Reborn in 1979: If I Can't Buy It, I'll Make It Myself

I don't know what the protagonist is doing. Has he never experienced hardship or rural life? He keeps saying he knows a lot and has technical skills, but then he argues with the village chief over trivial matters. He doesn't do the easy tasks like building a solar cooker, water heater, or light bulb; he only does the dirty and hard work. With that kind of ability, he could go anywhere. Why does he have to stay in the countryside when the entire village's assets combined don't amount to much?

What kind of rubbish is this? You finish writing about one thing before starting another, like a mental patient. You talk about this and that, and it doesn't make any sense.

There's too much useless daily dialogue and gossip in the plot.

DIY? I looked at several pictures and only fixed a flashlight; everything else was just a mess.

Separating the family and sending a 15-year-old away? Even if they're a burden, you can't do it; you won't get past the village committee's approval.

You don't want to be as cunning as you were in your past life. Instead, you're out in the village forging iron, chopping trees, and doing farm work. You don't think farm work is easy, do you?

After reading fifty or sixty chapters, the book has strayed from its theme and I don't know what to write next.

It feels like a haphazard, disjointed effort.

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Are you crazy to separate from your family at 15? In rural areas, people don't separate their families before marriage.