Starting from Swordsman and Proud Jianghu, Fighting the Sword Across the Heavens

This kind of novel will not kill those important characters, because it will not be written if the author is killed.

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It's not good to watch. It's a journey through the world of martial arts. It comes with innate skills, small steps, and sword skills. It's basically invincible. Invincibility doesn't matter. The storyline is not ordinary. The writing is average. Rating: 2 and a half stars.

Reincarnation and Awakening Memories The main god's space fragments can travel through time and have residual functions Newbie Gift Pack Innate Skills I don't know if there are any resources from old friends

1. The golden finger is too wide open, Xiantian Kung Fu, Lingbo Weibu, Yi Jian Sword Technique, Shaolin Xiaohuan Dan! Even if you memorize these exercises automatically, your understanding is incredible. Practicing the small world technique feels like you can do it just by looking at it! 2. The writing is too verbose, with a lot of explanations over and over again, which has no effect on promoting the plot. Make readers feel excited. 3. The plot design is rude. After practicing for five years in the early stage, he has achieved great success. He must wait until Lin Pingzhi conflicts with Yu Renyan in the tea shop before the protagonist takes action against the Qingcheng faction. In the original work, when Yu Canghai arrived in Fuzhou, he had already killed all the escort agencies outside Fuzhou.

Brother, what are you saying? It sounds like a stutter.

Your pen name does not match the work. When I was young, I watched Jin Yong and thought he was good-looking. When I look at Jin Yong as he gets older, he is indeed not as good as Gu Long.

On the contrary, it seems that the protagonist is a villain and is successful.

Golden Finger Time Travel is a non-systematic text with unique skills. Invincible writing routines, follow the process and plot. The above two sentences are summarized and I will talk about my own feelings: The hook is so big that I don't have any imagination to cover it. Basically, I can see the whole story at a glance. The rest of the story will either be a finalized version of the plot, or it will be an endless show with overwhelming strength. At most, I will add a few vests to run side plots. You can understand what is written by reading the introduction every day. To be honest, if you don't write a runaway plot, it's best not to make an invincible flow. The running account looks really boring. Usually I call this type of eunuch style.

Ip People from Sichuan actually didn't write about the Qingcheng sect, but went to Fujian to mess around.

Could the author please polish his writing style? Not to mention the plot, the protagonist's name appears too frequently, which greatly affects the viewing experience.

I just read the beginning, and I have a suggestion for you. There are too many words. . .

Would you like to think about what you wrote? Do you have brains? See if the current Fortune 500 foreign companies can do what you do. Elementary school students have no idea about ancient productivity

What a sentiment. Queen Mother of the West. Nuwa. Be his Taoist companion