From the Third Position to Xuzhou, He Began to Assist Liu Bei.

Starting around chapter 300, is it really written by one person? It no longer sells accounts. There is a sense of romance that goes to the core of the earth, his words and actions are illogical, he is messing around with cats and dogs, does he know what he is doing?

Steelmaking can actually develop by leaps and bounds, just click on two technologies. The first is coke making and the second is refractory bricks. With these two things, sponge iron can be directly smelted into molten iron. If there is graphite, graphite bricks can also be made, and the converter can be used to smelt molten iron directly into molten steel. With molten steel, you can start basic industry.

It's a joke that the Bian clan of Gunzhou changed their name.

Boring, a modern man goes to assist a feudal monarch, where is the modern education he received? Haven't you heard of Napoleon's famous quote? Nowadays, everyone who writes about the Three Kingdoms goes back to lick Liu Bei's smelly feet. I don't know what kind of inexplicable and strange customs they have, but they have traveled through time and again and still have a arrogant attitude. In reality, the only person who can help me after traveling through time is my teacher.

It is best not to mix settings and personal items, which will make the story incoherent. Let the story speak, and the setting and private goods be expressed through the words and actions of the characters in the plot.

In terms of pretending to change the surname of the Bien family, and drinking and eating meat during the period of filial piety, it was not in line with the values ​​​​of the time. With Zhaolie's personality, he would not accept someone with such a black mark to work around him.

Compared with the boiled salt method, the ancient sun-dried salt method has great advantages in cost reduction and efficiency improvement, but there is another point that the author did not mention, which is also very important, that is, the quality is greatly improved. The salt boiling method is to directly evaporate the brine quickly, which is difficult to purify effectively. The boiled salt is gray and yellow, bitter and astringent. In modern times, the sun-drying salt method has been integrated. After the slow evaporation step, the model brine is greatly purified. The resulting salt has white particles as large as snowflakes. In ancient times, it was the best salt. We seaside people have been eating this kind of coarse salt since we were young. My family has almost never bought salt in that kind of package. In the past, fishermen scraped the salt and sold it along the street.

The number one hypocrite in the Three Kingdoms, he lied to Zhang Fei and Guan Yu about being a member of the Han clan, and became the sworn brother by crying and hypocrisy! In history, the eighteen princes attacked Dong, and it was Sun Jian who killed Hua Xiong while warming wine at Sishui Pass! Then Liu Bei attempted to seize Xuzhou again. Did Tao Qian really die of illness? After losing Xuzhou and running to Jingzhou, Liu Biao died of the so-called illness again! Then there is Liu Zhang from Yizhou, so what? Where is Liu Bei's benevolence and righteousness?

From the beginning, the main character's messy costume made me feel uncomfortable (but I actually started reading it after reading the latest chapter first and found it good, so I skipped the ones that made me uncomfortable). Later on, the advantages gradually emerged, the situation was well-founded, and the characterization made it possible to feel the emotions of the characters. They are living people, not dead people. As for the part that I think needs to be improved, it is to clearly distinguish the main text from daily life. The daily life is humorous, and the main text is serious and serious.

In fact, what I like most are novels that clearly describe the psychology of the characters, weighing the pros and cons, and assessing the situation. It makes me feel very friendly, as if the character is a buddy of mine, and we are there to brag, comment on the country, and criticize the characters.

You are like this, you are a bit dissatisfied with Lao Liu, just the part about writing a letter to Gongsun Zan, I don't think Lao Liu can write it

The writing is trivial. . . It's far worse than the other side for my son.

The protagonist's pretense is not rounded enough, and there is no natural sense of pretending to be invisible like hearing thunder in a silent place. It is rather blunt. Other than that, it's okay. The more you pretend, the more you'll become proficient.

Especially in the chapter where Sun Ce thinks Guan Yu kills Hua Xiong, doesn't it seem inconsistent? The son doesn't even know his father's contribution? Do you have to ask Guan Yu to help Sun Jian? The novel of the Three Kingdoms has been around for at least more than ten years, and there are relatively few novices. Now there are supplementary discussions of historical data under each chapter. The Romance of the Three Kingdoms itself also has errors and omissions. I personally feel that if there are historical data, try to restore the history as much as possible. If it is not clear, the Romance of the Three Kingdoms can be used as an assistant. Isn't this good? In the novel, no one cares about the characters, the Taoyuan Three Brothers, or the Blue Dragon Sword weapon. There is a hint of martial arts in dozens of rounds, and those who are more rigorous may not be willing to accept it. No matter how fierce the Wolf Warrior is individually, it is not as good as the teamwork of Red Sea Operation. Zhuge Borrows the Wind and Eight Arrays to Show Guan Gong the Holy Spirit. This thing is purely fantasy, but fortunately there are not many authors who have written it.

1. In terms of agriculture, the simplest composting technology must be developed, and keel waterwheels can also be developed. 2. In terms of military industry, the Mi family deals in salt and iron, and the steel filling method can also be developed; in the later siege battles, counterweight catapults can also be developed. 3. In terms of medical treatment, there were many epidemics in the Three Kingdoms. The Seven Sons of Jian'an, Lu Su, Lu Meng and others all died of the plague. Hua Tuo alone may not be the protagonist. At least the modern protagonist must inquire about the prevention and treatment methods of various infectious diseases, such as plague, cholera, and various common influenzas, especially prescriptions. The ancient protagonist has a lot of things to do and may not necessarily know about the plague situation in the Three Kingdoms. You can arrange for the modern protagonist to look up information about the Three Kingdoms in an Internet cafe when they have nothing to do. Then when they see the plague situation in the Three Kingdoms, they can quickly inform the ancient protagonist about the matter and related prevention and control methods. As for gunpowder, there is no need to mention it. Not many books on the Three Kingdoms know how to use gunpowder, otherwise they would just give it a thumbs up.

I remember that the accuracy of the history of the Three Kingdoms was very low, because those who could write it did not dare to write too comprehensively for fear of offending others.

What a strange author. I saw the protagonist pretending to be a nobleman in the second chapter, and then the author himself revealed in the comments section that the pig's feet will be exposed in more than a hundred chapters! Man of god

The writing in these pictures is incomprehensible, and they are so modest and fake.

The writing is good. Although I understand that the ancients all spoke classical Chinese, for readers, too many classical Chinese texts are difficult to translate and are not conducive to public reading.

It can only be said that Xin San's willful erosion is really powerful Although almost everyone scolded Xin San after Xin San Rui became popular, there are few creators who can avoid all the mistakes Xin San has made. Just take the first forty chapters of this book that I have read as an example. First, it is to manipulate reality for the convenience of one's own narrative. For example, Chen Dao joined Liu Bei before Liu Bei took control of Xuzhou; second, his personal language style is too heavy to be like the Three Kingdoms. The performance often contains a long psychological description, and is often too colloquial and has modern jokes. However, this is indeed the first book I have seen on the shelves with nearly a million words that can be reviewed by an intern with 0 subscriptions, so let's take a look.

A useless person helps others, but a failed person still helps others?

I cast two votes. Come on. You can use AI to help pick out typos.

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Give me two monthly passes and don't die.

Nine monthly passes, come on 😡

Finally, there are historical novels that are readable, have good plots, and are interspersed with humorous modern jokes. They can still have good effects. Please write them well. I have been a bookworm for almost 20 years! If you can see it, it's already good grass! Give me your monthly ticket, come on

When will I start the latest novel?

I haven't read it for half a month, so I'll just take one every day.

It is a slow-growing one, but the updates are too few. The author would be more comfortable if he updated more 😎

Dude, you really don't want to update? The impression of your book is quite good.