One Piece: Civilian Players' Guide to Time Travel

It's quite good, suitable for viewers who want to catch up quickly Although it is a bit subjective, as a novel it is still a great condiment to pass the time. It's just that for the unknown chapter, it's not just the protagonist who is confused, but also the author himself. The author is always the first reader of his own work, I wish you good luck in the future.

I won't say anything to you if the nuclear power plant is turned into a power bank. It's just for combat power. But it's outrageous that you can't outrun the Burning Fruit. He can eat your exhaust and I think he's great.

It's quite unoriginal. It's a boring Chinese dark novel written in a pirate's shell. In fact, the content of this novel has nothing to do with the title. There is no logic in the plot, and the whole world is targeted for no reason.

Abandoned, I will continue to feed after it is released💩, the first chapter is speechless enough to retell the battle process before it is released, and there is a far-fetched plot of the lonely red, and he is inexplicably threatened. This book has been written until now, and all the actions of the protagonist have been forced, from scheming Blackbeard to being forced by Blackbeard, befriending Ai Ace was coerced by Ace's bond, the navy was coerced by the navy in socializing, the younger brother was coerced in the process of collecting Karina, and the war on top was also a mixture of various coercions. Finally, the climax passed, and immediately the subordinates were coerced to lead to the subsequent plot, one after another endlessly.

I was too lazy to say anything after reading the latest chapter, but I couldn't help but complain, after all, I invested. The previous writing was a bit depressing, just walking a tightrope everywhere. After all, putting the title here can still give people a sense of freshness. But what happens after eating the thunder fruit? To put it bluntly, it turned into a mess, and it was completely impossible to tell what the author wanted to do. There is no climax, no excitement, and no suspense. There are only constant frustrations and the author's inexplicable second design that makes people complain. The so-called system protagonist did not do much serious research, and even took the initiative to get involved in trouble when his strength was average and the fruits were not developed. The previous caution disappeared all of a sudden, leaving people speechless. The reader's trust is consumed little by little. Don't say that this is not an excuse for a cool article. Shouldn't a cool article have to overwhelm the protagonist without thinking?

The protagonist has a plug-in + thunder fruit, which makes his combat power as weak as a weak one🐔

Ever since I learned that CPUs don't like this kind of thing, I'll give you the bitter taste first, and then slowly add some sweetness to the shit. I'm just an ordinary person. I've never been a slave, so I can't empathize.

OK OK. The negative reviews I saw last night and the negative reviews I posted were all made transparent 😁

It's pretty good-looking, and I have a few things to complain about. The strength is not bad. Why did I feel very happy when I watched the part where the protagonist calculated Blackbeard's calculations? The calculations of various details were also very good. After the calculation, the protagonist became mentally retarded. He was caught eating, detained while delivering letters, and jumped into the river by himself, thinking that the river water would not affect such a ruthless person. When Luffy took a bath when he was a child, Aochi would feel weak even if he took a bath. He could recall all the details before, but now his hips are stretched. It's acceptable if your abilities are weaker just after eating the fruit, don't be too smart.

He can eat the fruit in just a few strokes. He likes to deliver messages to others when he has nothing to do. He doesn't practice his cooking skills or collect ingredients to upgrade. So how can he compare with Auntie and the others in the future? From now on, we won't have to fight only giant soldiers, right? When I first traveled through time, I didn't suffer enough. My brain just warmed up for a while and then became cold, so I didn't want to upgrade hard and find an island.

The rhythm is not very good. After getting the thunder fruit, there should not be so many embarrassing plots.

The protagonist knows that he is weak and wanders around Qinghai. It is also stupid. At least he practices leveling on a weak island. Not to mention that Shilipo Sword God at least practices his physical strength instead of running down and getting beaten everywhere.

The author still hasn't changed. In the high-quality stage, it's just about eating the fruit. The rest is still a mess. Besides, you're not suitable for writing Japanese comics. It's too Chinese-style. All the characters in One Piece have changed. Have you changed their personalities? Study the Pirates fanfiction I recommended above. This is what I call a Pirates flavor. It has the flavor of Japanese comics. Please study more.

It was all good before, you got the Thunder Fruit through calculation, but you just ate the fruit when you were supposed to feel good, and suddenly others were frightened, and you ran away in a panic before you could run away. The ability of the fruit asked others to suppress it with one hand 😰, and you were beaten and punished for escaping orders, and you didn't just start robbing customers in a black shop. These latest two are really disappointing 🥵

The author is so excited. What plot did he write and what kind of protagonist's character did he present? Loser waste material? What kind of protagonist is a loser? Can we entertain ourselves while reading a novel like this? Wouldn't it be better if we just looked in the mirror?

The combat power is actually not bad, after all, you have a plug-in for the experience value system, and you can superimpose passive skills when the attribute points are in place. But the design of the experience system is a mess. Level 17 is more than 6.5 Million. After a discussion with Gugao Zhihong, it will be increased by 50,000. Do you still think the upper limit of 50 is too low? According to the author's algorithm, what is the astronomical number of experience points at level 50? What's more, there is a setting where you don't give experience points when you fight the weak. You can simply delete all the specific experience value numbers. Anyway, in the novel, it just says how many levels you have reached after a big battle. Now it's just digging a hole to bury yourself.

How come the writing and description and dialogue smell like Chinese fantasy! It doesn't feel like One Piece dialogue at all

Just follow along and you will have some ideas.

The plot is quite interesting, as the strength of the thunder fruit is deliberately weakened in order to suppress the fighting power. Although I know it will improve later, I still feel a little unhappy.

For fanfics, unless you have a strong control over the text and plot, just one word "pleasant" will be enough. Fanfics that are unhappy will be forgotten.

That's outrageous

After eating the thunder fruit, he became a noble power bank. It was too hard.

Really, when the gunshot thundered, I thought I was playing magnetic field.

Karina and Pa Dong's relationship is too big. It is normal that Karina's fruit can transform and greatly enhance physical fitness. Devil fruits, development experience and personal habits can all be copied. With so much knowledge, this fruit is not only versatile, but others are also helping you to accumulate experience in the work gang. It is so powerful that it is a hexagonal warrior, the bear's pop-up fatigue and long-distance movement, the healing fruit recovery, the Brucamen fruit hides in space, the staring fruit can see through other people's thoughts, the defense of the barrier fruit, and revolution in group battles. The encouragement of the army, singles depends on the situation, find a restrained one, even if the domineering is not outstanding, it is still very useful, and since I have experience in developing devil fruits, I will also use domineering when using the strong fruit after awakening, and the experience will be gained at the same time, then This fruit is the strongest. There is no problem with the summoner Pa Dong, but it doesn't have to be 100% to see if the summoner has original strength. 80% Is enough. If you summon a few at the same time, you will be invincible. Even if Im cannot copy it, you will be invincible directly. There is also a price, which is too small. It only requires mental power, and the lonely red is hiding in the dark, at a certain distance from Karina, otherwise it will be discovered by the Knights of God. In this way, Padong can personally protect Karina, and can also remotely choose who pays the mental power. Moreover, the focus of these two values ​​​​is not on head-on combat, but more on the combination of abilities. If you develop them well, you will win.

The difference is waived and the ticket is refunded

The ending is very good, I like it very much, it's a pity, I recommend it

Deal with life and write another book.

Why is there no one for such a good book?

I am bored. I am not interested in the subsequent plot at all. How can I write about those things later?

Readers who are very demanding about novels can give up. The underlying logic of this novel is wrong. The Thunder Fruit was eaten by Anilu in 1520 in the Haiyuan calendar. It was eaten between 1505 and 1512. It was interesting at first, but I didn't expect to get to Tuo Da. You can give up after seeing this. There is no need to waste time.