After Being Reborn, I Found Myself in the Campus Belle's Secret Crush Diary

The description of "he, he, he" in the middle of the first chapter feels similar to the first person's "me, me, me". He thought he was dreaming, so he went to the toilet first, "he, he, he, that". What is your perspective? How do you know what he is thinking and doing? This is not how third person is used. Also, the protagonist behaves like a 35-year-old teacher, like a primary school student.

Author, if this book didn't have multiple female protagonists, I would blow your head off

There is nothing wrong with it. Whether it is the choice of words or sentences or the rhythm of the story, it is told eloquently, not boring or exaggerated, and it is well written. Come on! Which editor works under it, and are there any other books?

The writing is very atmospheric.

What the hell are you writing in the last two chapters? Just let eunuchs be eunuchs. There is no need to make the last two chapters disgusting.

Very literary. . . . False rebirth

The author should go and get some data. I'm afraid you won't be able to get up from the pit. This book is really good.

Can the author read it for himself after writing it? Does this character match the previous one? Are you writing a novel as a unit drama?

I hope Xiang Wan has a single female lead, not multiple girls

Let's create a character card. I hope Jiang Yan is the heroine.