Zhutian Inn in Luo Xiaohei's World

Brother, is it possible, that is, is there a possibility that your writing is very good, but you signed the contract with the wrong person? The back part looks less smooth than the front part. Is there anything bothering you?

After all, it is a kind of heaven, and more worlds are indispensable. Friends who are interested can put their favorite characters. I will read the original work and decide whether to adopt it based on my own writing skills. 😡 Also, if it is a self-designed character, I will consider adding NPCs based on the character design, but the author is very good, so I hope the self-designed character will not be too complicated 😭

Please, give me a few more chapters, they will do anything.

Name: Kui Race: Goblin/Kui Niu (Kui, a god and charm, its light is like the sun and moon, its sound is like thunder. It looks like a cow, has a pale body without horns, and one leg like a dragon.) Nicknames: bison, Barbarian bull, crazy bull, mad bull (the word "cow" is not taken off anyway), muscle freak Related: The first-level executor of the Demon Spirit Guild has a cow in his name and a personality very similar to that of a cow. Although he is docile and honest most of the time, he will be completely reckless once he is provoked. The racial horror legend was made into a drum by the human race, and its popularity is almost as deep as that of the human race's Grandma Wolf... She is an old acquaintance with Hulk, Mangyan, and Shimu. She is four feet eight (converted to about one meter six) and has terrifying physical strength that is different from her appearance. In terms of physical quality alone, there is almost no chance that the Demon Spirit Guild can be stronger than him. At the same time, he is also one of the few fairies besides Laojun who can make medicine. Ability: Spirit-controlling system - Thunder (very special, able to control thunder and lightning, such as in Bagua theory, thunder is a wood attribute) Magic weapon: Kui Cow drum: Simple in shape, small and exquisite, decorated with feathers, the sound can vibrate for five hundred miles when struck Skills: Half-moon kick: Spin quickly, kicking the enemies around you. Bone Strike: After the fist is full of energy, it will rush towards the enemy. The fierce airflow can push away everyone and everything around it. Crazy Dragon Sweep: Use the powerful energy erupted from the punch to form a dragon shape and attack the enemy in front. Breaking Fist: Swing forward a punch full of energy, like a gust of wind and rain. After a quick succession of attacks, he unleashes a powerful final blow. Style: Looks like a Tibetan robe, with furry fur on the neck, collar, and cuffs, a copper bell similar to a cowbell on the pants, a cow horn hanging on the left waist, and a delicate brown-red drum hanging on the back of the waist

At the beginning, the plot was thought to be about the protagonist trying to catch up with his brother on his journey to the heavens and worlds. However, after a few people were added to the chat group, he began to create techniques for unknown purposes? There is no description of the different upgrade realms in the heavens! There is no villain, no pressure and goals to strive for? In the absence of a high-powered villain, wouldn't it not be considered entertaining oneself to write a plot that creates cheats like creating magic?

Come on, author, we are here to support 😁

Waiting for the update, Lord Yan's list of names hasn't been finished yet, and the most critical one has not been mentioned.

Come on, author, take your time to practice your basic writing skills, come on! (ง•̀_•́)ง

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you read the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

There's not much to say, I think it looks pretty good

After reading Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles, I feel that Chi Nian is not like the earth element, but more like the fire element, and his temper is not ordinary upright and irritable.

Brother, come on, how can I become your fan

If the old man doesn't show up later, it's recommended to downplay the pure feeling.

Brother, why are there so many chapters not available yet? Are you really not making any money?

The progress is too slow, I can't say the progress is too slow. It's okay after I get used to the rhythm. But the author doesn't know how to speed up the progress. In Chapter 8, he inexplicably used his brother's novice gift package to patch up the progress bar. The protagonist's subjective initiative is really poor, and he can't even open his mouth to feed him. Judging from the situation in Chapter 8, the author himself couldn't stand it anymore, so he added some settings to speed up the pace. If not, when I fart. One more question, my brother's sense of innocence is too high. Is the protagonist really the younger brother?

What? What? Qingquan Mingyue joined Lin Yao?

Why haven't you signed a contract yet? You can't vote monthly.

The start is surprisingly attractive.

If you look at the passages where these characters appear in the book and there are not even a single comment, you will know that the characters of these characters have not been established and have no resonance.

If the old man doesn't show up later, it's recommended to downplay the pure feeling.

Can you please stop writing novels about police officers? I'm tired of reading them and it makes me sick.

This plot is really unimaginable

Seeing the protagonist in Xiaoao, regardless of the foreshadowing, I feel that the emotions of the Huashan sect are too bland, and the character creation cannot be established. The reactions and dialogues of mortals meeting the immortals are too subtle and natural. I can't feel that the protagonist and his party have arrived in an alien plane, as if they are going to another world. The smell of people coming to your neighbor's house is so commonplace that you can't feel Ning Zhongze's urgency. With Yue Buqun's devilish mind, your description of having no desires or desires is completely unreasonable. Also, wouldn't Yue Buqun, a spy like Laudeno, be imprisoned immediately after receiving the immortal fate? Do ordinary people have no impulsive ambitions about immortality and the arrival of gods? Isn't this what readers want to see? It doesn't have to be vulgar, but you can't write without any style at all. You can refer to the plane tavern, which is also a space-time anchor type of astronomy. The character's emotions must be full.

I saw the author liked it and read the book.

The protagonist becomes a pure nanny, 🤔