Dragon Clan: Great Alchemist Lu Mingfei

Can there be more? It's too little.

Is the literary youth of the Dragon Clan a must-have?

Roy's spiritual spirit is "Jun Yan", the great president's spiritual spirit is "Time Zero", and Edward's spiritual spirit is "Heaven and Earth are a furnace"😃😃😃

I couldn't stand seeing the clan envoys. The dragon clan and Harry Potter settings are all about special groups hiding in the real world. Young people in Jiangnan are ignorant, and they are messing around in the Three Gorges. You are even more ignorant, and ordinary people can be killed at will. What about the hidden consensus in the mixed race world? If there really is such an awesome clan, either the country is controlled by the clan, or the country is completely unaware of it. Obviously neither is possible. So is such a powerful clan waiting for the army to fight terrorism and clear its territory?

Aren't the domestic mixed races in the Dragon Clan under the control of orthodoxy? If you dare to openly engage in the clan's special envoys, aren't you afraid that the Zhou family will carry the Broken Dragon Platform?

Lu Mingfei in Dragon Clan actually doesn't care so much about Hui Liyi

Good second grade, it seems like a fanfic written by my junior high school classmate. The writing style is a bit too strong. I will persist.

Humanity has developed less than one percent of Lu Mingfei

There are a lot of typos, but the flaws are not hidden, and it is still good-looking. However, there is a plot in the middle that makes me feel like I have eaten shit-flavored chocolate. It describes a long plot between Lu Mingfei and Xia Mi, and then ends hastily with a sworn knot. It does not mean that relationships must end with love, but are you a bit too hasty? Moreover, I subjectively like Xia Mi very much, so I still feel a little uncomfortable. I hope that when the author writes the next Dragon Clan, he can write Xia Mi as the heroine.

Also, I found that there seems to be some problem with the combat power. Is Xia Mi described as a little too weak? She can't even beat an Odin puppet. Although everyone laughs and calls her the next-generation species, she is still a first-generation species. Don't tell me that Odin can mass-produce first-generation species.

Hui Liyi is Hui Liyi. The more you look at the title of Little Red, the more awkward it becomes. Moreover, the writing of the three golden chapters is not very good, so it has been withdrawn.

The female channel's style is too heavy and there are too many commas

Just like the title, the sentence fragmentation is inexplicable It can't be AI, right?

Too many commas make the paragraph look broken

As long as you read enough fan fiction, you can even see Lu Mingfei and Han Han racing

Brother, although Meng Hua is a clown, he is also a man who can spend hundreds of thousands of pocket money. His family is also rich. Chen Wenwen, a middle-class person who comes to visit, actually prepares milk and fruits. It is difficult

Do you have to put the comma like this? If you insert random words in the middle of a sentence and watch it, it will cause drama.

These commas are always added in strange places. This looks really inconsistent.

Is the setting of Fullmetal Alchemist written according to the 03 version or the 09 version?

The idea is very good, but the writing style is average, including some descriptions that feel too dramatic, and it feels like the author is a novice

The author is like a human machine, reading smoothly but too forcefully

I don't think anyone has read it, mainly because of the title of your book. When I first saw the title of your book, I thought you were writing about the alchemy of dragons. The result is alchemy in steelmaking

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Wu Sheng is a bit unnatural at the beginning. Are you the one who collapses as soon as the battle phase comes and likes to ramble? Is it really memetic pollution or is this thing too suitable for newbies to practice? I don't have any ideas about the plot of Xunsilong and it's not easy to develop.

Why is no one talking about Lu Mingfei who returned from the mystery 😏