Hidden Things in the Cave

After reading it briefly, I feel that the protagonist has no purpose at all, and the plot is too scattered. I wonder if the author has an outline. The relevant knowledge of cave exploration is also relatively simple, not considered popular science standards. To take the weird and terrifying route, it is best to set the source of the supernatural, such as a weird curse, or the spiritual pollution of the ancient Cthulhu gods. The protagonist needs to explore to find opportunities to unlock and save himself, so that there is a sense of gradual immersion. I don't know if there will be any overseas exploration or deep ocean diving content in the future, or shipwreck inspections would be good too. I'd like to recommend it to my collection, and I'm looking forward to the following plots.

Cave diving is not easy to write about, I hope you have enough knowledge reserves. By the way, I have dozens of cave diving video experiences. Do you have any of them?

There is no logic in the writing. Going to the reservoir to go into the water alone without anyone else 😅

The subject matter is good, but it's really not as good as writing about system flow. Otherwise, I would never be able to figure out what motivation an ordinary person has to dive under a reservoir and grope for a skull without being able to see it.

Waste Protagonist The story is good

The suspense novel creates a brainless male protagonist. . .

You're such a great writer. I haven't seen such an attractive suspense novel in a long time.

After watching it for a long time, I came to the conclusion that the main character in the video was the one who was responsible for improvising + not wanting to turn us away. Courageous and curious

The main plot is a bit like Night City + Resident Evil. It is probably a group of big capitalists composed of crab-legged evil spirits from ancient times to the present. They are doing big things, and the protagonist and heroine are getting more and more involved. Except for the protagonist and heroine, almost all the important supporting characters are villains. Although the faction within Crab Legs that resists the big capitalists seems to have a just purpose, it is very unscrupulous in its actions. The heroine's family ancestors seem to be righteous people who specialize in fighting those evil spirits. However, judging from the bad woman's behavior, there is a high probability that the entire family is not doing well. Lin Wan and Lao San are both emotionless killers and extremely egoistic villains. The descriptions are pretty good if you don't whitewash them later.

Have you really tried cave diving in Northern Europe? It's well written and feels good. As the most important element of the suspense genre itself, the horror atmosphere is well written, and the combination with diving elements is also okay. There are some minor issues for new authors, but I can accept them, so keep writing.

The author's writing style is similar to the novels from long ago. The protagonist has no abilities and is always threatened and jerked like a cow.

It's such an ancient novel template. People nowadays are not in the mood to read it. The author can modify it, even imitating Tomb Raider Notes. I planned to withdraw when I saw someone asking the protagonist for a map. The dialogue and the reason for going are too childish. You can write about rescue. There are ruins of that religion there, so go there.

I've invested, come on, don't be a eunuch, try to use him as a writing brush after finishing the book.

The front is okay, but the plot behind it feels too crowded.

I didn't think there were authors in China who knew how to dive, but your IP is quite convincing. Let's add a bookshelf first and put it on Didi.

The subject matter is great, I like this type. But it's a bit cliché to advance the story by letting the protagonist take the lead.

I just read chapter twenty-eight. It's okay. Why is no one reading it? Why don't the author change the title of the book? Your title is not attractive. Change it to one that you like and has highlights.

The title of this book is too niche. I usually won't click on it to read it, and the results are not good. It looks pretty good, but the plot is too tight, but it's not bad, come on. You can change it back after the results are up, otherwise no one will see it 😭😭😭

Nice! Faster and faster!

I commented once on the novel, so I'll post it here again. I read that the famous supporting characters in the novel, Lin Wan and Lao San, are probably long-term villains who have fought against the male protagonist in many incidents? But the author's character creation is not very good. I saw the ending of the Centipede Cave copy, but I couldn't feel the charisma of Lao San and Lin Wan at all. In the previous two or three times, readers learned about Lin Wan's information, such as what kind of killer organization, motives at the scene, and the past that her father had just sold her, all came from Lin Wan's mouth. Such positive language descriptions have no effect at all. Doesn't the author know how to profile in other ways? Readers are not attracted to Lin Wan at all, so how can they have the patience to continue reading this story in which Lin Wan and other villains continue to confront the male protagonist? I saw the end of the Centipede Cave incident in the previous article, and I kept thinking that Lin Wan would die quickly, but the author just cheated on her and refused to die. As for the subject matter, it is okay to read it as a weird story, but it is not enough. It dives into various dangerous areas, and the description of the environment looks scary, but it actually does not pose any danger to the protagonist. Super powers appear, so what's the point? At first I thought it was a story similar to Tomb Raider Notes, about ordinary people facing dangerous environments and dangerous creatures, but it turned out that in two consecutive dungeons, the main danger came from people. Although there were dangers from the environment, one was a temporary reveal setting (the first dungeon suddenly revealed the girlfriend's ability), and the other was poorly written, and the limelight was completely stolen by Lin Wan. Author, look at what you wrote in your introduction. In the first two copies of the novel, are the dangers that impress readers the most and occupy the majority of the space the weird and shocking supernatural factors in the introduction? It's people, it's those villains.

I think it's okay. Why doesn't anyone watch it?