Immortal Purple Mansion

My day, the spiritual field of the immortal mansion, the old thing from the ancient times

If you think that part is not good, you can say it. If you think that part of the chapter is too bland, you can also say it and you don't want to read it. Mengxin accepts criticism...

It's well written and eloquently told without the embarrassment of changing one's skin to become an immortal. Come on!

I haven't watched it yet, but I remember that the finale of Zifu Xianyuan has the golden finger turning into a painting, right?

I haven't finished reading the first chapter. It's too intellectual. A group of young Qi practitioners can know the specific date of the end of the ancestor's life. This is too ridiculous. Learn about the life-extending pill. Who can know how many days he has left unless the ancestor himself says it? And the alchemy thing is too stupid. You are too confused. How can it be alchemy? Isn't this a rice cooker?

The protagonist's face is really thicker than the city wall. The senior sister helped you twice, but she still had the nerve to directly ask the senior sister for the elixir, and said it didn't matter if it was inconvenient. It was disgusting.

If the title of the book were changed, wouldn't it be Zifu Immortal Fate?

From the first chapter, it was written that because the sect's golden elixir monks failed to form elixirs, everyone in the sect began to feel insecure and fearful that the sect's destruction was imminent. Even the protagonist felt this sense of crisis. As a result, nothing happened until the protagonist had been cultivating safely in the sect for several years? Is this groundless worry or is it just a pretense of suspense?🤔

Do you have any spiritual beasts? If you live in a fairy house, you can raise them.

Very good, could use more

One, the Thousand Mile Teleportation Talisman is actually sold in a small shop, and it is so cheap Two, the secret realm slanderer went out to wander around before he had taken care of himself. What do you want to do? There are so many elixirs, and recovering from injuries is not simple Three, and the spiritual beasts, can you raise better ones? With the Immortal Mansion, even raising a pig can build a foundation. Doesn't this mean increasing combat power? But the setting is a bit interesting, I hope the author will continue his efforts,

As long as it is not a system, you can see it 😁

Following up

Borrowing the building to push the book Starting point, "Cultivation of Immortality: If I don't want to be a grandfather, I will take over the house directly"

In fact, there is not much problem with the writing, but some plot logic is not quite right.

Why did you build the foundation in Chapter 50? Looking at the front, the realm is still the mortal realm system, so how many chapters did you write to prepare for the later realm? If you write too much, the pace will seem slower than before, and if you write less, will it be completed in just over 1 million?

🙂 I don't want to read the exercises after seeing them

Save it for now and read it after you have written 100 chapters. I also suggest that you don't combine it into one.

Looking at the table of contents, there is no title even. I think you, the author, are not very good at writing. It is either a mess or a eunuch!