Daoist Lord Xuanzhen of Shu Mountain

After losing Yuanyang in Shushan, what else do you want to cultivate? Find a place to kill him and wait for the next life.

I don't even know who the main character is. . . Brother, if you can read this book, you are like this👍🏻

Shushan literature has picked up recently? I couldn't read a few of them before, but I can often read them recently.

There is no end to becoming a disciple. I have three golden chapters, but you are so verbose and have forty chapters. I have neither become a master, nor have I practiced swordsmanship well. It is long-winded and bland, and I really don't know what to read.

Cut it off, the messy writing is worse than AI

To be honest, the people who clicked on this book were all fans of classical fairy tales or Shushan themes. What they wanted to see was nothing more than flying sword magic weapons. As a result, this book started with more than 20 chapters of monks' palace battles. When I talked about wanting to become a disciple of Wudang in the first few chapters, I thought that the protagonist should remind Shi Yuzhu in advance to make a good relationship with Wudang to achieve the purpose of becoming a disciple. Sure enough, he reminded Shi Yuzhu and formed a good relationship, and made an appointment to take him away the next day. Unexpectedly, the plot was turned around and the protagonist was troubled by other monks. I am really tired after seeing this. I came to read the novel for entertainment, not to suffer. This kind of writing is like ten years ago. At that time, readers were patient and could wait for the protagonist to suffer dozens of chapters and escape from the devil's cave to usher in a new life. But now it is 2026. To sum up my thoughts after watching the game, as of more than 20 chapters, the plot is still in a trivial and trivial situation, with no climax in terms of rhythm. Goldfinger is better than nothing, and I can't see any interesting points. I was too tired to watch it, so I gave up. The above are all my personal reflections. If you have other good Shushan-style or classical Xianxia-style novels, you can recommend them to me. Thank you.

I lost my virginity at the beginning and there is no hope of ascension.

The progress is too slow, I haven't even become a disciple in Chapter 20

To be honest, I don't understand why so many people don't like Shushan. Anyone who has read the original work will know that compared to so many Shushan fan novels, the Shushan sect in the original work is more worthy of the word Xia.

Although the plot of Ciyun Temple progresses slowly at the beginning, the story is quite exciting. Later, when you join Wudang, it becomes a simple story. It is all about the guidance of one master to seize the treasure, and the other master's guidance to seize the treasure. I have read more than a hundred chapters of the story of bears breaking sticks 😅