After Rebirth, He Was Written into the Secret Love Diary by the School Belle

The writing is very atmospheric.

Author, if this book didn't have multiple female protagonists, I would blow your head off

The description of "he, he, he" in the middle of the first chapter feels similar to the first person's "me, me, me". He thought he was dreaming, so he went to the toilet first, "he, he, he, that". What is your perspective? How do you know what he is thinking and doing? This is not how third person is used. Also, the protagonist behaves like a 35-year-old teacher, like a primary school student.

There is nothing wrong with it. Whether it is the choice of words or sentences or the rhythm of the story, it is told eloquently, not boring or exaggerated, and it is well written. Come on! Which editor works under it, and are there any other books?

Very literary. . . . False rebirth

What the hell are you writing in the last two chapters? Just let eunuchs be eunuchs. There is no need to make the last two chapters disgusting.

The author should go and get some data. I'm afraid you won't be able to get up from the pit. This book is really good.

The writing is very detailed, a bit unlike online writing

Let's create a character card. I hope Jiang Yan is the heroine.

I hope Xiang Wan has a single female lead, not multiple girls

Can the author read it for himself after writing it? Does this character match the previous one? Are you writing a novel as a unit drama?

Looks good, I give you all my votes

This book is well written, don't end abruptly like the previous one.