Cultivating Immortality in a Martial Arts World
在武侠世界修真
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 271k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
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140Chapters
2.2kRecommendations
8.1kFans
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Even a mortal immortal can't beat a martial arts master; this mortal immortal is truly trash.
The protagonist, feeling arrogant, claims to possess a method for achieving immortality. He intends to cultivate it to a certain level before passing it on to others. Initially, he believes passing it on would be detrimental to himself and others.
As a seasoned practitioner of metaphysical theories who has never actually practiced, I'd like to offer the author a word of advice: don't ramble on about practical cultivation with readers. Be careful not to do more harm than good. Think about the book "Super Umbrella Protection," which helped readers make a fortune, and when I kindly advised them to stop, what happened?
After reading two chapters, I felt like I wasn't reading a novel, but rather being taught how to cultivate immortality. More importantly, I couldn't understand it at all.
Could the author create a group? I want to learn how to cultivate immortality.
To be honest, this book was so frustrating to read. The power system is incredibly ethereal and fantastical, but the protagonist is portrayed as a busybody who meddles in everything for no apparent reason. The author should have written him as a Confucian scholar who takes the imperial examinations and becomes an official—the kind of person who upholds justice and strives for the well-being of…
It's well-written. As for those who say the protagonist shouldn't spread his teachings so casually, it's probably because they've read too many cultivation novels. In this world, the protagonist is the only one who follows his own laws. The text also mentions that the protagonist seeks freedom in his pursuit of the Dao, and he prefers to follow his heart. Furthermore, while spreading his teachings in a martial arts world might be dangerous, it also brings merit.
The plot unfolded in a flat, straightforward manner, failing to stir my emotions. Even with a calm and collected approach, I couldn't empathize with the author's immortal cultivation. The most captivating aspects of traditional cultivation novels lie in the protagonist's emotional shifts and their handling of situations and enemies.
We are currently on chapter 83. I have a feeling... Will the final outcome be...? It was all a dream, and in the end, the protagonist woke up. Then the book ends.
While you wrote this for self-encouragement, could you please be a little more considerate of us? For example, reduce the amount of narration and add more storytelling. Avoid large-scale, straightforward descriptions and use more character interaction and detailed descriptions.