Low-Key Cultivation of Immortality: Proficiency Leads to the Road to Immortality

Don't have any romantic scenes with junior sisters. I feel that both junior sisters are not worthy. They are both prostitutes for free. I find this annoying, so we should separate.

At first glance, the slow pace of this kind of fairy tale is okay, and it can be regarded as refreshing. But it gets boring all the time.

Why are there so many chapter names of senior brothers, sisters and disciples? Looking at over 80 chapters, there are almost 20? 😰

After reading it, I realized that this is just a novel version of Liu Xiu Xian, with continuous upgrades and descriptions of cultivation mixed with a little plot 😅.

There are millions of words, but the comment section is so deserted. I admire the author's perseverance!

This way of writing is really uncomfortable to see. .

It's mediocre, nothing outstanding, nothing wrong, it feels like it comes from AI

I just read it, and I would like to ask the book friends who have been following this book whether there are many scenes between the two junior sisters of the protagonist in the back of the book, and whether the protagonist and the junior sisters form a Taoist couple. If they really form a Taoist couple, I'd better run away.

I hope I don't have a romantic relationship with my junior sister. I feel like the gap is a bit big.

Su very, don't add emotional scenes, especially the two junior sisters

The first hundred chapters are okay, but the rest are not interesting at all.

Why does it feel so formal and awkward?

Let's wait until the writing becomes better before writing these plots. Looks a bit awkward

It seems that it is not a mortal type, similar to the one in the Lingjian Mountain in the past?

Daily cultivation is quite good, but I don't quite understand the author's system. With spiritual power, isn't it time to enter the qi training period? There is no conflict between practicing Qi and body training at the same time, and I saw that the protagonist is practicing body training and spells at the same time. How can he learn spells without spiritual power! Isn't being able to sense spiritual power and introduce qi into the body a standard during the qi training period?

This is the first time I have read a novel with so many dialogues 👍

A spiritual meal usually costs 2,000 to 5,000 spiritual stones. But the cost often looks different, just some bamboo shoots and some ingredients given by others. Isn't this equivalent to a profit of 2000 times or 5000 times without any cost? It's a bit too buggy. Every time I see this I want to complain, it's more exaggerated than a snack money printing machine. Normally speaking, no matter how much you double your money, you shouldn't make it so many times. If you make more money, it will feel better than if you made alchemy, weapon refining, or formation refining. If you earn tens of thousands at a time, your snacks will feel useless.

How can I put it this way? It's a limited exemption, and the genre is my favorite. But after writing it, I felt that the author couldn't control it. At the end of the practice, it becomes boring to improve the quality and quantity of energy. There is no change in the understanding of the world. All the realms after the immortal have no qualitative changes. They are purely based on energy levels. Bigger and stronger are higher realms, so it looks very boring later.

I am a bookworm of more than ten years, this book looks very strange, it looks like it was written by AI

This book didn't jump until the later stages, which is rare. It's a pity that the plot is too bland, it's just an upgrade, and it gives people a sense of monotony in the later stages.

The back is too bad. It won't work after leaving Zizhu Peak. It's completely ruined. At least there can be a few flowers engraved on the front log. The back is hard to describe, man!

After the protagonist becomes an immortal, it only takes dozens of days from entry to peak. This is true whether he is a loose immortal, a human immortal, an earthly immortal, a heavenly immortal, or a golden immortal.

It didn't look good after going to Fire Dragon Valley.

A new map needs to be opened. In a group of top Taiyi, even Taiyi doesn't have a map that can be counted on the five fingers. The protagonist is already in the saint realm, and there is no way to write about it without opening a new map. With the amount of updates you have, opening new maps and upgrading them is more attractive than building them. Even though the plot is old, it's pretty good if it's enough.

What you write is a bit like a diary.

You can cast spells in the body-training state, and you can't destroy the world during the qi-training stage. The characters are written as gentle as jade, which makes them look awkward.

What kind of thing is this written? I really don't know the meaning and purpose of the characters. I always feel that the dialogue has no beginning or end and is very awkward.

Good looking author, don't have an appendix, you are the best