How to Run a Dungeon

Yes, the creativity is pretty good. I'm tired of seeing monster-killing and upgrading articles. It's pretty cool to see this kind of business model. It's just that the author plans to use some gunpowder or modern technology later, which is a bit poisonous. A good fantasy novel must be written by Shi? Let's not talk about whether chemical reactions like magic and fighting spirit can still take effect in a world with magic and magic. Is the power of modern guns as powerful as magic? A missile worth dozens of tons might not be as powerful as a slap-sized magic trap. It was originally written well, but it had to be fantasy instead of fantasy, science and technology instead of science and technology. Isn't it good to keep the original flavor? Most of the people who read your book read it for the fantasy, not because you want to build tanks and cannons in another world. The main point of your book is how to run a business. I really like the author's creativity, and I hope it won't be poisoned later. No matter how powerful the gunpowder pistol missile is, can it kill ghosts and other things that are immune to physical damage and have no physical body? Since there are energy sources such as magic crystals, they will naturally be used by others to make all kinds of things. Fantasy is just a fantasy. Things in reality are more powerful than those in fantasy. Do they still deserve to be called fantasy?

To be honest, what I thought I could see was that the protagonist built the dungeon into layer-by-layer copies (game copies of various fantasy worldviews in previous lives), and then the adventurers devoted themselves fully to the strategy. In the process, the dungeon became famous and mutually achieved each other. I even imagined that the dungeon and the adventurers would join forces to fight against third-party forces (such as the church that showed its face) at critical moments. The result... Well... It's quite different. The character of the protagonist is also a traditional startled type. He repeats boring jokes like "I think xx is better", "You don't understand" and "Good Master" with his subordinate, round after round after round after round...

Is the protagonist's IQ given by charging phone bills?

If you continue to write like this, your book will be hopeless. I feel that the following ten chapters are completely unnecessary. I just can't write the point, and I have no desire to read it at all. With such a good subject matter, I feel like the author doesn't even know what the readers of this book want to see 🤔 And the most important point is that even if you have a human appearance, you are still the master of the dungeon. In other words, monsters, monsters, monsters. In the eyes of adventurers, they are monsters waiting to be conquered. From the perspective of the dungeon master, adventurers are nourishment. . . I still don't know my position clearly, but if I still think I am a human being and still have such childish thoughts, it will be a tragedy in the future. You haven't written any of the interesting points of this book, and you've written a lot of useless stuff. It's strange that someone will read this. Forget it, I'm not trying to teach the author how to write a book. I just feel that such a good subject matter has completely failed to capture the attention of most readers, and it has strayed far away from the topic. Let's just throw it on the bookshelf and wait for the follow-up.

When will this plot end? I'm here to see the dungeon operation, not some low-level trash like this guy with cerebral palsy.

There are a lot of dungeons in the first picture, which kind of affects the perception.

Currently updated to chapter 38, the creativity is good. You still need to practice writing. Those on the ground should be regarded as lords, and written like the lord construction farming article. I am not a lord, but the entries on farming: from the Northern Wilderness lord to the emperor, and the early stage of the king, these are about territory construction. There are no signs of becoming a land lord yet. Farming is also being constructed underground. But I still haven't seen any information about the monster troops, nor any ideas for dungeon construction.                                                                                                                                                                           Should mainly be based on the number of units, and the well-equipped troops can kill the strong. I haven't felt this book yet. This dungeon novel provides some ideas for the lord novel. (A pioneer territory is surrounded by mountains, and across the mountains is the sea. Then you get a dungeon...)

It's a bit interesting, but low-level adventurers are not strong enough and can be crushed by equipment flow. I hope that the mid-to-high-level combat power will not collapse.