Death: Start by Eating Enough

It's really well written and very comfortable to read.

I hope the female protagonists will be Inoue Orihime, Shihoin Yoruichi, Arizawa Ryuuki, Toubine Riruka, Ise Nanao, Zaihou, Kotetsu Yuine, Kotetsu Kiyone, Unohana Retsu, Hinamori Momo, Yatomaru Lisa, Kunan Haku, Matsumoto Rangiku, Nirvana, Kuchiki Rukia, Shuta Luo Senjumaru, Hikifune Kiryu, Tia Harribel, Nellie Do Odeshovank, Bambietta Basta, Gadis Catnip, Minina Macalone, Litoto Lampado, Kujo Nozomi, Akane Shizuku, Michioane Aura.

Saw the admission. Unexpectedly, it's not bad. Unfortunately, some of the comments section can't be viewed. They are all x-repressed children begging for more female protagonists... The protagonist currently seems to have a stable personality and has his own plan. It is much more comfortable to watch than the mentally retarded and abstract protagonists whose brains are all muscles. A rare normal protagonist in Death fan fiction. As mentioned in the comment section, the original characters did not appear in the first ten chapters... It is indeed a problem for impatient readers, just get over it. As for the "female protagonist", I suggest that the author should base it on the personality of the protagonist... At present, it seems that the protagonist's attitude towards life does not seem to be someone who is particularly concerned about women.

The surname Xu Wang moved my DNA, and Su Wang Huan was from an anime ten years ago, and I actually remembered it again.

Write more about the interaction with the original characters. It is best to devote a large space to this aspect. Take the approach of group portraits to make the characters more three-dimensional. Fans with the same starting point will basically experience all kinds of chaos as soon as they enter the main line. There are not many good books, so try to write them as long as possible!

I'm really not used to the fact that the heroine is Rangiku. Rangiku shouldn't fall in love with anyone before Gin dies.

That's right. Death's killing of Hollows was just an accident. Soul Burial. Receiving the souls of the dead is daily life and work. When I watched it before, I thought how could Ichigo Kurosaki look like a Death except for killing people? 🙂

It was very comfortable to watch. The author has a good grasp of the rhythm. He didn't rush in to be awesome and coax him, and then he was beaten all the way later. The Bleach anime has this problem. Ichigo Kurosaki was able to fight with the Bleach captain, but he returned to the real world and fought with a few shady guys. I hope the author will not step into the trap

I wrote this book under my real name, and I guarantee that it will be completed After it is put on the shelf, all orders will be available for follow-up reading and join the group The author's mobile phone number and coded ID card can be seen in the group announcement The eunuch can send the razor blade or read it offline I will do my best to complete this work I hope everyone can give me more opinions, I may not necessarily listen 😜

Can I give you some suggestions? The Zanpakutō should either be a direct attack type or a bug-level rule type. Copying and pasting is too stupid. In addition, the character of the protagonist should be the same as the Zanpakutō. The Zanpakutō is actually the embodiment of the other protagonist.

Seeing the number of noisy heroines, is it the silent majority, or is it the louder voice when there are more people? 😏 Then why not just vote and see

The painting cake aspect is incompatible with the eunuch aspect. Author, don't say anything about putting your ID card next time.

The first solution is the morning light, but what about the swastika? The blazing sun at noon?

Don't start a harem all of a sudden without thinking. It's easy to write such a mindless emotional drama. Just write at your own pace.

When someone ordered the heroine before, I mentioned that the heroine might not be visible in this book. The author replied and asked me to check it out in a few months. In a few months, he will become a eunuch 😅

It's really rare to see good Death stories on this site. Many of them are just okay at the beginning. I hope the author can maintain this narrative style. As for the heroine mentioned in the comment area, please also base it on your own reality. Don't forcefully add a female character if you are not good at writing emotional dramas. If you can continue to adhere to this narrative rhythm, the results will definitely not be bad (based on my many years of experience as a bookworm).

Ichiganmaru is going to be green🙂 The limited-edition Shinigami book next door pushed all the women Sister Hua didn't let it go either 🙂

... Isn't this just a eunuch? He doesn't even have the intention to post a chapter or two to prove that he is still alive.

The writing is quite good, but it is a slow-burning novel. You can try to have more female protagonists, add some daily routines, and advance the main plot. 🙂

I just read the beginning, and I feel that this kind of description of practicing martial arts wholeheartedly is quite rare now. It's like an idea. After all, the Zanpakutō is very similar to the master, and it can reflect the character of the master. Is there a Zanpakutō that has no moves after liberation, but can greatly satisfy the master's desire to practice martial arts? Simulate reasoning moves. As the protagonist's martial arts improves, the moves deduced by imagination will become more powerful, and then the reasoning will become better. The more perfect a person's martial arts skills are, the left foot is stepped on the right foot, and the progress of martial arts is faster and faster. From the weakest initial solution without any moves, to the various numerical mechanisms of the divine swordsmanship and boxing techniques that can be released without liberation, which directly enhances the master's whiteboard attributes and skills. To achieve the goal of liberation, it is purely based on beating the swastika with the martial arts moves that have been mastered in the past. The first solution to the swastika is just a spiritual pressure amplifier and a temporary enlightenment state.

After reading dozens of chapters, tell me your thoughts. This book is a slow read, not the kind that beats the captain in dozens of chapters or becomes invincible in a hundred chapters. I also like the detailed description. In the first chapter, the protagonist prepares a weapon for self-defense when he first arrives in another world, and then adds working to earn food. This is something that many novels miss.

It's okay to have such good grades 🤐

Dead or not? Just give me a squeak.

It's been 8 days, haven't you finished yet?

It's a pity, it's obviously so well written.

It's rare to see this good-looking one, it's a pity

Which boss has the most?