The Only Player in the World of Immortal Heroes

If you are not an old man, it is best not to write about old men. Their worldview and values ​​are different from those of young people.

It's well written, for an elderly cultivator. I have read Chapter 37, but it does not fit the character at the moment. The things you do in these pictures are okay if you are a young person. The protagonist has studied hard for 40 years before achieving anything. He does things impulsively and recklessly. Although he seems cautious, it is half and half. Not to mention anything else, let's just talk about the female ghost. Later, it was said that the fireball skills you learned are all basic five-element spells. These don't need to be exchanged for merit points, right? You can buy spiritual stones, why not? There is obviously accrued interest in the redemption of merit points, why not refund or exchange? Don't say it's not enough. When you have such a golden finger, stability is the most important thing. This kind of behavior pushes you to the stage and seems to be famous. And a lot of your golden fingers have been eliminated in order to advance the plot. Let's just say that being a painter and martial arts are both professions. Why not keep looking? Continue to add a career? Haven't thought about it, or don't want to? Or suppress the combat power? And recently, many of them are incoherent. The above are some small opinions, but generally speaking, the writing is very good compared to other elderly leisure writing, and it is not popular.

ε=(´ο`*))) Oh, forget about having a wife at the beginning. The main character is in his fifties and written like he is in his twenties. It's really hard to watch. I hope the author will have a better setting and good writing style in the next book. Come on!

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The world view is relatively rare. It is not the same as ordinary people's, but has a sense of freshness. From the perspective of the protagonist, the reader's perspective of observing the world is very different from other novels. The world of immortality under the rule of Taoist officials integrates real-life political and social phenomena. Keeping this style maybe we can start a small genre

The writing is okay, with elements of officialdom and immortality, and a ghost-and-fox plot similar to that of Liao Zhai.

Why don't you send a message? There are not many more. I have ordered it, so go ahead and write it.

Cultivation relies on spiritual stones, but ends up embezzling and extorting gold and silver?

The introduction was so well written that it made me read on with great expectations. Unfortunately, I was extremely disappointed. At chapter 62, I couldn't bear it anymore.

Personally, I feel like it's a good start. There are also expectations for the plot. See Chapter 55. A little disappointed. Let's raise it for a while first.