I Don't Want to Stay in This World of Immortality for a Day Anymore.

Directly reverse the yin and yang, block the secrets of heaven, and perform the ultimate insult on your clone. What can you do to restore the connection with the secrets of heaven? Some people say that clone techniques or blood rebirth are very powerful. Is it possible that a killing curse can follow the connection and directly destroy all the clones?

I wish there were a little less settings in the middle and later stages of this book. There are too many and it really gives me a headache. Although it looks very strong, I can't figure out what the protagonist is using later on. It would be nice to be a little briefer about the skill descriptions.

By the way, since everyone has become enemies, why not just kill the protagonist's whole family, or just the protagonist? Could it be that the protagonist was also about to die, but his position as the God of Wealth in his previous life helped him avoid this crisis, or was it the pure aura of the protagonist?

Is the author 🐶? If you cut it without saying anything, I wasted the coupon.

Write a book similar to (I am a magic sword), boss.

Don't order the latest chapter, it really made me laugh, and I can't just take a screenshot. . .

As the title states, the world of cultivating immortals only cares about birth. In modern times, there is still some respect for dignity. How can this world of ghost cultivating immortals really be played without clothes?

My money is not money 😡

At least write more than 500,000 words.

Part 18 You are awesome

I'm too lazy to say it. I'll keep it on the bookshelf until it becomes free.

I hope this book will be longer 🙂

Fellow Taoists are welcome to read and comment! Come on, author! Amazing grass!

Not to my liking. Most of the first three chapters are various setting explanations stuffed into the reader's mind. It seems like a lot of effort. A headache. I personally think that 65% of the content should be deleted and we can slowly understand it later.

The author can consider Shushanliu, which is consistent with the logic you wrote. The original copy of True Dragon World is also the best among them.

Mortal: Start from the game store

Come on, author, the setting is still very attractive, but the writing skills are a bit poor, and some places that require hydrology are not clearly explained, which can easily make people confused. If you just skip the outline, it will not be long.

Fast update

There are very few normal usages of these two words. Either these two words are random nonsense or throw away the setting. Most of them do not promote the plot

Three

Write at least 500,000 words. Anyway, your articles never add water. 500,000 Words is no different than other authors who write more than 1 million words.

I've only read two chapters and there are so many settings that it gives me a headache.

After reading Chapter 20, my head feels dizzy. It seems that when the protagonist starts to do anything, there is a narrator beside him who keeps talking, as if he is watching a live broadcast, which is confusing and procrastinating. After reading Chapter 22, I am very tired. The writing is really problematic.