Mortal Refiner

The early plot was too bland, but overall it's still watchable. I hope the follow-up plot won't be too plot-heavy. Keep up the good work.

Specially come to bubble, Jiangjiang has read

I have read Chapter 44 with a total of 100,000 words. The protagonist is an indigenous boy with healthy parents and one older brother. The unconventional Lone Star of Heaven does not have a golden finger in the beginning, and there is suspected of adventure. The sect he joins is not the traditional wolf society of cultivating immortals. The whole sect is relatively harmonious The story is bland and unremarkable. It seems to be in the mortal stream but more mortal than the mortal stream. No joy, no sorrow Single more than nothing? At present, it seems that it is Zhu Gusheng The book is called the Ninth Weapon Refining Principles, but half of the guidelines have been written down so far, and the text rarely touches on the theory of weapon refining, only the processing of weapon refining materials and the control of a large amount of spiritual power are written in such and such a way The narrative technique is slightly It has a single, very old-fashioned taste, and there have been two times of highly toxic writing like "I don't know what will happen to the protagonist in the future." To sum up, dry food -, there are many books to read, there is a trace amount of toxicity, but not very toxic. It depends on the other books on weapon refining. This book is super slow and the writing on refining is extremely bland.

Subject matter from 20 years ago, which the editor will not accept, has been appraised

Unsealed in the new year, the pen and ink are fragrant. As Yisi bids farewell to the old year and Bingwu welcomes the new, I would like to extend my most sincere New Year blessings to you. You use words as a boat, carrying thousands of readers through the mountains and seas through the years, spreading the fireworks of the world between the lines, and describing various situations in the world. Those vivid characters that appear on the page and those sincere feelings that touch the heartstrings all stem from your delicate observation of life and your sincere persistence in creation. In the new year, I hope you will always have tea on your desk and a spring of inspiration flowing from your writing. May every journey you take turn into beautiful sentences in your writing; may every desire in your heart shine brightly in your words. I hope that the creative journey will be smooth and open, with excellent works emerging one after another, and my reputation becoming more and more famous. I wish you a happy new year and all the best!

There are thousands of avenues, I hope you can break through the chaos and become one of your own. Come on 🙏

I passed by and read two chapters. The content is too bland. If you have time, you can revise it.