The Magical Girl Turned Dark After Being Saved by Me

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle

Actually, I think the core idea of ​​your book is okay, which is to save magical girls in the dark and dark magical girl world view, and then make them yandere, and then create a harem Shura field that everyone loves to see. But to be honest, the plot you wrote is too cliche, and the plot is not good enough. Everyone has experienced enough of this type of plot, so that they are not surprised at all, and the counter-routine has become an extremely vulgar one. Furthermore, the status of the magical girl in your book is completely unequal to that of the villain from the beginning. If the protagonist hadn't intervened, there would be no room for resistance. And in the end, you didn't understand what the protagonist wanted to do, save the magical girl? Did he know from the beginning what the magical girl would become after being saved by him? Who knows if he used another way to harvest the energy of the magical girl. If the protagonist had a darker heart, could it be said that the magical girl changed from a prop of a force to a prop of the protagonist's force, but in the end she was still played by the evil force. I know you want to write a plot where the protagonist saves a girl in distress, and then discovers that the girl he saved has become a yandere, but the way you write it makes it look very bad. Also, except for the heroine who sets the label at the beginning, there is no charming supporting character throughout the whole process. The supporting characters are like human-machine. The first world has a lot of things that were hastily ended without being expanded. The social relationships of magical girls, the daily life of magical girls, why magical girls became magical girls are all not mentioned. To be honest, it is really not good to change maps in a hurry without even opening a map. There is even a plot of accidentally falling into another world during a battle. This will only make the reader feel that everything before has been in vain. You should at least write about the daily life of magical girls in this world in detail, save other magical girls in this world, and then consider changing the map after you have completely exposed Kyubey's conspiracy. I hope the author will continue his efforts in the next book.

The second setting is the same as the Magical Girl Battle Royale anime, right?

The beginning of the article is like a small article, first a passionate description, and then recalling how it started.

The sauce is here, bubbling + tasting!

It's good to read, I love reading it, I will update more, this kind of novel is still very interesting 😍

Does the protagonist want to be a bad guy or a good guy? Is it a good thing for a weak girl to become a yandere while shouting for salvation? What a despicable male protagonist

Is it like a demon? Commander Maple Sugar?

It's okay to write, it's interesting, I'll give you the vote

Why are there some repeated words from time to time?

Has the author ever been a magical girl? Just write randomly