
Begin as a Casual Cultivator and Become a True Immortal of Ten Thousand Gus
从散修开始修成万蛊真仙
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 103k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Jade Gu and Iron Gu: Ice muscle, jade bone or iron bone Light Gu: Illumination effect 4-turn light Gu special effect Sword Gu Sword Qi Gu: Must match The author's own combination of Gu insects For example, power Gu, the sword energy takes shape Five Finger Fist Heart Sword: Hold the sword Qi compression and raise it above your head to open the fist seam (control the size of the gap according to the power)
Quite deserted
Looks really cute
So far, there's nothing toxic about it, it's pretty good.
Create a post about the abilities and functions of Gu insects to collect everyone's thoughts.
It doesn't have the flavor of a fairy tale, just like a martial arts novel that changes skin
Come on😊!
The novel has many advantages and disadvantages. When writing about magic, write it openly. It's obvious that the protagonist has a strong sense of cheating, yet he makes a spiritual drink and makes it known to everyone. Isn't it contradictory? It can only be said that there are too many bugs. I suggest you just imitate Gu Zhenren, but the protagonist should at least be smarter than the NPC, at least a little bit. The protagonist is a demon, and the false light is more annoying (when you are weak, you are bullied by others, there is no need to show it. For example, if you are slapped by others, you clench your fists, fingernails..., Are you stupid? Aren't you embarrassed? Normally, you shouldn't smile on the surface first, fool the past, retaliate behind the scenes, and then suppress the relationship) Also, opportunities don't wait until you are in trouble, you only think of it and want it. , But the chance is random and depends on the fate. The last thing I want to say is that writing novels must be basically consistent with human nature. Don't make the characters in the novel stupid because you are stupid. This is very important.
When I read the introduction, I thought of the weird article about cultivating immortality that I read the year before last. The cultivating immortality in it is about cultivating insects. The way of heaven was taken away by a bug, and then this insect changed the concept of cultivation in the whole world. The first step in cultivating immortality is that a bug parasitizes a human being. Dantian, but people's understanding was rewritten, and they thought they were cultivating magic power. As a result, all the magic power people cultivated was feeding this bug. In the end, these cultivators ascended, flying into the mouth of the big bug. This bug has been feeding the immortal cultivators.
The plot setting is too compact
The protagonist will be in trouble as soon as he arrives. Change all the protagonist's places so that he can leave at any time. Don't let anyone make trouble for the protagonist as soon as you arrive, it will look more natural.
Looking at the introduction, the protagonist is really miserable.