Transmigrating Through a Hotel, One Ecosystem Every Two Months

The neighborhood story is riddled with flaws, with cars being the biggest glaring weakness, completely ignored by the author. In a neighborhood of over a thousand people, it lacks almost everything; not a single person has power tools. The story begins with a clothes fork and a fruit knife. Even if you used a clothes hanger pole or a solid wood chair leg, I wouldn't complain.

The novel "Nearby Time Travel" has always had mediocre updates, and the content is getting worse with each chapter. Author, keep it up!

It seems the food chain in the neighboring community isn't very well-developed. With a large population and limited resources, food gathering should be extremely difficult. But this hasn't manifested; not many people have starved. Furthermore, there aren't many herbivores, but large carnivores are abundant. Hopefully, the author will handle this aspect better.

That's all, right?

I've looked at 40 cards and still don't understand what's going on with them. Also, the ensemble acting is terrible, worse than a makeshift crew. And the club president is a complete failure; he has no organizational skills. Why does the protagonist get such high treatment from him? Everyone goes to him for everything, and you never see the other teams in meetings. Logistics are a complete mess; there's practically no organization. It's not even as good as that neighborhood time-travel story.

The team in that neighborhood wasn't well-organized; it didn't resemble teamwork, but rather a gang. Seeing other gangs rising up, to avoid being taken down, they quickly increased benefits to recruit more people, regardless of whether it was good or bad. I feel this book wasn't well-written.

Your writing doesn't create a sense of anticipation that keeps the reader reading.

I hate it when updates stop, but I hate it even more when someone stops updating without saying anything. It's especially annoying when someone stops updating, then starts again, then stops again, and then says nothing at all.

Seeing so many negative comments in the comments section, I went in to take a look, and it's not even as good as the one in my neighborhood.

It's true what they say about big data; I just saw a neighborhood that had time-traveled, and then this was recommended to me.