Lu Mingfei, the Martial Saint of the Dragon Clan

Let's put it this way, this book, this fan novel is very well written, and it has that flavor. The biggest fear when writing a fan novel is a drastic change in style. After all, we have read the original work. If you write a book with a different style, it will conflict with the impression of the original work, and it will inevitably feel awkward. But the shortcomings have also emerged. It is also because your taste is relatively correct, but you update less. Originally, your style cannot advance the plot quickly, and you update so few. Anyway, I am very anxious about this. Another thing that is slightly lacking is that the original work also has relatively scattered plots, but the original work can always connect them together near the end of each book. This is an approach that I think is excellent in the original work. The author can actually practice more.

I have read Lu Mingfei's book about cultivating immortals. How can I put it, the first few dozen chapters do have the flavor of the original work, and the plot is also very good, but later on, there are some Warring States, aristocratic families, and calling Caesar Brother Caesar, which is very funny. It makes me feel that I am not reading a fan of the Dragon Clan, but some decent urban cultivating immortals. Article, but what is the point of watching a fanfic? The point of watching a fanfic must be to see the protagonist or some things develop in a different direction from the original work. It is not only interesting, but also subconsciously compared with the original work. Once the overall taste and style change drastically, at least I can't stand it at all. It's too distracting and awkward.

Regarding fast food novels, this is very unqualified. It is mixed with too much water. It keeps lamenting the past of the Wusheng period and does not look forward to future development. The future is the way out.

Not bad, I accepted the vote. Please pay attention to the typos. Come on.

I would like to ask, is the author a woman?

It took me two years to watch it in one night. It's really short.

It was recommended, but I haven't read it yet. I want to pray to heaven first and ask all the gods and Buddhas to bless this fanfic until it is completed.

I suddenly had an idea "Lu Mingfei returned from Warhammer" Lu Mingfei's soul traveled through Warhammer 40K and was enslaved by Orks in a world occupied by orcs. After going through pain, he was finally rescued by the Weeper of the Holy Blood Group, but because the Weeper was single, he could not save all the human slaves. Witnessed countless human slaves being killed by orcs, and a Lamenter warrior named Gallo who died tragically in battle to save him. He narrowly escaped holding the warrior's last relic, a skull amulet symbolizing human purity. We also witnessed the weepers who fought to the death with the orcs and shed blood because they did not want to abandon the human slaves. We also witnessed the human slaves who did not want these noble warriors to be buried with them and collectively knelt down and begged them to take their children and evacuate the slaughterhouse quickly. After experiencing all this, the Weepers managed to escape from the planet. This series of events completely changed him. In painful regret, he began to ask for self-abuse to train himself. "You are all a bunch of big fools to save a waste like me from dying..." All the way to Mingfei In an accident, he was fatefully spotted by the leader of the Weeper Chapter, and he fought against reconsideration and secretly recruited Lu Mingfei in private The Space Marine who was transformed into a Lamenter was renamed Garro Katos, replacing the name and identity of the Lamenter warrior who died in the battle to save him, as well as his glory (because Lamenters cannot replenish their troop supply during the Atonement Crusade). "Why choose me... A loser like me" - Jialuo Katos (Lu) "Perhaps because of fate or because of your eyes, I saw the shadow of Jialuo in your eyes. I want to try to let you inherit his gene seeds and let our brothers return in another way." The Chapter Master of the Weepers, one thing he had never revealed to anyone, perhaps because of the Emperor's divine inspiration or the talent inherited from their Primarch, was that he saw part of this child's future. Although the future was unclear, there was one image that impressed him. He would become one of them, their blood brother. After undergoing rigorous training, he followed the Weeper on the Atonement Expedition. Due to the Weeper's cursed luck, he participated in countless brutal bloody battles and quickly grew up, becoming the best melee master in the war group. After serving for more than a hundred years, he has become an outstanding warrior who has experienced hundreds of battles. He has become a champion warrior who fought out of the mountains of corpses and seas of blood, and became the champion of the Weeper Chapter. Together with his brothers, he experienced the torture of blood thirst and black rage, but he never lost himself with his lofty faith and firm will. In order to ensure the evacuation of hundreds of humans, the Lamenters and a Hive Fleet launched a brutal and desperate ground and space battle. In the end, in order to protect their brothers and human refugees, they left behind with a tactical team. They faced a high-level Hive Tyrant and its elite Hive Guards. In the brutal killing, they watched their brothers who had fought alongside them for hundreds of years fall one after another. In their rage, they actively embraced the Black Fury and repeated the experience over and over again in the psychic hallucinations of the Black Fury. Experiencing the scene of their genetic ancestor dying in battle, on his deathbed and before he was completely lost in the dark fury, he asked himself whether this life was worth it. Holding his most precious treasure, the skull amulet, he once again strengthened his faith in the memories of his brothers and comrades in the past, because all their comrades were proud of him, the youngest brother among them. "To protect what is cherished" As he was dying, accompanied by the war cry of the weeper, his eyes were suddenly filled with a layer of golden spiritual light. This reminded him that his brothers who had fought side by side with the Black Templars mentioned that there was such an otherworldly existence in the Black Templars, the "Emperor's Champion". With the blessing of golden spiritual energy, he returned to form the Emperor's Chosen, dragging his seriously injured and dying body, and died of exhaustion with all the enemies in front of him. When he fell, under his feet was an endless mountain of corpses piled up by Tyranid corpses, including a Hive Tyrant and even a Hive Titan who died at his hands. He completed his mission perfectly, holding the skull amulet soaked in Tyranid blood and reaching into the gloomy sky. Countless dark dots and huge shadows appeared in the sky, which were the boundless shadows of the Great Devourer. "Priest... Chief, battle... Leader, brothers... I have completed my... Mission..." After saying this, his superhuman body completely collapsed and could no longer be supported. The skull amulet in his hand fell in front of his eyes, and he closed his eyes weakly. As he lay dying, he began to chant the prayer taught to him by the Chapter Chaplain. At the last moment when consciousness completely disappeared, a soft golden light flashed past, and he seemed to see a golden figure staring at him... ... When Lu Mingfei thought he was completely dead, he opened his eyes again. But he found that he had returned to his former hometown, and at this time he was just in the third grade of junior high school......

I haven't read Jiangnan Old Thief's Dragon Tribe, mainly because that book was published several years ago. Now I feel like I don't want to read it, so I'll look for some fans to read. There doesn't seem to be anything wrong with this book, but I just feel that it's very watery. The whole text is full of Riddlers. Well, shouldn't they be called Riddlers, but Wenqing? Anyway, when I watched it, I felt that the plot was very clumsy and the psychological activities were very pretentious. There is no such thing as a clean and tidy way of doing what you need to do. The conclusion is that he is not a warrior at all. What if we don't talk about pleasure and grudges? A clear conscience? What about chivalry? None at all, just moaning without any illness. If you're unhappy, punch, if you put it down, be more heroic, and just laugh it off. You are entangled in this, entangled in that, a bunch of extremely pretentious mental activities, recalling this and that at every turn, can you be like a warrior?

Immortal cultivators, ninjas, and now the Martial Saint series. I really want to see what other Lu Mingfei series there are.

This is the end of the first volume. Author, please don't imitate Jiang Nan's writing style and moan so pointlessly. This is where Jiang Nan is bad. In the past, teenagers liked this kind of literary and youthful writing style. But now that teenagers have grown up, Jiang Nan doesn't know how to make Lu Mingfei grow up, so we have been It feels like Lu Mingfei is showing off and not growing up. When we watch Lu Mingfei come back from the world of high martial arts and Sekiro, we want to see a Lu Mingfei who has grown into a man. He is not the Lu Mingfei who moans carelessly and speaks bad vernacular and keeps showing off. With that kind of Lu Mingfei, can I just read the original work?

，， I have finished reading all the free parts now, and I feel a bit bad. I think there are several problems like this.        ，，，：，，， The rest are all nonsense omitted when summarizing the main content of the article. No matter how literate the writing is, it has nothing to do with the main line.        ，，， But there is nothing in these more than one hundred pictures. There are too many emotional dramas, inner dramas, and memories, and there is no real business at all. The protagonist needs a career that he can continue to strive for, and then intersperse emotional scenes in the process of completing the career. Don't write it the other way around. If you write it the other way around, you should post a female video instead of a male video. Of course, this book also has many advantages. The author is still very pursuing the writing style and plot. He will correct any mistakes and his attitude is serious and sincere. I have written so much and feel that this idea is a bit wasted. The setting of martial arts and dragon clan can create a lot of sparks. How did Lu Mingfei use martial arts to slay the dragon? Can he use the blood of the dragon clan as a basis for martial arts training? God-level martial arts and the fight between the black king and the white king are very interesting to think about. But now it is all about the emotional drama of the mother-in-law and mother, and it is not Lin Daiyu, so where can such rich emotions come from.

I haven't read Dragon Clan for a long time, and suddenly I saw this Dragon Clan fanfic, which made me feel a little emotional, so I came to support it. Maybe many people, when watching "Dragon", feel that they are as bad as the bad kids in the book, and then fall into it. Reading this fanfic, I suddenly realized that a poor child needs not to be pitiful, but to have the motivation to risk everything. Just like in the original novel, Lu Mingfei had reasons to expend his life to save Nono, Eli Yi, and his senior brother Chu Zihang. At the end of Chapter 171 of the book, it is written, "'Actually, many truths are in it. They are all explained clearly in books and animations.' Lu Mingfei said. 'But no one listens.'"

After reading dozens of chapters, I can only say that the author should not create original works. It is really not suitable for being a fan of the Dragon Clan. You are completely an ancient person in the martial arts master who traveled through time and took away the body. It's really not what I'm saying. It would be better if the author created an original background. It would also be better if the protagonist was directly changed to an original character or a time traveler. However, you chose the one with the most interesting mentality and completely changed the character of Lu Mingfei 🙂. It's a bit difficult.

There is something wrong with this book. Nine out of ten things are wrong. Newbies, let's write a book. Wenqing is very ill. As a result, many times you don't know what you are writing or what you want to say. The plot that originally developed normally suddenly inserted a large section of the wenqing's innocent moaning. It is also very long, and people can't find where the next plot is. The plot is not coherent. Or after a period of literary youth, the plot somehow developed in another direction due to an inexplicable literary youth reason. For example, they were originally going to fight, but after a period of literary youth, why did they sit down to drink tea? What happened,? It's just the psychological activities of some literary youths and there is no dialogue. How come the two parties have a tacit understanding and start drinking tea? Where does the tea come from when preparing for a fight? I often fall into inexplicable memories... It feels like a writer who is a stream of consciousness and has no regard for the life or death of his readers.

The beginning is really amazing, and the familiar writing style makes people immersed in it, but why does it become more and more uncomfortable the more I read it? The rhythm of the book is for the sake of procrastination. Everyone has their own literary talent. Occasionally moaning can attract readers. The question is, are you moaning too much? It is Zhang Zhang's moaning. I can't understand how Lu Mingfei, who went to the world of high martial arts and arrived in Yama, became like that when he returned to the main world. You might as well tell me that Lu Mingfei cultivated Confucianism after time travel. It's normal to have emotions about things and people, but you can't wait to express your feelings when you have time, but I didn't see you stop, and the good cards were played badly My comments were directly blocked and I don't know why. The whole article is not about cursing, but just talking about the content of the article. If you don't accept this, the author can go and have fun, and that thing will only praise you.

Come on, if the updates are slow, I can only keep books, but I am afraid that I will die u1s1, your current updates are the most among the few books I have followed The quality is also excellent In short, I want to have a prostitute, okay?

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There's too much nonsense. To put it bluntly, it's just self-pleasure. The first dozen or so chapters are good, but the rest is an avalanche of crotch pulling.

This book gave me the feeling that it was suitable for a fanfic, but not for original work. It has no main line and loves to describe small details too much, which makes it difficult to even squeeze out a sentence after one chapter. It even takes several chapters to put together the content of one sentence in other books. When I didn't write original characters (Han Ye, Doudou, Little Bear Girl, etc.), They were more or less stuck with the original work. At that time, I felt very good. I guessed what kind of foreshadowing these collisions would have, what kind of feelings would make the protagonist grow, or maybe this would allow him to pretend something later. But when original works appeared more and more later, it felt like the original work had been completely abandoned. The main line was gone, and the bones were missing. The whole novel felt like it had been ripped out and the bones could not stand up. Lu Mingfei's character became a military commander before and now he is as annoying as a little girl crying in bed.

It would be very interesting to give the protagonist a chat group, and then put together the people who play Immortal Lu Mingfei next door, play FGO Lu Mingfei, play interstellar career Lu Mingfei, play Railway Mingfei, Return of Dark Souls Lu Mingfei, Dragon Emperor Lu Mingfei, and the original Lu Mingfei, wouldn't it be very interesting? It would be even more interesting if Duke's characteristics were added to Lu Mingfei.

The first hundred chapters can be summarized in two words------nonsense

I can't stand it at all. It's the first time I've seen something so sloppy. I wrote two or three chapters of two stories about a few sentences. The plot doesn't advance at all. They are all about writing things that have nothing to do with the plot. It's too painful to read. Only ten chapters of the main plot in this book can match the amount of one chapter in other books. There's nothing wrong with wanting to write about literary youth, but you can't write no plot at all. Isn't everyone reading the book just to see the development of the plot? It's not to see how you are pretentious and moaning without reason.

I don't quite understand why I have to play Amnesia again and again. It's rather painful to watch. I jumped in the first three small dungeons, but I still can't jump in the fourth one. The climax of the plot that I was originally looking forward to was a bit difficult for me to accept under this situation. In my understanding, memory and way of thinking together constitute a person. When the author does this, it always feels like half of the plot has the same name and surname, but a different "Lu Mingfei" is walking. I don't care about "Jiuzhou Lu Mingfei", I just want to watch "Dragon Clan Lu Mingfei"...

After reading it for a long time, I didn't feel anything else. Just one word, water, was too watery. I wrote one thing over and over again, horizontally, vertically, and from various passers-by's perspectives. I was convinced.

Alas, it's really hard to read this book. To be honest, I've always been a sick young man, and I'm still a lot of arrogant. I have to talk about half a chapter or even a whole chapter on any question. Did the author really not consider the readers' feelings? To be honest, it would be great if I didn't adjust these scores. Are people in Japan serious about speaking ancient classical Chinese?

I haven't posted a comment for a long time, and I just couldn't hold it in today. The novel is good, and the author's writing style is good, but it doesn't read well. This is different from the Dragon Clan. Although Longzhu is also a bad boy, it is a unique bad boy. It is a story of a bad boy who speaks bad words and constantly experiences losses, grows, and is eliminated by the old thieves. Is there any literary youth in the story? Yes, but not all stories are about literary youth. I just discovered this book today. I read more than 110 chapters in one go. How should I say, the more I read, the more annoying it becomes. It's like I saw a branch of a well-known barbecue restaurant on the road. The signboard also said special barbecue, delicious food that can't be found anywhere else (the main store). I walked into the branch thinking about the greasy barbecue I had last time at the main store, the refreshing salad, and the taste of the signature dishes. Order the signature first, then the barbecue. My mouth is full of oil just thinking about eating that salad. It turns out that the boss first served a plate of salad and two pieces of special marinated meat. You tasted it and it tasted good. You ate the meat while waiting for the boss to serve. It turned out that the boss was too difficult. You ate the salad for a long time and the boss finally put on the meat skewers and came out. You were not happy yet. When you looked seriously, the boss had only one meat skewer in his hand, and the rest was ten pounds of salad. He put it on your table and said that the dishes were ready. This is pretty much how I felt when I read this book. Do you think Wen Qing is good to read? It's pretty good, just as refreshing as the salad, but I went into your barbecue branch for the barbecue, not for the dozens of kilograms of vegetable salad!

There are so many young people in Jiangnan, and md is so pretentious that it makes no sense The essence of a novel is a story. Too much pretentiousness makes the story not flow smoothly, which makes people feel tired.

Too literary, this is a novel not a prose

I have read more than fifty chapters now and I feel that the network administrator sister is more likable than the senior sister.