From Being Poor and Cultivating Immortals, to Being Able to Reach Heaven with a Single Talisman

To be honest, your writing style is really great, but you write about cultivating immortality as if it were a real society. . Don't you feel weird? I've read 50 pictures. . . Then the protagonist specializes in talismans and successfully obtains two talismans. . The rest are all trivial matters of life. Not twisting? There is no distinction between priority and importance. Cultivation to immortality is cultivation of immortality, and trivial matters in life are trivial matters in life. As a result, only three of the 50 chapters deal with the details of cultivating immortals, and the rest are all side missions. In addition, the structure of the world of cultivating immortals is the same as that of reality, which is like a pyramid. It will most likely not work in the world of cultivating immortals. It is the pinnacle of personal strength, and the most powerful person formulates the so-called rules. These rules serve the top person. Do you think it can work in the world of cultivating immortals? This rule itself prevents the people below from climbing to the same level as the first person. If you say that the world hasn't been destroyed, you're talking nonsense. Just like eating, the first one eats the freshest and best ingredients, and then in order to prevent others from eating the same ingredients, various rules are made that seem reasonable, and then everyone follows the rules, and the result is that the ingredients are still second-hand or third-hand. Let me ask you about the rules of whether to play or not. In the world, it is normal for you to eat meat and others to drink soup, but you have to customize the rules to let others drink soup. In the end, even if they drink soup according to the rules, you say they will not drink it. Just ask if this kind of rule is recognized by others to climb up the ladder. Isn't it scary?

The writing is too profound, and I, the uninitiated, cannot appreciate it or understand it. It has been dozens of chapters and the golden finger has not appeared yet. It is all about miscellaneous things. What did I read? I read Shuangwen to see the protagonist grow up, not romance or social criticism.

As the title says, if you readers have any suggestions, you can feel free to express them here. I will listen to my advice.

After reading the first 30 chapters, I still don't know why the protagonist wants to become an immortal. Is it purely a matter of seeking enlightenment? Later, I bit the bullet and couldn't hold on until I reached chapter 50. . . The protagonist is like a person who pays to work in an MLM den, the kind with extremely high loyalty. When something is wrong, he can always convince himself, digest the contradiction, and then practice like a pig with peace of mind, which is awesome 👍. I know that the author left some foreshadowings about what was wrong with the master, the Weapon Refining Pavilion, and the court, but the protagonist who traveled to the past had no idea of ​​resistance? I admit that it's useless for a novice to have any ideas, but in the psychological descriptions of so many protagonists, they all say that I only seek Tao and don't lend money. Is that all? Conflicts should be spiraling, one leading to the other, rather than being stored and not released. Using trivial things to dilute the contradictions, not letting this bright point bloom, and trying to suppress it in the end makes it really uncomfortable to read, and it is difficult to push the point that is suppressed in the end very high.

If you are poor, stop cultivating immortality. You can go home and wait to die 🔨🔨🔨

No fighting, no spells, no training It's like writing martial arts directly

The daily practice between the brothers is very heart-warming, but I don't know what their master Qingyunzi is plotting, so don't let the warmth fall apart.

Guan Yu wanted to be a family man because of the distinction between good and evil. Do you think your explanation makes sense?

When I saw Qingqing being killed, I couldn't stand it anymore. . . Death from poison

I have read almost fifty chapters, and I can say that it doesn't feel like a novel about cultivating immortals. It is quite martial arts style, and Golden Finger has no sense of presence. Although the writing is quite delicate, it doesn't seem to be eye-catching 😰 and is a bit too bland.

It's pretty good-looking, and the talisman setting is innovative, unlike the one written by the LV1 author.

It's like eating too much thick oil, soy and vinegar, and then serving preserved eggs mixed with tofu. It's refreshing, fast-paced, and quite good.

It's not easy. It's almost 300,000 yuan and it's on the shelves.

As soon as Chapter 40 came out, I probably abandoned more than half of the book, because the main character seemed like a nine-legged fish.