the second master)

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The cultural atmosphere of folk customs and wandering gods is very strong. I should go to Chaoshan and southern Fujian for detailed information reference. The writing is powerful, and he is suspected to be a demon from outside the world. The plot is currently very smooth, but it should be close to the climax of the first copy. The author Guan Erye gave you the Holy Grail last night to update you with 90,000 words. Please give me some incense and come on.

What is the first chapter? It talks about a lot of self-made nouns and no description. It's just a paper house building. It looks gorgeous, but upon closer inspection, there is nothing.

The official collection forum for the supernatural folk customs of the Lion-Tiled Sword. First of all, I kindly ask all of you not to keep books but to pursue them! ! ! The new book will be updated steadily during the serialization period to ensure quality. If you are hungry for data in the early stage, the seedlings will easily die! ! ! Ahem, back to the serious topic. This post asks for the folk customs, ghost stories, rumors of supernatural events, etc. That are circulating in your area. If you have personal experience, even more so, you can leave the supernatural events you heard and recorded on this forum post. The experience process, folk customs are weird, use it as a collection of information, the more detailed the better. If it is successfully included in the plot text, the master who posted it can bring his ID and screenshots to the official group to apply for prize redemption! Lion-Tied Sword Officer Group QQ: 765522603

This post collects supernatural, feng shui, and folk custom-related objects' abilities, as well as supernatural ability settings. Once the individual condensed by the supernatural reaches the level of a ghost, the obsession contained in the spirit will cause the ghost to be unable to be killed, and can only be sealed by specific means and media. The items used to suppress the ghost will also be transformed into [Suppression Objects] with the characteristics of the ghost Suppression objects use specific The instrument carries the spirit body of the evil ghost. The more powerful the artifact that has accumulated over time and seals the evil spirit, the stronger it becomes. Please follow the template below to design and collect your favorite artifact props and supernatural abilities. If they are included in the plot, you can still use the redemption code to successfully redeem the prize! ! ! Template: [Name of Town Object]: [Origin of Town Object]: [Effect of Town Object]: [Use Price]: Example: [Name of the town object]: Three Mountain King iron tire forged lock chain (A-level incense town object) [Origin of the town object]: The lock dragon chain comes from the iron used by the Chaohai area to worship the master "Three Mountain King" in the old days. Chains, carriage axles, iron nails and other utensils were re-forged and smelted through folk customs and worship to create iron chains hanging on the river bridges, which absorbed the influence of King Sanshan as the local patron saint. A divine fragment, the dragon chain is more of a Feng Shui suppressant. It is made of three interlocking rings of iron chains made of different materials and forging techniques. It is engraved with fine command talismans to simulate the ups and downs of mountains and the flow of water waves. [Suppression Effect]: The Suppression Effect of the Dragon Chain. Its Suppression absorbs part of the divinity of the "Three Mountain Kings" and is mainly for Suppression. Its core abilities lie in sealing off the town, refining, and specifically restraining water-vein evil spirits, water-moving snakes, and powerful earth-bound spirits. Guarded by dragon chains, the entangled specific area will develop a strange gate pattern of feng shui to suppress evil spirits, weaken evil spirits, and restrain spirits, just like the suppression of three mountains. After the spirit approaches the object, the iron chain will gradually turn red, and it will continue to refine the evil spirit and expel its evil spirits like impurities in forged iron tools, especially to restrain "dragon" supernatural creatures. The water-fixing needle at the end of the chain can temporarily nail the core of the water veins to calm the torrent and water evil spirits. [Use Price]: As a town object, the dragon chain does not seal away evil spirits. The feng shui device enshrined by incense alone has powerful supernatural abilities. Powerful town objects have spirituality. The iron tire of the Three Mountain Kings is used to forge the dragon chain. During specific floods, storms and other natural disasters, the Holy Grail of the "Three Mountain Kings" must be requested. After receiving the promise, a man with a matching destiny can hold the dragon chain to suppress the flood. Avoid being dirty, avoiding personal use, and avoiding running out of water. Use clean water to wipe the utensils after use, and enshrine them in front of the statue of the King of the Three Mountains, offer incense, pray for blessings, and re-absorb the spiritual energy. Detailed collection of post examples is as above. Regarding supernatural abilities, there will be another post about the factions of the supernatural hall. This post can be freely communicated, such as intermittent yin and yang, seeing yin characteristics, ghost painting and other supernatural-related abilities! ! ! I beg you all not to keep books! ! ! Please read it! ! !

Want to recommend, want to follow up on reading, want to reward? Guan Shengdijun gave you nine Holy Grails. One Holy Grail can make you gain 10,000 points. Do you understand?

Only 4 of the 9 characters in the character card appear, what are the other 5 for? There is even a Liansheng as the protagonist?

The Yanguo Supernatural Hall contains a wide variety of folklore occupations, with varying types and pedigrees. In an era of resurgence of terror, only those who have inherited the hall's methods, successfully lit incense, ascended to the hall, and obtained the mysterious method taught by their ancestors have the skills to contend with supernatural beings. This post implores all the masters of the world to collect relevant folklore professions extensively, and record the pedigree of supernatural halls, promotion paths, and skill effects. Collection Template: [Supernatural Hall]: Underworld Department [Inherited Occupation]: Paper Craftsman [Supernatural Methods]: Paper man, stand-in puppet, origami into a spirit, paper soldier cutting, asking the spirit to possess the paper boy, changing into a ghost body, etc. [Promotion Path]: Through the basic inheritance of the yin system, ordinary paper craftsmen only have the skills to make paper figures, paper-cutting, and channeling yin. After the paper tying skills are perfected, if the paper puppet body can imprison wandering spirits, or successfully capture the upper body of a ghost, it can be upgraded to the ability to drive yin soldier puppets and create more advanced yin weapon paper soldiers. Examples of related occupations: [Butcher], [Corpse Retriever], [Grave Digger], [Knife Credit Person], [Duan Gong], [Magic Master], [Meng Guzi], [Storyteller]......................

The fact that I read such a good book at this time, with only twenty-one chapters, really makes me scratch my head and want to read a few more chapters.

Yu Zhou, the boat of the small boat

There was a problem at the beginning. You had the ability and inherited the ancestral business. Why did you have no money? How can someone who does idle things be short of money?

There is no need to write the following introductions. To be honest, not many readers will read them. What readers want to read is the plot, not the introduction at the end of each chapter. You have a low word count.

After reading the first twenty chapters, it feels like it was written by a different person in December. Except for the second wind in the dragon clan, the rest is too similar.

The subject matter is good, but it's a bit foggy from the beginning. The conventional plot should enter the world from the protagonist's perspective and enter the supernatural world, show Goldfinger's personal abilities and the factors of returning home, and then understand the protagonist from Lin's perspective before entering Chaohai. Your way of writing hides the protagonist and turns it into a narration and discards the settings. It is actually a matter of perspective. The most important thing is the psychological description. If it is not substituted, it will not be a novel.

The language used in the book is too deliberate and there are too many local languages, which affects the reading experience.

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