Immortality: a New Talent Every Year

It's not bad, but I feel that the content is a bit too simple. There seems to be no such things as magic escape techniques and attack methods. These things may be written later.

One talent per year for cultivating immortality is too much. In the end, the time required for each talent increases by 10 times for each talent you possess. The first year, the second 10 years, and the third 100 years are like this.

There is still a lot of room for improvement in the author's writing style

It always seems weird and incoherent.

Brother, please be clearer and add some adjectives. It's a bit confusing and I can't understand it.

It's too bland, and I'm afraid the author won't be able to stick with it. After all, so few people watch it.

It's the first time I've seen a male protagonist with a genius ice spirit root. It's cool. I like the ice type. I'm tired of seeing useless people with 4 or 5 spirit roots every time.

A new talent a year? Can I still continue writing this article?

I understand. In order to make this kid's backer less reliable, he updates his exercises every day and won't let him go out, right?

Although it is the most basic one, it is well written and I can't wait for the follow-up.

This setting always feels like a master with a single female protagonist

Is this following the trend (can I refresh my cheats every month)?

Envy, I want a lot of investment! If only I had that many books.

I like this relaxed type,

The time is not very clear. It is best to make a timetable of how long it will take for the protagonist to do what he wants to do. Also, which is the upper limit of the force value in this book? Mahayana, Jinxian or Daluo. Is it a planetary system? Or is it the three realm organizations of heaven, earth, and underworld? Three Thousand World System?

It's not as exaggerated as the comment section said, so it's quite enjoyable. The progress is very fast. Some people are just like this.

The update is so small, author, how can you sleep?

Sofa

Is there any double monthly ticket event at the end of the month?