Steady Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Hard Work

The content is not bad, but the latter part is too classical Chinese, and now it feels a bit out of place. It needs more vernacular to make listening more comfortable.

It's a bit inexplicable to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger...

The progress is a bit slow, Tie Zi, only thirty pictures talked about two things.

I see it's pretty good so far; but the protagonist's strength is average and the pretense is a bit too much The author needs to stop it, otherwise I won't be able to write it later;

There doesn't need to be too much conflict, and the combat power doesn't need to collapse. Since I have written this way in the early stage, I will stick to it consistently. The most important thing is that the combat power system cannot collapse like the one written in another book. The combat power system collapses so badly in the middle and late stages that it is impossible to read.

I would like to ask the author when the protagonist will go solo. I always feel that this is a bit frustrating, although it is mutually beneficial.

The refreshing feeling of upgrading and the feeling of being undisturbed.

Okay, it's a fine product, but it's too old-fashioned.

The progress of the exercises is comparable to the point-adding flow, and there is no upper limit for increasing proficiency in one day.

So far, so good.

It's okay and pretty, but I can't keep up with the updates. This update seems too watery.

It's beautiful and I love watching it. To me, it's ambrosia. It's a pity that the monthly tickets have been used up.

I watched 46% of the time. I used the same template over and over again. The protagonist became so versatile and still cooperated with me. He could have left long ago.