Living to Be an Undying Old Man in the Southern Song

If the martial arts literature is written as a historical text, if the deduction continues, the overall contradiction will inevitably appear, so Jin Yong's own martial arts will be quite far away from history. It is recommended that the author think about this issue carefully. After all, in the world of martial arts, it is absolutely impossible to be completely consistent with the real historical development. Just like if you add an external driving term to the equation of motion, the dynamic function of the system will inevitably change.

The top masters fight guerrilla warfare and kill 180 Jurchens every day. In a year or two, the Jin Kingdom will have to run back to their hometown in the Northeast.

The protagonist in the author's novel is an aborigine or a time-traveler. Not to mention the nine-year compulsory education knowledge and the common sense that ordinary people in modern society know, the protagonist is from a medical family, so the knowledge of biology is enough to become a miracle doctor in ancient times. Another funny thing is that the waste system adds some points

If the protagonist is looking for orphans, it is better to find more women to give birth to children, build a big family, engage in business and politics, and accumulate strength, so that he can overthrow the Song Dynasty at any time and become the emperor himself.

If you are really not good at writing about war and hegemony, then don't write about it. It's too natural. . . The more I write, the farther away I get from martial arts

The power system is so touching. It goes up and down. Sometimes it feels powerful, and sometimes it feels like a weakling.

The protagonist now wears triple heavy armor and can't he kill seven in and seven out among thousands of troops? Why don't warriors wear armor?

The writing is good, but the plot is too slow. The memory of awakening at the age of 2 is too far-fetched. It is too far-fetched to add a second time until the beginning of the chapter. The time traveler's research on cheats must be a top priority, and he must try every means to try it. Just because he is afraid that his family will worry, he has not moved for more than ten years. This is not the level of drug addiction. The doctor still can't explain it. Secondly, what is the use of the protagonist's father? I don't understand. Shouldn't the time traveler have moved to the south long ago? Waiting for the war to come to your doorstep? I didn't see any money being made, just stocking up on precious medicines and the like. Jin Yong's martial arts background, a doctor who has never seen martial arts practitioners? It's impossible, the old farmers may not know, and it's impossible for doctors. It was actually heard by a passerby. The martial arts world is not that far away from the common people. Finally, the protagonist knows that this is the late stage of Tianlong. Shouldn't the best choice be the Vulture Palace? Only the Xiaoyao ➕plug-in can have hope of immortality. Go to Mantuo Villa to steal a bunch of garbage? The Small Phaseless Skill is there, so the time traveler should not take detours in practicing his internal skills.

Good grass, but a little watery. It introduces a lot of historical knowledge in detail. This is a martial arts novel, not a historical novel.

I can't stand it anymore when I see the Qian family and other families rebelling and killing all the royal family without even destroying the family!