I Opened the Altar in My Dream

The subject matter is quite good, but why is it so confusing when I look at it? This book is so tiring to read! As a bookworm of decades, I am very tired from reading it!

There is a female protagonist, let me take a look first😍😍😍

Don't write about cultivating immortality again and again, it will become a piece of shit...😏😏

After reading Golden Chapter 3, I thought I had come to the female channel 🙂 for some earthy gossip. If it is not a love story, the author should refine it a bit. This kind of emotional line can be moved back. Every word in Golden Chapter 3 should not be wasted.

This is a BUG collection post! If you find any plot logic bugs or cognitive setting bugs while reading this book, you are welcome to correct them in this post!

We are looking for supporting roles of all kinds, regardless of gender! If the character is set as a child, you can bring the god setting of Qi! Pictures are better!

It's so confusing. I don't know what I'm writing. It doesn't make me feel better. I have no desire to read anymore.

This Bai Yanyan must die later, right? Is it a coincidence that I don't want the mother of my childhood sweetheart?

Wang Dahex, I want to see you open 1303

The writing is good, but it's very tiring to read, and it's easy to ignore the plot when listening to the book.

To be honest, the writing is incomprehensible

The subject matter is quite good, but the writing is too messy and the main line is very vague. The protagonist has no ideas of his own and is all pushed along. There is also the plot of the best friend in the early stage, which is even more poisonous.

What about the author?